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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
Lovely SS. Wish the cvs of EMA had your brains !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: premap

Lovely SS. Wish the cvs of EMA had your brains !!

don't know about mine bcoz there are amazing writers and i'm nothing in front of them if they had there brains then surely today ema is on top only they need to do is not use there faltu brain
Edited by ....neha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

👏 nice dear.. 🤣 mr kapoor take care of ur kid.. 🤣 nd u kno what when pakhi said ispe to dad ka naam nahi likha hai may be bhai that was suprb dear 🤣 🤣 🤣 cant stop my self 🤣 plzzz update nxt chappy soon waitng

i myself lagughing while writing this and update next chapter tommorow
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: lolor

Hehe...i like raghavs this plan to trouble kapoors & stop engg...

glad u like it but it's not raghav's plan
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Neha I will read it story later dear. Please pardon me cos I don't have time right now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zindgidilse

Neha I will read it story later dear. Please pardon me cos I don't have time right now.

no worries read when u have time
Edited by ....neha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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in an hour
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58

Chapter 6
NOW
Sk - child ???
Which child we don't know about anything or any child
In- are u sure mr. Kapoor that u don't know about any child???We are here to hand over this child to u .
(pointing toward child )
Sk- whose child is this and why we take responsiblity of any child
In- mr. Kapoor mrs. Kundra ( ngo member leader) found this child in garden with this note in which it's wrritten that the child belongs to kapoor family
Pr( cut inspector in middle and say) - what nonsense is this there are many familys in mumbai who surname is kapoor that means this child belong to every one
In- mr. Prem kapoor let me complete we know that kapoor is a big name so do u really think we are here only bcoz of this note we have proof ( and with this inspector hand over an envolope in sahil hand when sahil open the envolope he is hell shocked to react and prem irretatly take the envolpe from sahil hand and find that there are some photos and he stunned to see those photos and in hestate envlpoe fall from his hand then gauri who is silent suspector till now came forward and pick photos on the other hand media who called for engagment record every thing)
Gauri saw that the envolope contain some photos in which sahil and prem put this child on park and say sahil what is this ??
Sahil who till now doesn't utter a single word due to shock compose himself and say nothing to worry gauri ji it's only a trap wait i just call my lawyer he take care this matter
In intrrupt - no use bcoz we have notice to take legal action against u if u don't take care of this child
Sk- inspector it's also possible that those photos are fake and why we take responsiblity
In- mr. Kapoor look at this and hand over a report which state that the photos are original and say further we also have an eye witness mrs. Kundra herself eye witness of this and u know mr. Kapoor ur watchman also state that this child belong to this family and now i don't think u or anyone have any more questions .
Sk - i confess that we put this child in garden but plz listen to me and then tell him entire story
Mrs. Kundra intrupt this time wow mr. Kapoor i must say u are too good in making story first u tell us that u didn't know this child and now u are making a wondurful story do u think we all are fools who trust u
Sk - look plz listen
Mrs. Kundra- what ??? Is really something left mr. Kapoor okk let we assume for a minute that whatever u say is truth then ehy u can't inform police is this humanity to put a small child in park and that too in middle night ???
Let me answer u that why u can't inform police bcoz eithr this child is ur's or ur son
Sahil keep mum bcoz he know that now he can't do anything bcoz media and all big business man are here and of he say something wrong then it only increase there doubt and harm there image
Pr- but inspector
In- i'm sorry mr. Kapoor now till dna test doesn't verify the thing can't do anything
Sk- what???
Dna test but neither me nor prem give any sample for dna test . This child is not our's then why???
( reporter which silently listning there conversation till now start there kbc )
R1- mr. Kappor if this child is not ur's or mr. Prem them why are u not giving approval???
R2- mr. Kappor is this true that this child is either belong to u or mr. Prem???
Sk- listen this is al...
( but another reporter intrupt )
R3- mr. Kapoor why u left the child alone in park????
Enough prem scream
( but before he start any drama sahil stop him)
Reports - answer our question's mr . Kapoor why are u silent ????
Then a reporter csme near raghav and ask him
Rp- sir anfer this revelition are u goimg to engage with pakhi kapoor
R- i trust kapoor family but till noe dna reports doesn't verify this i post pone this engagment
Kapoors are hell shoked and palki leaves from there and kamala follow her
In- so now mr. Kapoor are u ready for test or we take legal action against u
( due to media , there image and importantly raghav's statement prem and sahil get ready for test neetu leave from there so that she call there lawyer and ask solve this matter but there lawyer said that he can't helpthem now and they don't try to call them again on other hand prem and sahil also hard to solve this matter but of no use bcoz they don't know a thing that each person who help them to solve this matter are purchased someone paid them so that kappoors not get rid from this situation and those who are loyal to kapoors threat very badly some goons threat them and now they have no option left the only way is to take care of child till dna reports doesn't come)
Sk- okk we are ready to take care this child till dna reports doesn't come
In- u better do this otherwise we ...
I hipe u understand
Sk - don't worry inspector we take care this child and we know that the result come in our favor only but after that also kapoor industries complete every need if this child his all expensises but obly for sake of humanity ( his main motive is to improve there image in media but a failed attmpt)
( with this inspector and all members of ngo leave from there and after there prem in anger leave the place after that sahil came near raghav and ask him to not to postpone engagment but raghav refuses and trio leave from there leaving behind shocked kapoors who till now not able to understand a single thing )

AN HOUR LATER
( Singhania mention)
Gauti say to raghav that everything sort out soon and that he don' t take tention and then leave for her room
Sammy and raghav reach in study
S- good job dude i know ur plan is something... But good news is that u are succesful in postpone engagment and now all this are main headlines of tommorow newspaper and there share price also badly affect by this
R- it's not a good news sammy bcoz i'm not behind all this and i plan something else but at main time every thing went wrong

...
So if raghav is not behind this them whom???
Or is it true that the child belongs to kappoors??
...
I know u find it highly illogical but if u don't like this track then i wrap up this track on nxt update plz tell me ur views
Thanks for bearing all by nonsense and sorry for mistakes
Plz tell me u like it or not

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Posted: 11 years ago
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note
i'm planning to introduce a new character namely R.K.
he is a succesful busines tycoon single handsome dashing 30 years old arrogant and linked to kalpi after she left mumbai
he play role of best friemd of kalpi and his biggest support so i introduce him or not
plz tell me fast otherwise i need to think another track for kalpi's return plz answer this i proceed withmajority
no pm today i'm busy in some work sorry
Edited by ....neha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Amazing update dear... I liked this track ...update next part soon dear

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