The Inevitable Beginning: RagNa SS,EPILOGUE, Pg-132,21/1/17 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
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btw ..u have missed my last comment & I am seriously expecting a reply 😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mariee

Charu I am really really sorry for not dropping in a comment ...I'll pakka do it for the next update. As of now consider my untyped comment a blend of the comments I have liked 😆

Hehehe...just kidding. I loved this update re... & as always u have again ended up being the unconquerable queen of writing romance ekdum perfectly ...na kam na zyaada !!
Lo kallo baat ...isse kehte hai update 😆
This kalpi ...thoughtful .. She impressed me re ...
& Raghav ke toh kya kehne ...I like all of em ... & tere wale toh as always awesome hote...
Continue soon
I Noe...this Tim my comment was not DAT good ...so I suppose let's apply the previous wali deal again...the Blend of comments wali.😉

Love Maru


Hi Marushkaa, sorry for not noticing your comment earlier! I may have skipped it while replying to other comments. The delay is fine, at least you could make it,😃 Coming from you feedback is always special, 😃 Romance Queen! Hai! 😳title se dar lagta hai! 😆 how to show romance in different ways? LOL. scary thought. This Kalpi impressed you? That's good to hear because the Kalpis of your FFs are always awesome.😃 Thanks for liking Raghav also.😳😃 LOL, deal is on! 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh wow!! 👏
Before I start.. I can see the end of your dream but what about the start and the middle?.😛

I am really loving this Story... The way you described both their feelings, the yearning, yet the battle going on within her.. I can actually *feel* it...

And yes your scenes are getting a wee bit little more hmm hmmm but you have a long way to go!!

I can't wait to read more.. How will Rags convince her? And how are VimLa going to be the kabab me Haddis?

Loving this Charupoo hugs...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update dear...loved it🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Charuuu!!!!!!!!! Your update has taken away my breath completely .Sensuosly elegant 👏 You are the chupi Rustom of romance .😳 😳 Muah sweet n great going 😊 And my name is Arthuna
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Posted: 10 years ago
Brilliant Charu! It was awesome as usual. Both Raghav and Kalpi are fighting their feelings. They don't know what to think of this sudden development in their relation. Kalpi is still worried about the difference in their social status and the fact that people will name her 'gold digger'. But at the same time she's enjoying his care, his love , his touch...

Raghav is still not aware that what he feels for her is love. Though he has never felt like this for any other girl, he is trying to figure out what it is. Sammy is so sure that what Raghav and Kalpi share is love and he's trying his best to convince Raghav of the same but telling him to approach Kalpi in a more friendly way so as not to scare her off.


I like the way you entwine the past and present in the story. Them reminiscing the whole thing together is so romantic. You are doing a fabulous job sweetheart! 👏 ❤️


PS: Did it actually snow at your end?
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Posted: 10 years ago
😭 plzzz 😭 update 😭 Dida 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Please update next part dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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just complet reading update
wl unres today or atleast tomarrow eod pakka charu.😳
Again sorry for late cment😒
unres
as per promiss unresing as soon as possible 😃

kalpi is asking her mother y she is in home coz her dream broken 😆😆

kalpi is remembering their romantic nights and blushing hard. She too enjoy every touch and concern of raghav but still fear of their indiferences making her push all this love and affection she is pulling herself away from raghav and in that she is lost in her world, it didnt go unnotice by her mother.😕

she wanted her own tym to think abt her new found relation but tym seems dnt want to make her wait and give her chance to think much, she bump on raghav and again lost in her own love world with raghav😳 raghav call her beautiful and kalpi become in daze with his words 😛

kalpi is trying her best to get away from him while raghav is trying make her all his😉 raghav understand she is so much worry something is bothering her he took opportunity of their early arrival of office and ask her all this. kalpi doesn't have more courage to loss him so she hug him like there is no tomorrow but sammy interrupted them.😆

kalpi finally voice out her feelings and her fear, and before raghav can voice out his feelings kalpi distance herself from raghav 😔

raghav try his best to make her understand what he feel for her and how she important she for him, though he still dnt know whether he loves her or not bt he know, he is really feeling strong liking for her. and at last all goes vein, when sammy give him some love mantra and is ready to make her all his again 😳

superb update,👏⭐️
curious to what happen next, what kalpi's aai baba did 😕😕

ps m too much late this tym i know bt i was bsy and one more thing i took my alone tym to read and comment on your's. maaru and vishu's update, so this i happend. sorry charu to put u on waiting 😭😭😭 dnt get angry on me 😒
Edited by Sh0Nali - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyyylooo charuuu..
Hayeee.. wenevr I see u posted d update.. I'll be lyk " get ready to get lost into ragna dreamland" sooo much I njyyy readng ur updates.. ❤️ the way u explain every minute feelngs of them, were superbbb dear.. I totally loved it!!!
Umm dnt mind fr dis short comment n fr d late too 😳 as im nt active on IF properly cuz of ths clg and then festivals and nw marriages nw im really hoping that I 'll be free frm all these things 😆

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