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Posted: 10 years ago

DISCLAIMER 😛 : I donot own the characters of EMA (though I wish I did).. Thanku very much for waiting patiently 😳 Now the story would get more spookier.. Hey come on, its a Dark FF 😛 Ok.. Now, I'll shut my mouth and let you read the story.. Meet you at the end 😃




The next day started with the usual hustle bustle and work for the day. The usual shouts from evil stepmom and step-sister were on throughout the day. I had to run errands too. It was the start of the new month and I had to shop for the month's groceries. I was glad about that because I would be out for a few hours. I got dressed and wrapped a stole round my neck and walked off. The streets were busy since it was the start of the month. I went through all the stores and purchased the necessary groceries. I looked longingly at a few chocolates in the store. The shopkeeper noticed this and gave me two. I refused but the shopkeeper insisted since I reminded him of his daughter. I happily took it and started walking towards hell (home). Dehradun was known for its scenary and forests. I loved to take the long route home since that would give me time to enjoy the scenic beauty of the forest. The air was breezy and I started to feel cold. My stole flew from around my neck and into the forest. Shit !!! There goes my favourite stole. After it Kalpi.. I followed the stole into the forest. I ventured into the forest in search of my favourite stole. Was it only me or was the forest really spooky all of a sudden ??

I brushed away the thoughts from my mind as the forests were always dark.. I noticed the tall trees and the overgrown roots. They really did look spooky. I noticed my stole a few steps away. I sighed happily and went to retrieve it. As I picked it up, I heard a growl. It was of an animal and a big one at that. I noticed a few shadows. I started panicking and went to the nearest tree to hide. I peeked from behind a tree. The shadows were PEOPLE !!!! People with hooded cloaks. They were chanting something which I couldn't hear. I started to step back when I stepped on a twig my mistake. It make a noisy sound. The chanting stopped and the hooded figures turned towards the source of the noise. I started to run. I ran for my life. I've been in this forest only once and Vishal helped me out so I didn't know the way out. I ran deep into the forest. The hooded figures were still behind me. Now I really started to freak out. I felt someone pull me by the arm and close my mouth. Now I couldn't scream either. I was pulled up against a tree. I turned to kick the person who almost killed me when I noticed blue eyes. In an instant they turned black.

Was it blue or black ??? The eyes person asked,"Miss Kalpana.. What are you doing here ??" It was Raghav.. I asked,"I could ask you the same question, Sir.." He hesitated,"I asked you first." I said,"Hmph.. Fine. I was shopping when my stole flew towards the forest. I came to retrieve it." He said harshly,"Was that really necessary ??? It was just a stole.. " I whined,"But it's my favourite stole." Raghav sighed exasperated,"Seriously Woman !!!! For heaven's sake, you ran into the deepest parts of the forest just to retrieve this piece of cloth ???!!!!" I defended my stole,"Hey, this is my favourite stole. You can't just..." I didn't even get time to complete my sentence when I was pulled by him into the bush. I fell on top of him. He closed my mouth with his hands and listened intently. And me..Well.. I kept staring at him. After a few minutes, he looked at me. He smirked at me.. Oh... How I'd love to slap that smirk off.. He pointed with his eyes at me. I realized that I was lying on top of him. I got up and dusted myself. He asked,"Do you know the way to your house ?" I looked down guiltily. He sighed and said,"Ok. Come on then.." I followed him. I had run a long way so walking took time. I wanted to make a conversation. I remembers the blue eyes turning black and I asked,"Do you wear contacts ?" Raghav turned and asked,"What ??" I replied,"Contacts.. Do you wear contacts ?"

Raghav replied,"Ofcourse not. Why ??" I said,"Well, its just that when you pulled me and I turned towards you, I saw your eyes were blue and now they are coal black.." Raghav hesistently said,"Miss Kalpana.. I am sure it must have been the giddiness you felt when I pulled you." He started walking and I stared at his back confused. After a few more minutes, I asked,"May I ask one more question ?" Raghav said,"Go ahead." I asked,"How did you know where I was ?? Because as far as I know, there was no one in that forest except some weird looking guys with cloaks." Raghav turned and asked,"You saw their faces ?? I mean, did they see you ?" I said,"I asked you first." Raghav turned back to the road and started walking. It was tuff keeping up with him but I still tried. I asked him again,"Tell me. How did you know where I was ?? And you were nowhere near me. How did you know where I was and how did your each me so fast ?" Raghav stopped, turned around and said,"We've reached your house Miss. Kalpana. You need to rest. I can see the giddiness is still with you. Have some rest." Before I could ask him anything, he walked away. I went into the house and saw evil step-sister glaring at me. I bluntly asked," What ?" Step-sister asked,"What did you say to Raghav ?" I asked,"What ?? What are you talking about ?" Step-sister said,"I know Kalpi. You are just insecure that Raghav likes me a lot. You didn't want him to see me that's why you didn't let him come inside the house." I sighed. Yeah.. I am jealous and insecure. I am the evil step-sister Drizella or Anastasia or whatever trying to snatch away the Prince Charming of the Cinderella standing infront of me. Get a life, Pig !!! Step-sister walked away in that annoying style of hers and I walked into my room after keeping the groceries in their respective places. Evil step-mom was nowhere to be seen. Guess she might have gone to another one of those bitchy and boring kitty party of hers. I went to get some rest. Raghav was right. I needed some rest to get rid of this stupid giddiness..


