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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys... As many of u know I was planning to write one more FF on RagNa... So here it is. Today I am just updating the prologue as I have to update my other FFs as well but I will try to write chapter 1st soon. I will try to make this FF bit smaller than others as I do not want to lose it's essence by dragging it unnecessarily...
Just a small request... plz do not mind if RagNa takes a little longer time in this FF as the story is about the murder and the cop and it will revolve around Raghav as I am trying to write it in 1st person from Raghav's pov. This is my first attempt to such story so please bear with my mistakes

Dedicating the prologue to Ragna_Luv aka Kiara as she is the one who promised me to read all of my FFs even if they are crappy... Baby.. I am writing it for u and hope u will be around to give ur valuable feedbacks.


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Imp Note :- Please buddy fairylover_FF for pms... Check the below post to find id.

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Vish
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz Buddy this ID for pms... No pms for this or others FF will be sent to anyone from my above id.
Sorry If I am troubling u but I do not want to send my updates to the person who is uninterested or not from EMA forum. I have to send pms more than once as If has restriction of sending pm to 50 person at once and many members of my buddy list have either left the forum or are from BB8 or it's senseless for me to make extra efforts for them. Hope u will understand.



Note : This id is just for my convenience and not to breach any IF law.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prologue
"Ladies and gentlemen, can I have your attention please? We regret to inform you that due to fog all flights to delhi has delayed. Indigo Flight E-20 from Indore to Delhi, scheduled for departure at 4:00 am from gate c-4, is now scheduled to depart at 9:45 am from gate C-4...Air india flight 239 to Mumbai, scheduled..."

I was so annoyed on the announcement that I dint bother to hear the complete announcement... The chilling winter and tiring day was making it worse for me and I badly wanted to have some coffee... Without thinking twice, I stepped towards the only caf of the airport to grab some hot coffee with a burger. The airport was calmer than usual coz of the timings and all the passengers were either sleeping in the waiting area or playing on their gadgets... I ignored all of them and reached the caf reception but to my annoyance the receptionist was busy in taking someone else's order... I was so anxious to have coffee that I shouted him to order fast as someone else is waiting too... "U r pretty rude.. " he turned around to make a comment on me..

"I am sorry but right now I need my coffee badly n if u don't mind will u make it fast." I said without looking at him.

"A cappuccino for me and a caf mocha for the lady with some extra chocolate." He ordered while taking out his card to pay.

I looked around to find another lady whom he was referring to but to my amusement I was the only lady around him... To add to my surprise he had ordered my favorite beverage in the exact way I wanted. I lifted my head to see who he was and I was surprised to see none other than my childhood friend "Raghav Singhania" smiling at me... To my disbelief after 3 years he was standing in front of me with the same charming smile which was enough to flatter me... he never knew that I had a secret crush on him but never expressed it coz of the awesome bond of friendship we shared... Now he is a sincere and honest CBI cop and I am the same boring writer whose world revolves around books and laptops... The best thing in our friendship is the bond which we share with each other... We are still the same old friends who are not in touch but when meet can share almost all of our secrets without blinking an eye...

"U still remember my taste?? Well... I am impressed." I said while hugging him.

"How can I forget the coffee which screwed my nights... How can someone forget Vish and her famous coffee addiction.." He said amiably..

"Ohh ya offcourse... I still remember the days where we used to roam on roads to find any open coffee shop at late night. By the way how are u??"

"Hot and Sexy." He winked... I was amused to see the same old spunk in Raghva which was lost somewhere after Anjali's death... Anjali was not only his wife but his life, she was his love and our best friend. Their wedding was the happiest day of his life and her death was his biggest lost... The only hope of him recovering from the loss was Megha... his daughter who was 1 year old when her mother died...

"Someone is looking different... Is it happiness for hogging the headlines of all prime newspaper or something else??" I asked him.

"The Prem Kapoor murder case was indeed complex but I am glad I cracked it and managed to send the accused to the jail but... " He said seriously.

"But what??"

"But it broke several hearts...In my entire life I had never seen such complex relationship and the web of lies among them. In whole this while my eyes were struck on one person who was suffering among all this but to my shock... She was..."

"One second... not like this. I would like to know the complete details... It can be the perfect story for my next novel isn't it??"

"Novel?? R u crazy??"

"Yes I am... n now u start from the beginning and dare u skip any point."I said excitedly and dragged him to the corner sit of caf so that no one can disturb us... I sipped another cup of coffee and told him to proceed.


P.S. : Please hit like and give honest comment...

Edited by fairylover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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resh😳
dnt kill me m stalking u😆
m first n dat too on my vishu darling's new ff
unres
haila m i dreaming? Vishu, u enter urself in ff🤗 n dat too an novel writer, plus raghav singhania's childhood frnd to whom u hv crush😆 ye to full on surprise mila😃 waise if posible muje b milvana apne childhood frnd se😉

superb start, m getting so engrossed in dis ff. U involved all my darling frnds in dis ff, 1st vishu u urself, later anjali aka my md, n last megha dat our forever fabulous megs, love u vishu for dis❤️ m mising RK gang😭

prem killed? Aila dis is first ff wer vishu is nt thinking abt premna😲
n rags send murderer to jail also. Wow dis is amazing to read. CBI cop n novel writer story. Love the convo btwn childhood frnds as well as writer n cop convo. Lastly u threat raghav "dare u skip any point." 😆

m geting too much excited for 1st part. Waiting for kalpi's entry

p.s. M in love with dis ff😳
Edited by Sh0Nali - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow is he telling to YOU..!!
I'm excited for the new story n guessing it would be as thrilling as your other stories are

Looking forward for it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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great ...interesting...& not only u but I also hv cush on hotieee.. 😉 😉
& u made him talk to u??? ur frnd ????...lucky 1 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Whoa.. !! A new ff.. cool
The plot seems very intrestng with a mix of suspense in it..
And vish.. u dint tel me dat he is ur childhood frnd n a secret crush..😛😆 waiting fr d updates nw..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hahaha famous rs telling story to vish super plot yaar
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Not just Kiara but her crazy sis aka moi also will read any crap you write...oops correction because I know you wont write crap!!!!
And even if it is crap I probably wont know because either I am in love with you or your ff's!
It better be the second option else my husband will find me wierd and kick me out of our house😆

Bring it on!
Prem murder case???!!!!! You already killed PRem!!!!!! Oh no???

Anjali????? One yr old daughter??? Wow!!!! And Vish ka coffee mania???

Oh my god is it you in the story???? LOL

I am gonna have some fun!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Vish this is brilliant!! I love it! 10points for originalty!!

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