BONUS-TRACK THREAD:The Marriage Story: RagNa FF,Thank You, P-45,7/4/16 - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sh0Nali

resh😳
stalking u😆
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charu🤗 superb update

kalpi is helping her dada and vahini and suporting them to face kamla and vithal. She is justifying pakya n pakhi's decision to her parents so that they wil accept n bless this newly wedded couple. And yes kamla ready to accept them and happy to have her daughter as her DIL, while neetu and sahil reject her as their own child.

All is happening suddenely which badly effected on gauri. She thinking raghav is not undstanding her pain n nt doing anything to gv justice to mr singhania. Bt sumwer she is also craving for her son's love n it showed frm her cooked. On the other hand, raghav is trying his best to take his revenge for her mother's pain. Bt still, he is nt getting any love and cr frm his own mother wich he mising frn last 15yr.

Kalpi is doing her best to make evrything normal btwn mother n son.

Pakya is trying to b as normal and frank as he cn. Bt is pakhi realy doing all dis for good or she has planned with her so called brother prem or may be with her parents?

So that car following is also pakhi's plan and its sure dat kalpi's kidnapping is done by pakhi only. Hope kalpi is fine and safe. Hope rags wl find her very soon.
Superb update.
Hush big update, big cment. Done finalny.



🤗 Thanks a ton Shonali darling. 😃 Glad you liked the update and I love long comments. 😃 You know, I had not planned all this as a suspense and mystery, it just happened and now I will neither confirm nor negate your suspenses. 😆 I am nervous like ages for any FF! LOL. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: abxetz

O god ye zaroor us poooki ki plan hoga 😡 Ragnar ko separate karnaikeliye.ye prem or pakhi na kabhi sudhar nahi sakthe.ab kya hoga 😭 interesting update 👏


No comments for that! 😳 Thanks for liking it. 😃

Originally posted by: bricka.tiwari

nice update Dida... Pakhi is planing sumthng na... Omg kalpi nd pakhi kidnapd... Nahi... God plzzz save kalpi... Ye kapoors ka kaam hai i kno that gth kapoors... Oh no..plzz dida jaldi kalpi ko rags ke pass le aao... Jaldi... Aapne to meri heart beat brha di... Plzzz update nxt chappy soon.. Plzzz... Waitng..


Something maybe fishy!!! let's see what! This track wala story is ending in 2-3 more updates. so don't worry everything will be good. Happys Endings! 😃


Thanks dear.

Originally posted by: swaralohakare

Kalpi kidnapped ,what will Raghav do😕 .
eager to read next part.🤗

Thanks for your feedback. 😃 🤗 Kuchh toh karega Raghav! 😆

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

Resss!!! Big smile

unress
heyylooo dear..
update was superbb n becumng too intrestng.. as the story is turng into a suspense plot .. it ll be really fun to read lyk dat.. so is pakhi n prem r behind all these things..?? cuz nw we cant expect sahil or neetu to do such things as they r in lack of money n contacts..
and ragna scenes were awesum.. n raghav's dialogues became an emotional one!
do update soon.. wannt to knw the culprit..Tongue

hello dear. Thanks for liking the update. I'd really not planned it as a suspense!! Don't know how it happened! 😆 But now that it has happened, I'll have to keep up with it. 😛 Glad you liked Ragna scenes.😃




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet1308

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Unres
Lovely update I was right those kapoors will never change in life n ragna moment was emotional n awesome n that pakhi would pay definitely
Lovely now rag will be in his angry avatar t make them pay trying t harm his life n wife kalpi
Update soon


Thanks for your feedback dear. Glad you liked Ragna moments.

Originally posted by: nandinidavid96

WOW...wonderful update👏 Am looking forward for some dashu moments in the upcoming chapters and the return of roaring Singhania

WOW, 😃 an awesome writer liek you appreciate and I become super happy. 😃 Thanks a lot and now I am nervous! 😆😳 Waise please update your FF also na please. 😃

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Interesting charu! So now from romance you have moved to thriller and suspense? LOL

I love this too!!!

Thanks Priya dear. LOL, it just happened yaar. I'd not planned it! n when I know I am not good or at least as good as Vish in suspense and thriller. it made me hell nervous when I realised what has happened! 😆 Thanks for liking it. 😃

Originally posted by: lolor

nice update...is it pakhi???? I m not sure... 😕

You will know about it in further updates. thanks for your feedback dear.

Originally posted by: charvi3

Awesome update dear...

Thanks dear. 😃

Originally posted by: niru04

Nice update.pakki upto somethingn.a.?

yes, she is!!! 😉

Originally posted by: Cinderella81

Awesome update. So Prem and Pakhi not changed they r troubling Ragna.

Maybe! 😃 Can't say much. 😳 Thanks for liking it. 😃




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: laavanya4u

Excellent and very emotional update.

My guess was very much right.The Kapoors shed crocodile tears before Raghav And Kalpi
AND the psycho had effectively fooled the dumb Pakhya in the name of love and friendship
and married to take revenge against the Jadhavs.
And Prem must be behind the kidnapping of Kalpi and the psycho for sure.Psycho had to be
kidnapped alongwith Kalpi so that no one suspects her and she will earn some sympathy too.
So,Our smart had failed this time,in recognising the Junior devil ,evil Kapoors.But after this
kidnapping attempt,even Kalpi must have learnt her mistake of her inability to analyse a person
at the right time.
LET THE NEWS REACH TO RAGHAV SOON ,SO THAT PREM CAN TASTE HIS OWN MEDICINE SOON .
WAITING EAGERLY FOR SOME STUNTS,PUNCHES AND SLAPS IN THE NEXT UPDATE
BY RAGHAV SPECIALLY FOR PREM.


Thanks a lot.