Tadaa... Am back 😃 Thanku very much for patiently waiting for the update. The thing is I was very busy with my creative writing preps.. And guess what.. I horribly won the competition 😆 Credit goes to the person that wrote that story. Hadn't it been for her, I would have had no idea as to what to write. Poor girl was wondering how did her essay land up in my paper 🤣Anyways, back to the topic, I know this chapter is a bit boring but I promise, the next update will be nice 😊 So can I expect 30 LIKES and 2 pages of COMMENTS ??? 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...
So we got a question-answer session... But unfortunately, that revealed nothing more than what we already knew 😆
Cloaked figures chanting some mantra... Who are they, now? Vampires? Werewolves? Or something else? But well, that's a question abt Raghav as well... What is he? till now I've taken the assumption that he's a vampire...
Give a super spooky update again sooon!!!
Waise, when will u update arranged love?

Edited by _TheBlackRose_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome kalpi facing trouble because of two witches n her favourite stole flew awa n she ran t get it seeing strange poeple chanting mantra n then rag save her from being the food of those people definitely n kalpi question rises panic in rag but he somehow avoided it n ask her t take rest
kalpi said the cindrella dialogue was nice slap for that dumb wit
update soon plz
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it.
so even kalpi has an upper hand in ragna fight I guess.
update next part soon n plz make it way 2 long.

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Posted: 10 years ago

awesomr update ...
Kalpi goes in forest...to givr her stole back...wow raghav saved kalpi...😃
kalpi become a Q bank...😲😆 poor raghav ..😆...pakhi such a dumb girl..😡
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I wish Kalpi stand up to those two witches and tell them off
After all it's her father house...
Kalpi going into the forest for her fly away stole was awesome because "her" savior Raghav came to her rescue ;) I like how cleverly Raghav answer Kalpi questions lol
Wonderful update
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Posted: 10 years ago
suprb update Deepu di... Upfate nxt chappy soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update dear
i think raghav ...vampire😊
update next part soon dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
DISCLAIMER : YOU GUYS KNOW MY BORING DISCLAIMER, HALF OF YOU WOULD HAVE BYHEARTED IT BY NOW 😆 SAY IT AND GET READING.. NOTE : AM UPDATING THIS DIRECTLY AFTER WAKING UP SO DON'T YOU EVEN EXPECT ANY LOGIC OUTTA THIS CHAPTER. AM UPDATING ONLY BECAUSE I DON'T WANT FLYING SANDALS, TOMATOES AND POTATOES BY YOU GUYS MY WAY 😛



What do you expect from the next day ?? Any change in my daily routine ?? No.. It was the same except that evil step-mom was kind as to let me sleep in for an hour extra.. Wow, that's weird.. I had this very weird dream as I slept. There were people and I didn't know them. There were people in black cloaks just like the ones I saw in the jungle yesterday. And then there was Raghav. He was standing beside ME !!!! That looked like me but it wasn't me. I mean, I never dressed like that. That lass that looked like me looked like she was from some 19th century or something. And they KISSED !!!I woke up. I couldn't make out head or tail from my dream but it looked realistic. I was definitely going to share this with Dracula.. I fondly call Raghav as Dracula when he is out of ear-shot. I got ready for work early since I had to walk. I reached the hotel and changed into my outfit for the night. Raghav was nowhere to be seen. I waited for an hour but still he was nowhere to be seen.
I went down to meet Mistress. I saw her talking over the phone. She saw me and welcomed me inside,"Miss. Kalpana.. Do come in." I went in. She asked,"Any problem, Miss. Kalpana ?" I nodded,"Mistress. Sir hasn't come yet." Neetu's smile faltered a bit but she quickly regained her composure,"Erm.. He is busy with business work outside. You may attend to the other guests." I thanked her and went. Neetu called someone..

Neetu : Hello.. Whr are you, Raghav ?
Raghav : Neetu, I am out.
Neetu : You lied to me...
Raghav : What !! I did not..
Neetu : Yes you did. U said u'll be at the hotel today. Kalpana just now came in and said u weren't there..
Raghav : I can't go Neetu..
Neetu : You have to, Raghav.. You have to face the present. U cnt keep on living in the past. Its not going to come back to you..

By that time, Raghav had cut the call leaving Neetu worried. In the morning, Neetu went home straight. She saw Chahel and Shahanya sitting and sipping from a glass. They saw her come inside. Chahel asked,"Why are u in a rush ?" Neetu asked,"Has Raghav come yet ?" Shahanya said,"No.. Why Neetu ?? Us he in any problem ?" Shahanya started to worry. She loved Raghav very much. Chahel held her hand,"Don't worry Shahanya. He is safe and healthy." Just then Raghav entered the house. His apprearance shocked all three of them. His tie was loosened, his hair was dishelved and his eyes were tired. He looked as if he had been crying. Shahanya got up and went over to him. She cupped his cheek..

