The Inevitable Beginning: RagNa SS,EPILOGUE, Pg-132,21/1/17

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Raghav is simply the best, so caring and loving I wish every guy was like him lol
Aww my Kalpi is too shy, I love the way she blush just hearing Raghav voice. Raghav getting Kalpi to call him by his name was amazing. Uff... His lip bites 😛 I can only imagine
I like how he was explaining everything and telling Kalpi what to do for her hangover
And him giving Kalpi a half day is a plus ;)
Oh wow! The way Raghav was admiring Kalpi from head to toe was hot, I mean that was a intense checking out session lol. They way RagNa hide their emotions sometimes from each other is behind me. My gosh the will power of these two people. They are a match made in heaven and hopefully Kalpi realized that sooner. Oh no! What perfect timing that girl Ayesha has 🤢 right at the right moment RagNa was about to shared their second kiss she came like a hurricane... Kalpi is hurt but I like that Raghav noticed the change in her demeanor even though she tried to hide it so well
Raghav coming to talk to Kalpi and Kalpi trying to leave on her own and then Raghav literally carry her to his car was superb ;) like Kalpi even I love his angry side of Raghav 😉
Love their car conversation and Raghav telling Kalpi what she meant to him was beautiful
I love Raghav honesty about his feelings for Kalpi
Kalpi breaking down and not accepting Raghav friendship was sad but at the same time I understand where she is coming from... Angry and impulsive Raghav is the best, I love how he just kiss Kalpi and let out his anger lol
Fabulous update, I love the entire chapter

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Vanellope

@Vanellope

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Lovely update Charu.Loved it.

Raghav is confusing the hell out of poor Kalpi,by going all charming,flirtatious on her.For Kalpi he is not the man she had been working for all this time,everything about him had changed or so she thought.

I loved it Charu.This Raghav is pretty much the same as the original Raghav.He knows what he wants & once the realisation hits him he tries to get it at any cost.He likes Kalpi & he made sure to let her know.He cared for her & so he did by calling her up in the morning.That's one of the many attributes of Raghav I love.He never hides his feelings.Loved when he says to Kalpi that their relationship wasn't just a formal one,that of a boss & employee,rather there was much more to it.

Kalpi's confusion is very nicely shown Charu.

I loved the scene in the office Charu.The sexual tension is very well portrayed.The physical attraction is killing Kalpi & Raghav isn't making it any easier for her.Gosh they both want each other that bad.It's refreshing Charu.

This Kalpi is also much the same.Stubborn as a mule.But Raghav know how to deal with her,make her listen,turn things around.

Loved how Raghav finally lets Kalpi know his feelings for her.The girl was shocked.After all she always felt she was this ordinary girl & that The Raghav Singhaniya could have any girl he wanted & that she was invisible to him.She was overjoyed but then she feels an alliance would be near impossible.

Loved how Kalpi was sure what the future is gonna hold for both of them but still wanted to enjoy the present,the moment she had with Raghav.She wanted to bask in the moment,because she knew it wasn't gonna last forever.She wanted to cherish it as a beautiful memory all her life.I loved the scene in the car Charu.

Raghav is still finding it hard wrapping his head around his feelings for Kalpana.Not sure if it's love.So he wants to start off with being friends.Must have come as a shock when Kalpi didn't accept his friendship.That was nice Charu.

Being friends with Kalpi brought him contentment.Loved that part Charu.Raghav is having a hard time trying to gauge his feelings for Kalpi.He didn't know it was love.What he knew though that being with Kalpi brought him happiness,peace & that he never wanted to let go of that feeling.

Loved the update Charu.Loved everything.😳😃 .

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Another amazing update Charu! I'm still amazed by how you write scenes so beautifully that a mere eye locking session can turn out to be absolutely romantic!

Loved Raghav taking care of her, telling her how to rid of hangovers. It was nice to see him asking her to call him Raghav, actually insisting. ... Then he gave a half day off too... Well, who would have thought he could actually do that!

Kalpi was hesitant to face him in office after what happened the other night but she subconsciously dressed to impress him. Loved how he shamelessly checked her out after calling her to the office. He was almost about to kiss her when Ayesha came. Kalpi's insecurity increased after seeing her. She started thinking that Raghav has no dearth of beauties in his life, why would he be interested in her! But he showed her that only she matters to him, not the others. Hope she gets the hint soon.

Loved it Charu and is happy to know that you are extending the story. Glad to know that we will get more dose of ragna

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charvi3

@charvi3

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Charu dear please update next part

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ssna

@ssna

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Wow

read all 3 in 1 go

fab update dear

plz update soon n do pm me.

