An OS : Yes I Do !! (R POV 3) 9/12 - Pg 19 - Page 18

Originally posted by: sampa79

Really nice update

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Haaye I never wanted this OS to end Mariee!!!! I love Raghav Singhania!!! And apna Rammmy toh hai hi hit!!!!!

Originally posted by: charvi3

Wonderful update

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

RESSS 😃 😃

unress!!!

heyyylooo mariee dear.. hw many tyms u wanna give me shocked surprises ah..??😛 frst.. by RPOV2 i was lyk on a dreamland thinkng abt it (throwng my books aside instead of studyng) and tadaa.. an update again!! dat too at 5:30..?!! really u r gng mad, due these exams, lyk me lol.😆😆. and at d same process u r givng me a sweet torture by updatng at my exam tym.. conc on exmas or update..??!!!😕 ahahhaah..!!! im managng both..😃 and ppl who r waitng fr tables update ll be silently scoldng me lol😛.. bt dats fyn.. im njyng my update nw.. and im glad dat my comment made u update this part and fr continuing it in a cheeky way.. :P😉

"He knew he was acting like a lovestruck college teen ...but she was worth that change !Observing minutest of expression changes on her face ...the way she widened her eyes while shouting , her small nose crunching a bit whenever she frowned with her forehead lines being visible at the same time. Her graceful hand movements during her convo...as if swaying to some extra melodious music audible only to her. & then ... his eyes landed on her lips as he slightly pursed his own as he gulped."

hayeee hayeee.. (i knw u might got bored to listen the same thing again n again.. i have no choice as im lack of words nw!!) watchng ur love lyk dat.. observing all her cute expressns.. at dat moment it ll be the most sweetest moment fr him.. by taking in her beauty.!!😳😳

" Raghav then managed to shoo away all of them when he aimed a cold deadly stare to the salespeople around clearly indicating "She is my woman !" Every single eye which was looking at 'his' Kalpana in an inappropriate way lowered as they started faking a pretence of work the very next second."

and this part was too good!! cuz of the diff u showed btw jealousy-ness n possesive-ness. he doesnt need to be jealous nw.. he has evrythng includng his love.. so wats d point of being jealous..? bt yes!! fr possesive-ness.. seeng his possesiveness n that deadly glare no one ll dare to look at his love.. and i lykd it!!😆👏

"Today the carnation person seems more lucky than me who is getting her undivided attention.I am gonna hide tha phone of hers once we are home. Warna Pata chale ...main yaha par usse baat karne mein laga rahu aur wo Waha uss fulwale ko daatne mein magn Ho...Raghav from when did u start cracking such Sammy types jokes ?"

this line really cracked me up and i was laughng lyk stupid.😆. the changed raghav singhania.. who actng lyk crazy in love! which was good to read. and dat line.. the moment he saw the ring "blinded fr a split second" though it was funny bt it was kind off apt to dat situatn.. then the platinum thing.. well i can undrstand engineerng ka affect, which wont go easily.. 😉😛

and the most needed push fr kalpi has finally done, by slidng d ring to her, fr which the happiness she felt was vanished within seconds.. which was lyk a hint to raghav dat she is ready nw.. (as u explained) totally perfectt and superbbb!!!!👏😊

"Then grazing his huge hands down her long arms he finally got hold of her waist as he pulled her towards him. Spinning her around he again noticed tears in her eyes as he brushed them off. He had finally accepted his love as also answered her questions. He knew she loved him too.. Uski aakhein ...bataati thi ki vo use chahti hai ...par vo Yeh baat sirf ek baar Uski zubaan se sunana chahta tha" nw i really do wonder hw cum our likes match..??! seriouslyy hw..??😲 cuz im damn sure dat i watched dat scene (in ema) lyk fr almost a 50 tyms and even the rain scene too.. and here it goes again.. im glad u used those dialogues..😃😆 and last ended with a mischievous n beautifull kiss!!!😳😳 hayyeee marieee.. wat an os.. and honestly.. more than os im lovng RPOV's more.. thnx fr an awesumm os dear.. love u..!!❤️🤗

PS: i knw most of the comment is full of the update nlyy.. bt i jus wanna mention few scenes which i loved it.. as result my comment became lengthy hope dats fyn..😛 waitng fr 15th dec nw..coincidences u see.. 😎

Originally posted by: Anjinie

awesome

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi

Thanks 4 gving me lovely story..plez cntinue..😃

Originally posted by: sweet_aditi

read all last 3 updates😃
u portrayed raghav's POV very well 👏

thanx 4 such wonderful os Marie 😃

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Beautiful update
Raghav POV was awesome
I like how he notice every little details of Kalpi :)

Originally posted by: zindgidilse

mindblowing dear...
i wish this pov of ragna go on further...i love these three povs.
raghav claiming kalpana as his in front of sales people was awesome...possessive ragahv...love it.
the caranation wala was indeed lucky than raghav 😆

poor raghav ...caught btw salesman and his blabbering describing ring...🤣 from past hour

and what was that platinum describing thing in ur pov...platinum 78 and blah blah...😕 i was literally confused coz science and me...never meant for each other 🤢...,,at that time i was like...yeh kya bakwass kar rhi hai ladki😆 ...so without giving it a understanding look to ur pov i moved on for further reading😳...coz science samajhna meri baski baat nahi👍🏼.😆...


so raghav finally did an official engagement in his style by slipping ring in her finger at the very moment he has choose that ring.
kalpana surprising raghav in the end was superb.


LET ME TELL U...I ENJOYED UR POV IN RED MORE THAN RAGHAV POV IN BLACK🤣
ESPECIALLY UR WEDDING STUFF🤣

keep writing os❤️ love u MARSH

Originally posted by: ban18

Bas ...enough of torcher !' as he held her by the shoulder. Then pulling her to the centre of the room as they now stood facing a curtained wall as he finally revealed the truth. (The dialogue format of this scene is in K POV if Ull have forgotten) He chuckled at her innocence when she questioned whether he liked Paakhi. Oh ! Silly girl... He decided it to be the time to actually make her realize as to who the girl is as he placed his chin on one of her shoulders & gently entwined his fingers with hers. Then snuggling his head in the notch of her neck he lightly brushed his lips on the smooth skin over there. He had resisted that urge for ages infinite ...it felt so atleast for him. He felt her soft cheek caress his bearded 1 as she had actually moved closer to him. Could this day get better ...his reserved-natured kalpi was no longer shy towards him. As he then snapped his fingers. That's when the curtain uncovered the wall & Raghav pointed in its direaction as he whispered in her ear"I have always been in love with this woman" ahhhummm i don't think i need to write anything else.

it was a nice os! i like such kinda short stories! next story kabhi?? 😛