Kapoors will always be Kapoors na! 😛

Hmm, no comments! Don't know how and why this has ended up becoming a suspense. LOL. n now my hands are tied! 😆

You'll have to wait a bit for Raghav's punches and all. But I'll certainly try to give them! 😃

Love your comments as always, being so encouraging and loving. Love you. ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjinie

I really hope Kalpi is found, and hope they find Paakhi's phone, and trace her calls,

Thanks for your comment and feedback. Don't worry, no story ends in my FFs unless it is a happy ending!

Thanks dear.

Originally posted by: anjyy

Nice update..

Wat pakhi is upto...?
Continue soon..
Thanks for pm..

Thanks dear for liking it. Pakhi is certainly upto something, but what you'll know later on.

Originally posted by: Asyalover

omg...ths soo shocking...supiscious... surprising and totally mysterious.

Thanks! I am taking this as a compliment. 😃

Originally posted by: Rubz1234

Too good chahat updae soon..

Thanks dear.

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_

Things are a bit dodgy...

Why do I feel Pakhi's upto something? And why do I feel that Prem is also involved?
Kalpi n Pakhi kidnapped... is this a part of her plan?
Final question, Is Pakhi really upto something nasty?
Anyways, awesome update Charu!! 👏


Thanks dear. Ab suspense ban hi gayi hai story toh wahi rehne dena apdega mujhe! 😆 😛



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Kalpi going with Pakhi and Pakya to kamla house was nice
I like how she explain things to Kamla and of course Kamla will agree after all it's her Pakhi baby ;)
Kalpi trying to mend Raghav and Gauri relationship is wonderful
I like how she get Gauri to cook dinner and Raghav recoginizing the taste so quickly was amazing
Raghav broken down was very sad... I wish Gauri understand her son and show him how much she love it. Omg! Is this Pakhi upto no good again??? I thought she had changed for the better but it looks like I'm wrong. Oh no! Kalpi is kidnapped... Raghav will go nuts now
Fabulous update, beautifully written chapter

Thanks Natasha for your detailed comment on each and everything as always! 😃 😳 😃 means a lot to me. 😃 Thanks for liking it too. 😃🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: appyK

Paakhi is such a 😡

Hate her to the core... 😡

Fabulous update... RagNa's sweet understanding without words is awesome..
Eager to read future updates😃


LOL, everyone hate Pakhi. I am also not a big fan of her character! 😆 Thanks for liking RagNa moments and the update. 😃

Originally posted by: Aru18

awesome charu..

hate that pakhi to much..
the 2nd version is also damm good..everything in 1 stry..thrill,love, romance,revenge,suspension.
continue soon dear..waiting

Thanks Aruhi. Glad you're liking this also because I am very nervous for this one also! 😆

Originally posted by: sunyy

Great update. Why do I feel pakhi and prem behind kalpis disappearance? Pakhi being good is a little iffy? Continue soon.

Thanks dear. I am updating soon.

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

Damn!! This was full of all kinds of emotions!! Shocking, for Kamla and vithal to see Paaki and Pakiya married!! Accepting their mrg, Kalpi convincing Kamla to accept marriage!! Wow!! Paaki and Pakiya married and now being friends:))) uncertainty, what the hell?? Paaki?? She planned all this?! To abduct Kalpi?! She wants to die :)) Gauri's love for her son!! Awesome update as usual charupooo:))) this is real action here!! I love it!!

Di, already miss you! 😭Thanks for your feedback dearie sis. 😃🤗❤️

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

read last few chapters in one go.

My head is reeling.
wow... so much has happened and is happening.. full on action pack...
Great job girl.😊

Mini, Mini, Mini where are you girl? Miss your comments! 😭 Maybe you don't like my FFs/updates anymore! 😭 But it is so good to see you here again. 😃 🤗 Thanks for your feedback! 😃



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Awesome updates Charu! You are leaning towards mystery now? Loved it!

Prem and his repentance looked too fake for me... I don't think he can change overnight. Let's wait and watch... I can't believe he hugged Raghav and cried too. LOL, I didn't plan mystery. it just happened and this is making me so-so nervous now! 😆

Raghav's dad's case is in progress. Gauri's doctor is Mrs Khanna! What will they learn from her? You left us hanging there. Didn't mention it afterwards. In next to next update, Mrs.Khanna's mention will come.

Pakya and Pakhi married. Why do I feel Pakhi is using him? He's just a pawn in her hands. She knows he's totally fida over her.
Let's see! 😆
Who's following Kalpi? Another mystery? No more a mystery. it was the police vehicle arranged by Raghav for Kalpi's security/safety.

Kalpi convinced Kamala that Pakya and Pakhi will be happy together . Raghav believed it too, surprising. Why was Pakhi so eager to go to the office on her wedding day? Sounds fishy. ...Can't say anything.

Sweet of Kalpi to make Gauri cook dinner for Raghav knowing how much he looks forward to that. Emotional scene when Raghav had tears in his eyes as he ate the food. Gauri witnessed the whole thing and us in dilemma whether to take revenge or accept son's love. Thanks for liking this scene. 😃

Pakhi is brewing some plans of her own. Was kidnapping drama part of her plan? Sorry! 😭 No comments again.

The car following them were police. So when Kalpi told her that a car is following ,was Pakhi tensed because she was worried whether kidnapping will not be successful? Was she dialling Prem before the goons came? Your comemnts are always much awaited and make me so happy. Thanks a lot for taking out time tor ead and comment when you were very busy yourself. Thanks a ton dear. 😃🤗❤️

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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG!! Charu... That was something...
I am awestruck at your creativity... was thrilling plot you have woven and have written the scenes so vividly... The fear, concerned, shock, dilemma... very well written
Its mind boggling...
👏
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