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: sweet1308
OMG i just love the update👏 rag is so so caring i just love him the way he says those words t kalpi instructing her t get rid of the hangover😳
kalpi effort t dress for his man or must says now husband and let him roving over her n finally he is infront of her requesting her permission t kiss her tempting lips but ayesha entry pull them apart
god kalpi felt sad n start t think she is not that worth for rag n rag is being desperate t talk t her
kalpi wanted t go away from rag but he is a mastermind n stop kalpi in nick time
kalpi start t walk n rag pick her up as his bride😳 n warn her t be seated n she love when rag dominate over her😳 kalpi truely love his lion
rag gets wat he wants hmmm😳 he stops the car n tell kalpi about his feeling n again pull her in his lap touching her legs kissing her beautiful orbs n neck😳
he is such a sweetheart requesting for kalpi t accept his friendship n she denied it
rag kissed her angrily was fair as he is madly in love with her
charu charu i feel the emotion of this update too lovely
big huggies t u🤗
u really a sweetheart❤️ love u dear
oh glad i get more update my wish becomes true lovely lovely
update soon

Oh my my...these days your sweet comments are really surprising me sweetheart. 😃 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 It just struck me I don't know your name. Can you please tell me your name? Sorry for not asking before. 😳 Thanks a lot for loving the update, even I am happy and relieved when readers like the updates. 😃 Big Huggies to you also sweetheart. 😃 Muah. 🤗❤️

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: switymango
yipeee update mil gaya
awesome update Charu...👏👏
Raghav is so caring ...he give her instruction on hangover ...😊 loved there phone cov..
Raghav want kalpi take his name ...😳 office scene is superb dear...raghav roving kalpi...
he kissed her hand & about 2 kiss her lip 😳...but that ayesh is Kabab main Huddi...😡
bcz of ayesh kalpi feel bad ...& this her or raghavs difference 😭...Raghav understand her emotions ...2 good charu...👏 raghav want to talk to her but kalpi want stay way 4 him...😵
Raghav pick kalpi bridal style ☺️kalpi loved her Lion - like demeanor 😳
finally he confess his feeling to her..😳😛... now kalpi is raghavs lap..😉 he give her kisses...😳
he want 2 start there friendship but kalpi is not accept his friendship ..
he kissed her angrily 😉😳
Thnak u 4 update dear..😃 u r superb writer 👍🏼u give past & present update with emotion & feelings 👏
really awesome charu...⭐️ love u dear..❤️🤗
waiting 4 next part...

Hi Swati, how are you dear? 😃 Thanks, thanks and thanks a ton for liking the update. 🤗❤️

Thanks for the compliment. Love you too. 😃

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali
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unres😳
woohoo charu 🤗 it is definitely gud news that u r extending dis fs. & if u going to make it ss still we wil happy, u knw we r lalchi ppl😛 LOL, I love my lalchi readers. 😆 and it certainly seems all of your prayers are working in your favour! I can't seem to finish it even in next update! 😭 😛

Amazing update
wow first tym i read dis flirty raghav who is flirting wid kalpi before proposal. He is taking care of her knowing what exactly kalpi is suffering evn he alowd her half day leave, wow how sweet dis raghav is😳 Thanks for loving this Raghav. 😃

oh, kalpi specialy ready today for raghav and yes it work or it affected raghav😉 he again show his concern abt her health, dats sweet.
He is ready to ask her abt her permision to move ahead with their new found relation. He is getting pulled towards her, bt the grl, ahh..rags frnd interupt them. Their closeness and grls attire affect kalpi very badly, and she start ignoring rags. Yes they both certainly affect each other very much!

Bt raghav is raghav, he is nt living kalpi that easily😃 n here he pick up her forcely made her sit in his car. And he finaly confess his feeling to her and kalpi to accepted she like him, bt her fear of society, their differences stopping her frm taking further step. Bt raghav is nt ready to listen her fulish excuses and he angrily kiss her wich saying her, nothing is going to affect him.😊 Thanks for liking these scenes. 😃

superb update Glad you liked it. 😃

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Charu I am really really sorry for not dropping in a comment ...I'll pakka do it for the next update. As of now consider my untyped comment a blend of the comments I have liked 😆

Hehehe...just kidding. I loved this update re... & as always u have again ended up being the unconquerable queen of writing romance ekdum perfectly ...na kam na zyaada !!

Lo kallo baat ...isse kehte hai update 😆

This kalpi ...thoughtful .. She impressed me re ...

& Raghav ke toh kya kehne ...I like all of em ... & tere wale toh as always awesome hote...

Continue soon

I Noe...this Tim my comment was not DAT good ...so I suppose let's apply the previous wali deal again...the Blend of comments wali.😉

Love Maru

Edited by mariee - 10 years ago

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Aru18
awesme update..
kalpi is feel jelous of ayesha..and raghav he is really sweet..how much he care for kalpi..

kalpi reject raghav's friednship praposal..not fair..usko aisa dost kahi nahi milega..

i love his angry side to..too good..finallt he accept that he attracted towoars kalpi but when kalpi accept that..
continue soon charu..waiting for next
its a really beautiful story

Thank You Aruhi. Glad you liked the update and also Raghav. 😃 LOL, true Raghav ke jaise dost milne mushkil hi nahi namumkin hain.😛 Yes, angry hot man which he is. 😆 Thanks again dear, glad you're liking it.❤️

Originally posted by: Aru18
don't scare charu,...u r to good and doing fab job..fulfill all expectation's already..enjoy u reading laways and u never dispoint us..and everyone agree with me here..i'm sure😃😉👏
love u

Awww...how how sweet you are darling. 🤗❤️ Thanks ton, matters a lot.😃😳❤️