It took me more than 3 hours to complete this story but I did it!! I completed it in one sitting!! Yippie!!
LEt me introduce myself... I am Vishesha... frnz here call me Vish. I don't think we have ever interacted but I am here from a long time.
I was flipping the pages of forum to read a new story n there I read ur title... Initially I thought it's Appy's story which she wanted someone else to continue n hence u r updating it but than I read the prologue n I realized its a new story... The prologue itself was so gripping that I decided to start the story... My plan was to pass 30 minutes before the my usual coffee timing... But ur story dint let me leave my sit n I missed my coffee... Well now u owe me one... I am not fussy when it comes to coffee so normal nescafe will work for me.!!😆
Coming to the story... I loved it. In this forum I have read different shades of Kalpi but this shameless was truly new for me... While starting the story I was expecting as usual a strong Kalpi who can fight with her emotions well but here I got the Kalpi who is weak in love.. The one who can give her everything for being with her love... She is strong in her own way.. She knows how to hide her emotions but then she knows how strong her love is and she can do anything for it... I like the fact that Kalpi is still there inside KJ.. Her playlist... OMG!! I really laughed a lot n now I am certified as mad roomie due to this forum guys!! While reading FFs on this forum I had given variety of emotions.. like blushing while reading Charu/Priya's FF... Laughing while reading yours and Aru's... Looking with excitement while reading Appy and raz's... Thank God my parents are not here else they would have taken me to the psychiatrist!!😉
Well ur Rags is unique too.. He is not as arrogant as I am used to see him in maximum FFs... I like him here as well but as everyone knows... Kalpi is my fav character and hence m bit biased towards her.
About RagNa separation.. I agree both were wrong at their place but I feel Rags should apologize first... Kalpi dint trust him because her trust was broken few seconds ago... Maya was her best friend... I think she trusted her the most and hence shared her felling with her but she got the biggest shock of her life by her betrayal... At that time, she was not in right frame to trust anyone and hence she blamed Rags... Rags have to understand her feelings.. Though he was just repeating her accusations but he need to understand how hurting they were and she was already devastated.
I just hope that u update it soon.😊