BONUS-TRACK THREAD:The Marriage Story: RagNa FF,Thank You, P-45,7/4/16

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sonali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

superb update charu🤗
wow ragna reception arrieved, ragna r dressed in peacock colour. Kalpi's dress is amazing.ragna r cmforting each other bfore going to reception area, and to help them come their frnds sammy maya.

Pakhi finaly start undstnd what is real face of her parents. They r nthing bt only want money. N evn real value of kamla maa, she got to knw.

Ragna dance r superb, i imagined there dance.
Pakya is undstnding pakhi very well n trying his best to make her easy n smile. Evn he trying his best to clear mu btwn kamla n pakhi.

Sahil😡 he talk so much abt kalpi n ragna relation. Bt alas rags hw cn he tolerate sahil's noncense. N here he goes, show sahil his own place. With making proud of himself in frnt of all ppl, saying he forgive sahil😆

kalpi try her best to clear all mu btwn pakhi n kamla. N here also rags stand by kalpi's side.

Terrace ragna scene is fabulous. All terrace ragna scene are just come in mind. Amazing ragna moment.

Prem arrieved, hope he wl nt be more hurdle for ragna.
Superb update

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Ushoshi

@_TheBlackRose_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

So Prem returns... Will he be positive or negative here? Excited to see more of him 😉

Update soon

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Natasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

As usual Raghav is awstruck by his Kalpi beauty and grace :)
Love Kalpi outfit, it's so beautiful
It's so stupid and dumb of Sahil to once again underestimate Raghav lol
I like the way Raghav handle the whole situation. For the most part he was calm and compose and the best part he make Sahil look like a complete jackass lol
Hmm... This Pakhi when will she learn that Raghav was never interesting in her ever
After everything Kalpi still tried to make Pakhi see the truth of her and kamla relationship and tried to fixed it. It was nice of Kalpi to do that something she don't have to... I hope Pakhi listen and mend her ways and not turn out like her good for nothing parents.
Aww I love RagNa romantic moment outside in the rain
Uh oh! Prem is back, I wonder if it's good Prem or evil Prem 😆
Outstanding update, I love it.

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi
i hate pakhi..😡

Okay, no problem in hating her. But baaki ki update??? 😭

Originally posted by: lolor
awesome update...
love the way raghav taking revenge...& also trying his best not to hurt kalpi...
now pakhi is up to what????

Thanks dear. 😊 Pakhi is upto a mission! 😆

Originally posted by: Asyalover
lovely updt but wht is the kapoor siblings upto now

Thanks dear. rest you'll know in further updates. 😃

Originally posted by: sweet1308
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Love the way rag is taking revenge n kalpi trying t make pakhi understand the situation kalpi thanking god for rag n their sweet romantic moment n wat that p is up to plZ may wat come ragna should be together

Thanks for liking it. I also dislike making Ragna suffer too much. Hope you'll like it ahead! 😃

Originally posted by: niru04
Wonderful update

Thanks Niru dear.

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari
nice update Dida... Nd plz don't say dat pakhi is plang sumthng wth prem...

Thanks sweetie. yes, Pakhi maybe planning something with Prem!!!! 😆😛😳

Originally posted by: anjyy
Nice update... Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..

Thanks dear. You'll get next update on Monday. No mention for the PM. 😊😃

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Saumya

@SamBricka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

plzzz... Upsate nxt chappy soon Dida...

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Let me apologise to you first for my delayed comments. Paarth ( my son) was not keeping well and was clinging to me all the time. So didn't come to the forum for the last few days. As I was typing my comments I got your pm for the second update, so thought of replying together. Hey Kiara. it is perfectly fine, I do wait for your comments. But I don't mind late comments. Family comes first. Hope your son is fine now. Give loads of love from my side to him. 😃 🤗 ❤️
Part 11:

Loved Kalpi's reaction when Gauri slapped Raghav. She knows a mother has every right to punish her son but a wife couldn't see her husband getting a slap for something that's not his fault.

Repeating what I said in my earlier comments. Loving this Raghav who couldn't see tears in the eyes of the woman he loves. Also for not punishing Pakhi for no crime of hers.

Kalpi has handled Gauri in a very mature way after her outburst and assuring her that she will always be around to take care of her.

Pakhi overhearing her parent's conversation and she gets to know the true face of them. Kapoors are planning to use Kalpi to destroy Raghav.

Kalpi visiting office for the first time after marriage. Everyone could see the happiness on Raghav's face.

