No pm - last chapter pg62 - 14/02 - destiny entwined - Page 6

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Aww... Fuzz! What are you doing to me girl? I'm in love with you... You are turning me into mush every time you write something. How do you do that!

I loved it! The verdict is unanimous. It's fantabulous!!! Can I kiss you right now? Love you girl!

The story is so awesome , brimming with intense passion. Something as simple as ' feeding each other ' made goosebumps on my body. How can a statement ' one day you will be in my arms and will only be thinking about me' makes you speechless? Loved his birthday gift. And the kiss! He had to stop when he felt his hormones on an overdrive.

I know Neetu had the smile and Kamala , the frown on her face. Why doesn't she like that Raghav and Kalpi are close? Is it something to do with her being the maid's daughter? Or is there something else?

Now you have me addicted to one more story. Gosh , you are too much.

But I still love you

Mwah

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

oh!! yes, this Rags is so Salman Khan of "Maine Pyar Kiya" and "Hum Saath Saath hai " era.

Also Kalpi is reminding me of Amrita Rao from "Vivah",

Those characters were so so beautiful.. quiet, restrained, silent, yet caring, considerate, loving and strong.

Cant wait for this story to unfold.

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Fuzzz!!!!!

You love to keep your reader going cuckoo all the time. I was just getting sane and better and recovering when you had to throw this at my face!!!

And now you wrote out so that you could sleep peacefully but what about us! Hamaari toh neenden ud gayi naaa!??

Originally posted by: vasishna

Wow Angel.. another ff..😃

And as usual even this ff is too diff from the other ones!

N nw even this one ll go into fav list.. I'm lykng this story as it ll be good to read shy kalpi..

I jus hope dat I'll get d updates soon n yeah cumplte ones lol

Originally posted by: abxetz

Oho 1 chapter mai kiss age ke chapter sochkar an muje neend nahi arahahai dear 😉

Originally posted by: b.baheti

Hey Angel firstly nice prologue and super chappy.

So dumbo Pakhi is sister of Raghav. You know what I have actually started liking Pakhi via your SS. In 'When Love Comes Calling' too she is a very sweet friend. 😊

So Neetu is also good and is happy with Raghav and Kalpi as a couple. Hmmm talking about Kamla then she is dumla over here too. Don't wanna talk about her. 😡

So RagNa had their first kiss and this time her gift is tattoo that Ragz has got done on his chest so that she cannot return it. Wow amazing 😳

One humble request or zidd you can say You are an amazing writer dear 5shots se pet bhar jayega par mann nai so kindly extend it to 10 na if possible 😉

Originally posted by: mattieram

I am so hooked, I'm so in love with Raghav Singhania! My son got a tattoo and was not keen on it, now, I love tattoos.

Originally posted by: sugandhii

👏 Awesome update fuzz👏👏⭐️

Ohh... RagNa...😳 in ur stories😳😳

Just loved it...

shy kalpi😳

N raghav u r in my arms n ur attention is still on other😆😆😆

no doubt y I love ur raghav in ur stories...

Love their dinning table scene really nyc😛😳😳

I now neetu stopped kamla saying kalpi does all d work for raghav so definitely she is d one who was smiling n kamla was frowned hmm hope m correct

Vry interesting

complete it soon...

waiting

See d moment I refresh u add something😆😉

Aww Terrace surprise 😳

n paakhi calling him BHAI Awwsh what a reliefff😛

N if paakhi knows about them n she is asking about their wedding date.. then y one mother was frowned😕 now to m sure that one is kamla Dumbla...😡

Finally m going to complete m comment with ur complete update😆

so I was ryt she was kamla who frowned...

gosh she never changed.. but y she doing this may b bcz she is maid n her raghav baba gosh Idk kamlaa😡

Poor kalpi has to return his gift

N he has drawer of full with ur returned gifts😭 poor Raghav😭

Now she is going to meet him...😳

update d nxt part soon...