RAGNA SS :MY DESIRES FOR YOU-part16-pg:124 updated 15/5 - Page 8

OMG 😳 the sweetest most beautiful update. The fire is burning on both sides. Rags and kalpi are both attracted to each other. That pakhi 😡 but oh little kaiira 😛 she is so sweet and kalpi her bonding beautiful 😛 please update soon.

Stella,

Wow,loving Rags-Kalpi attraction already! Pakhi is a vamp here.Scared the poor child, wonder what role she'll have in Kaira and Ragna story.Loved Raghav's imaginations 😳 But you ended the part here! 😭 When will you update now? Curious to know what happens next.

😆 🤣 sorry but my naughty self just had to mention this Stella . U and ur naughty mind made me do it. 😆 just wondering if rags loins are tightening just at the thought of kalpi what will happen when he touches her ... They'll burst 🤣 oh and not to mention him imagining touching her soft moons 😆 what happened to the sun😳 😆

Awesome update Stella 👏 loving the bond between kaira n Kali...so raghav from the start itself attracted to her.. lol he forgot dat he s naked infront f her so busy staring at her haa 😆 rags n kalpi both r traveling in same boat.. .Both f them desperately wanna see each other 😳 wats without dis pakhi scaring little kaira Chudail she s 😡 good dat kalpi gave her back answer dats nt enough fr her...awww Atlas finally rags reached home waiting to see his soon-to-be-family..
Continue soon dear waiting ki wats gonna happen 😉

You're an aweosme writer! Loved everything about this update! The conversation between Mrs Rizada and kalpi !! Man that woman have some nerve!! AT least Kalpi knows where she stands with her and kaira!! And wow!! Rags already captured by Kalpi's innocence and beauty!! This is amazing!! Loveing the journey!! Even rags wants to make this little doll feel wanted and loved!! It's so sweet this relationship between both!! One has fallen already and the other is awe struck LOL Kalpi can't belive that Rags will ever feel somethin for her!! Oh how I love it!!

I'm loving the bond that Kalpi is forming with Kaira
Kaira is opening up to Kalpi and she is enjoying herself which every child should...
Oh no! The bitch by the name of Pakhi came like a dark cloud over Kalpi and Kaira
I hate the way she spoke to Kalpi and question her about Kaira as if she knows a thing about raising a child. I love Kalpi response to her. The nerve of this witch... She should stay in her limit as Raghav "neighbor" and nothing else...
Aww I like the way Raghav can't stop thinking about Kalpi, although he is attracted to her physical attributes he is most definitely affected by her beauty, innocent, and nurture side... In short she is the total package 😉 Raghav saying he can't wait to go home to his "two" girls was amazing ;)
I love the entire chapter. U is a fabulous writer

You have written superb story so far. I love the flow. And u wrote another one I am going to look for now ! U r an amazing writer 😊

Beautiful update
I hate pakhi, little kaira afraid of her
What a woman she is and the way handle handle kaira its admirable
You are good writer dear and whatever you talk about ashna fans is true , we don't have any right to judge anyone's personal life.

hi stella how r u & y didn't u pm me from onwards pls pm me & accept my buddy request pls ..