No pm - last chapter pg62 - 14/02 - destiny entwined

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Guys I am so sorry...
I can hear you all groan... Not another one... The girl has so many ffs pending... Blah blah😉😆

I have decided to make this a very short one... Just five chapters or maybe ten.

DESTINY ENTWINED

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Prologue


Mrs Neetu Singhania is rushed to the private maternity ward as she yells away in agony, screaming for her friend, her confidant... Her maid, Kamla Jhadav. Kamla, fondly called Kamla maa by Neetu Singhania's two sons, Ragav, aged six and Samar, aged three, wobbles along the corridor trying to keep up. Huffing and puffing she enters the ward to hear the doctor say, "Mrs. SInghania, the baby is ready to come out."


"What!", Neetu yells, "she has to wait to more weeks. I am not ready. Kamla where are you?" She calls out, looking around for Kamla. Kamla who is standing quietly by the door catching her breath, says, "Neetu ma'am. It is time. Don't worry." Neetu replies frantically, "but Sahil is not here. Oh gosh. How can I do this without him?"


Kamla smiles, ignoring the pain, she wobbles slowly towards her, caressing her head she says in a calm voice, "you are not alone. I am here." Nodding, Neetu tells the gynaecologist that she is ready. The gynaecologist looks at Kamla and asks, "how far along are you?" Kamla smiles, caressing her womb, replies, "I am two weeks overdue." Seeing the pain etched on her face, the gynaecologist says, "you are experiencing labour pains too, aren't you."


Both mothers give birth to healthy little girls as they side by side, holding hands as they give support to one another.


Pakhi Singhania is placed into her mother's arms, a full two minutes elder to Kalpana Jhadav who is placed in her mother's arms. Both mother lay exhausted, but content as they hold their babies in their arms.
Edited by angelpureness - 10 years ago
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5 chaps or maybe 10 😆😆😆
we dont mind 15 ...20...30 as well
ofcourse d incomplete 1s frustrate a bit ...but every new work u bring in is either at par or better dan the previous 😉😉😉

Edited by mariee - 10 years ago
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Res 😉
Update prologue quickly
Nice prologue... Continue soon...
Edited by _TheBlackRose_ - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mariee

5 chaps or maybe 10 😆😆😆

we dont mind 15 ...20...30 as well
ofcourse d incomplete 1s frustrate a bit ...but every new work u bring in is either at par or better dan the previous 😉😉😉


Mwah

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Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_

Res 😉

Update prologue quickly
Nice prologue... Continue soon...


Thanks Hun 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing, looking forward to reading more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Luv ur ffs angel...always read them...n i knw u will write it wit passion n amazing imaginations...full wit ragna...mwah mwahh...angel...update soon...hehe;)
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what m I gonna do?? I cant help myself.
If you write, I read.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thankgod raghav and pakhi are sibllings here😉
chalo neetu ki bhi position improve ho gayi
neetu mameassb se neetu mam🤣
awesome prologue
continue soon

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