Hope the new doctor helps Gauri come out of the shock and trauma soon. Then she can see that what her son did was the right thing to do and she stands by him and Kalpana.
Yes this version is closer to what everyone would have wanted in a perfect scenario. Hoping everyone would like it ahead too.

Part 12:

Loved Kalpi's dress. Nice combination of peacock blue and sea green. The choli you have shown is not sea green but ivory though.

Neetu is so disgusting and desperate to ask her daughter to befriend rich men. . Yeew. So typical of Sahil to create a drama at the party. But Raghav Singhania is always prepared, he should have known that. Loved how Vithal kept quiet knowing Raghav will handle it in a more mature way.

Nice of Kalpi and Raghav to talk it out with Pakhi and made her realise everything. Also she had understood by then that she was in a dreamland and was not seeing the signs till now. Also nice of Pakya to lend support to Pakhi.

Lovely ragna romantic scene at the terrace with our anthem ' tum hi ho'. Terrace is always special for them as you pointed out. Lovely to see the much in love couple enjoying time together amidst all the tension.

Wonder why Pakhi called Pakya to meet her? Prem is back. Is it a sign of something bad that's going to happen?

I know my comments are not upto the mark as I typed in a hurry but hope you understand.

yes, terrace was always so special for RagNa always. Love their moments their always especially with tum hi ho! I seem to have some obsession with using this song! 😆
Once again, do tell me how is your son now. Thanks for taking out time despite being busy and disturbed.Thanks a lot for your feedback on both Part-11 and Part-12. Sorry for short reply. But want to update next part soon.Love you always.

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: appyK
Kalpi's lehenga is really awesome.. Fabulous update.. With RagNa anthem...

Loved Sahil' s intentions diced and chopped off..

If you are planning PakhYa then fabulous.. She'll get to stay with her kamla maata and Sammy ko milegi Maya..

RagNa romance beautifully brilliant as always..

So Prem is back.. Liked the caring side of his.. (Cvs never showed it)

Continue soon.. Eager to read more..

Thanks Arpita. 😃What I am planning you'll get to know in next update, at least a glimpse of it! 😛 Thanks a lot for your sweet as ever feedback.😃

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: laavanya4u
A beautiful update.

What a grand reception it was!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And Kalpi's was an exceptional piece.I really liked her flowing anarkali type lehenga.

If Sahil kapoor has a dirty mind.then Raghav has got a shrewd,sharp ,devil mind.

If that oversmart Kapoor thinks,that Raghav will get carried away by his reception leaving behind his vital enemy to roam around freely and spoil his own reception was a great misconception by the dirty Sahil Kapoor.

When you are digging out a pit for others,you will be the one to fall into it is a saying.And Raghav had correctly applied it on Sahil Kapoor.

Is Pakhi is trying to actual be friendly with Pakhya or something else brewing up in her mind to

punish Kamla,Kalpi And Raghav with the support of Prem.

WAITING FOR THE SUSPENSE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for liking the reception and Kalpi's lehenga. Also glad and relieved that you liked Raghav and Sahil scenes. I was not too sure of how those had turned out to be. 😳 Tried to show a strong and clever Raghav, which was there in earlier days and I loved him so-so much. 😃

Pakhi??How can I disclose the suspense now! 😛😆 Hopefully you'll get some of the answers in next update which I will after giving replies to all readers.

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: sweet_aditi
awesome update charu 👏
RAGNA moments were just aww.. while reading terrace scene i was badly missing RAGNA/ASHNA... remembered der confession vala episode 😭

I kno i might sound weird but i really felt bad for pakhi.. actually me 2 surprised how can I sympathize with pakhi?? but don't kno why i felt bad for her maybe u had written pakhi's emotions in such way that I could feel dat.. Sahil n neetu r sin on name of parenthood 😡 just hoping pakhi won't turn into negative psycho vamp.

I m just loving dis bonus track thread 😳 whatever I always wanted to see in show I m getting in dis story 😃

update next part soon 😃

Thank you so much Aditi dear. 😃 Glad you liked RagNa terrace romance.😳 I miss AshNa/RagNa also so-so much. Wish someone could use this scene on them in a show.😭

LOL, felt bad for Pakhi. I am happy. 😆😃 It was meant to make readers feel that way. At least someone felt this, so I am happy. 😛

Aww...thank you so much dear. I am trying to make this closer to the perfect version which readers wanted to see. But, cannot work simultaneously on both versions. It is very tiring and distracting. So, this version shall wrap up pretty soon.

Next update will hopefully be today only, after I give replies to all the readers.