BONUS-TRACK THREAD:The Marriage Story: RagNa FF,Thank You, P-45,7/4/16

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snacky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

all in one package... fantastically written... awesome... wonders

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mattieram

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

So Pakhi was pretending to be in with her father. Awesome!

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Saumya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

thnku thnku thnku so much for updatng dida muaaahhh muaaahhh muaaahhh ... Wese dida snow man uncle ke karan bijali aunty ghar nahi aa paa rehi thi bari pareshani de rehe the snow man uncle ... Ab kesi hai bijali aunty dida... 😉

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MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Amazing amazing amazing 👏 👏 omg u had me scared for a few moments. But when pakhi and prem turned on sahil I finally took a breath. Thank god all worked out well.

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Saumya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

nice Dida humesha ki terah... Thnk god raghav sahi samay pe pahunch gaya... Prem nd pakhi are not bad wo sach mei change ho gaye i m happy... Plzz kill sahil, neetu nd that kam**na goon... Kalpi ko lese dekh reha tha... Wish mei usko maar pati... Plzz update nxt chappy soon

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Anjali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

Fantastic update...

Pakhi was pretending to b with her father..

Continue soon...

Thanks for pm..

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shoonya9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

What a twist and rewrite charu! Whenever u r nervous u end up giving best of it creation, so won't say to remain nervous aalways, chill u can b equally best wen relaxed.

The abduction of Kalpi, turnaround of Pakhi, foul plans n goons of Sahil all was too scary n touring to complete reading update ASAP. So now u r making mmystery and thrill too ur forte. Good going keep it up.