Shahanya : Raghav.. What happened ?? Beta.. Tell na.. What happened ?Why do you look so lost..

Raghav did not answer anything;. He just kept staring into the empty space beside Shahanya. Shahanya shook him again. Raghav looked at her caring and worried face. He hugged her and burst into tears. Shahanya was shocked. She had never seen him cry after that incident that took his happiness away. She hugged him back and let him cry his heart out. Chahel was speechless. He began to worry silently about what might have happened that made his son cry. Neetu went to Raghav and touched his shoulder. Shahanya signed her not to. Neetu nodded and went back. Shahanya wiped her own tears and broke the hug..

Shahanya : Raghav.. Tell me.. What happened ??
Raghav (wiping tears away) : Nothing..
Shahanya : Raghav, I am your mother. Have you ever hidden anything from me ?? Speak it out, Raghav..
Chahel : Dad and Mom.. Please.. I can't.. too painful..

Chahel and Shahanya were shocked. They were happy that Raghav had called them Mom and Dad after years but then this was not a moment of celebration.. Neetu went towards Raghav and put her hand on him.. He calmed down slowly.
Neetu : Now tell Raghav.. What happened ?
Raghav : I went to Akruti's grave.. It was painful. I can't live without her.. I lied to you that I was going to the hotel but then I couldn't handle seeing Kalpi. She reminds me so much of my Akruti. I went to her grave to find some peace but then it was too painful.

Raghav started to cry laying his head on Neetu's shoulder. Chahel went forward to speak something but Shahanya held him back signing NO to him. Chahel removed her hand from his and went forward.

Chahel : Raghav.. Raghav.. Look at me..
Raghav did not.. Chahel caught his shoulders and forced him to look into his eyes..
Chahel : Raghav.. Listen.. It has been years.. No, centuries.. It has been centuries. It has been centuries since she left you.. You are holding on to her.. Don't Raghav.. Come out..
Raghav : No.. Never.. I cannot and never will forget Akruti. I loved her.. She was dying. I wanted to die with her. You both didn't let me (Pointing to Chahel and Shahanya). If you had let me, I would have been with my Akruti now. You guys are the reason I am like this.
Chahel : Raghav.. Control urself.. You need to accept the fact that you are a vampire.. There is no use pretending any different. Your only thought when you both were on the cliff was Akruti.. Ur mother's and my thoughts were only about you.. You are our son Raghav.. We do care about you.. We love you..
Raghav : If you did love me, then you would have let me join my Akruti in death. Not turn me into a blood-sucking creature..
Shahanya : RAGHAV !!!!

Raghav went up to his room and slammed the door.. Neetu looked at the both of the. Shahanya looked sad and was in tears and Chahel's face was stern yet sad.

Shahanya : Why Chahel ?
Chahel : What do you mean why ?
Shahanya : What was the need to remind him of the centuries that has gone by ?? You just triggered the pain in him.
Chahel : What do u expect Shahanya ? You want to see him stay like this for infinity ?? Without any happiness and any mate ??
Shahanya : No but...
Chahel : I don't him to be like me, Shahanya. I know what it is like to lose a loved one and the live hell.. I've been through it once..I son't want him to experience the same too..
Shahanya : I know Chahel.. He needs time..
Chahel : He needs to accept the fact that he is a vampire..
Shahanya : You were reluctant at first too, remember ?
Chahel : How did you know about that ?
Shahanya : I am ur wife, Chahel.. When you were out, I asked Chand and Haseena about ur days as a vampire. They told me that you were an annoying baby..
Chahel : I am not a BABY !!!

Shahanya smiled a bit and said,"Give him some time, Chahel.. Everything will get in place.."
Neetu : Excuse me.. What are you guys talking about ?? Past ?? And what was Dad like ??
Shahanya : Its a long story, Neetu..
Neetu : My ears are open..

*Drum Rolls* Tadaa !!!! 😃 Its me Deepika.. Ur friend ... This chapter had some dhamaakedaar revelations.. Yes friends.. As many of you have guessed, Raghav is a vampire and that too a VERY HOT one 😉 So ladies.. Drool as much as you want 😉 As I said before, I might introduce a twin Raghav and make anyone from you guys pair along with him.. Who wants to be IT !!! ☺️ Anyways, if you still haven't arrived at the point, Chahel-Shahanya story is that of Abhay-Piya only that the time and century would change and some characters won't be there and the story will change a bit according to this story. But AbhIya scenes are the same and no Maithili.. So hope you guys crack up ur imaginations 😃.. And if you guys are wondering whether Neetu is a vampire or not, well the answer is NO.. She is not..But what she is will be revealed in the next few chapters.. So stay tuned 😉
Edited by veeranu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely n mystery hmm so kalpi is like rag beloved who died
hmm more interesting n rag dad annoying baby😆
update soon
Edited by sweet1308 - 10 years ago

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