What an ending it was 👏It was like reading a book which i never wanted to end but as you said everything must come to an end 😊 n must say it was the best way to end it,We have an impact of a film r a serial only for few moments but if we read a nice book then that impact last forever that is the feeling i get when i read your ff The twisting kaleidoscope.it has every thing in it each and every emotion
Raghav's loneliness,arrogance,attitude, him carving for love and care,his unconditional love for kalpi and transformation in his character after realizing his love for her, his care n concern, his insecurities of loosing kalpi,Revenge for his father's death yet avoiding kalpi keeping all the sin for himself n his struggle to maintain his sanity in kalpi's eyes this was the most amazing character i have ever seen👏
Kalpana her dreams and journey to achieve them, her strength in fighting with the fate which she was born in and conquering her fist full of sky or i must say she reached heights of sky as that was the place she belong to, her support for Raghav and standing by his side in any situation, being his shield at times of sorrow she is just perfect be a daughter,a wife or a friend she is perfect in any role she play Too perfect i must say😆
Sammy a true friend and adhira is a perfect definition of innocence
if i start describing all then the list goes on and on
The way you put emotions in words is just amazing.one scene i love the most is when kalpi comes to know about raghav involvement in building slump his fear of loosing her n him waiting for her whole night in front of chawl that was lovely as i said in my previous comment (if you remember) you should seriously consider writing i meant writing as profession a book which i would say will be among best sellers :)
When i read that its last chapter i thought why story i going in a nice track then sudden and abrupt ending but when i read it i must say this is the best way to end a perfect story like this
I wonder if you can do this wonders with some thing like ema which ending in worst possible way what would u do if every thing in it is your own creation 😃
so you r planing to write another ff im completely biased i want Ragna in it too😆
oops i forgot to mention what i liked in this chappy first is definitely Raghav and kaashvi's bonding n that sweet fight between rishav and his shishi😉 , Raghav reaction when he comes to know about him becoming a father n yeah kalpi beating Raghav in video game sending it to sammy😆 , adhira pressing alarm n thinking its because of pen 🤣 n kalpi n Raghav speech of course what made this ending perfect is rishav's persentation describing kalpi n what true success is😃 n his best possession
Ps-karan kalpi ka majnu bankar rehgaya kya ? n he is a doc so might help in kaashvi's problem
Edited by santhisreem - 10 years ago
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