RagNa (AshNa) TS:Jab we met complete pg 15 1/02/15.

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IThinkALot

@IThinkALot

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Superb!! I am a short stories lover or as marushka said "Aalsi isliye you like short story." 😛 But you've done a great job appy! Keep doing it 😃 and come up with more such stories 😉

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Wonderful ending
I love it :)

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Wow,what a beautiful ending to a lovely TS!!!!!!!!!!

I earnestly wished ,that u could have included one or more updates,from the elevator

incident to their confession.

Do come with such ss/ts/os soon.

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Wow Arpi! What an awesome end!!!! Marvellous! !!!!!!! 👏 I had loved this from the start and been raving about it since then. Can't stop praising you. You are too good sweetie!

Kalpi had turned into a devdas, suffering from Raghavaria! Liked Maya here, persistent enough to make Kalpi share her secret 😉 Looks like Raghav's case was no different. He was dazzled by her from the time he saw her. Loved his proposal. With his dialogues , he barely need anything else. What romantic words! sigh! ...

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Heyylooo appy.. 😃
Guess im too late 😳
Anyways.. I totally loved dis short story 😉 though it was in fast forward mode, it was awesum to read it.. devdas kalpi and paro raghav , gud comparison LOL 😆😆 and the confession scene and their dialogues.. hayeee u reminded me all the ragna scenes.. totally it was fantastic dear..

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Rubina

@Rubz1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Too good ya appy u r such a awesome writer... Tum sab ki stories padh ke lagta hai I'm too bad ya 😉😉😉 just good for nothin i can only read ur stories n love it n cant write...such a duffer i am ... Ne wayz yeh chappy padh ke toh laga i wS watchin EMA...to good ...

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
wt is this appy.. Ek bar mei chappy kyun nahi update kerti hai.. Bahut peetai hogi teri,.. Chup chap chappy cumplt ker nahi to... I'll wait jo humesha kerti hun

Arey baba aise daraao mat.,.. kam time milta hai iss liye aadha likh ke upload karti hu😆😉

Originally posted by: sweet1308
Love is something that happen n sometimes we not aware ragna are. Just adorable
Update soon

Thanks a lot dear.. loved the line in bold..👏 😃

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
suprb incumplt chappy... Nd i didn't used my brain... Meine apna deemag neekala side tabl pe rekha... Phir prdha... So i didn't bheerao my deemag in this incumplt chappy dear... But kya aap apne uss deemag ka istemal kerne ka kasht keregi... Aur apne isss aadhe adhure chappy ko cumplt keregi... Plzzz dhanyewad

lol.. good girl.. accha hua tune woh padhte waqt dimaag nahi use kiya warna tab shaayad meri pitaai pakka hoti😉😆