ragna love stories(single part)(os), note, page 62, 12/03 - Page 38

Originally posted by: ssna

A fun post writer like u has turn into a superb story writer .

wats d secret 😉 ragna fever you see😳 watching their old video right now😎. Oh I miss them!😭

oo god really whole jan no update .now dats d heartbreaking news for me becoz I was expecting 1 more os in d upcoming week.

if possible plz update soon I'll try dear but i can't promise

Originally posted by: mariee

!Reserved

Yaar ..i take my words back ..tu nahi hai aalsi ...itna lamba update ...omgzzz !!😉😉

par at the moment i am feeling lazy to type in a comment. Shll unres this place soon 😃😃

Unreserved !!

Firstly ...rishu ...that was such a looonnnggg update. No wonder u took so long to update. But lemme compliment u for 1 thing ...even though the length was to much , there was not even a single instance in the story where i felt i was getting bored or thought of skipping a particular part. Thank you😳

Kudos for that ...really !! Kyunki ..bhale i called u aalsi ..but me as a person am the most aalsiest 1 while reading. but girly ...ur os forced mr to read every single line ...ulta i was reading every para twice ..thinking kahi kuch choot na jaaye in the eagerness of knowing what wud happen next !! 👏👏 It means I'm not the only one in the zone of IF's bone idle readers 😆. I'm the sabse bura reader indubitably 😆 And I am happy that I didn't bore you with such long story.

Now ...speaking abt the os ..it was lovely !! 😳😳

Then may it be the story or the characters portrayed in it.

& to all of it ..ur hilarious 1 liner dialogues or sentences proved to be the cherry on the cake !!

I literally had my eyes wide when i read

She couldn't take another second of it. "So, who are you?" she asked straight forward.

"I am your husband." He replied very calmly.

Uske baad ke kalpana ke what se zyaada bada mera what tha !! Ur Raghav indeed managed to fool us both ...ur kalpi & me !!😆😆. This raghav was quite funny. And more than kalpi he impressed me. Ooohhh that roundhouse kick. He has stolen my heart 😳 😆

Everything was going fine after that ..with me wondering ...itna time ho gaya ..rishu shaant kaise ??

& then came

Days later before that happened he got the news of her engagement with his best friend Ramu who was more rich, handsome, charismatic and funny than raghav really was. He got betrayed by his girlfriend and his best friend at the same time.

& i was rofling like anything 🤣🤣🤣 That was indeed a good 1. Ramu ..more handsome than Raghav ?? Paakhi ki aankhein phoot gayi hongi ..anyways accha hi hua ... serial me kyun nhi phooti yaar uski aankh😆 it would be a fun to watch pakhi and ramu dancing and dating.😆

& then was that blissful evening & that gunda fight . Well portrayed ..I loved every single scene

...ur fun posts are extreme contrasts to what u write in here. ur fun posts limit ur language skills to a particular set of words..but here ...tu saari ki saari kasar puri kar deti hai 😉😉

Uske baad were the super romantic scenes ☺️☺️ the kiss and the love-making 😳

I actually liked Raghav's lines

"Kalpana, I want you badly. But if you say I'll try to pull the brakes. But you have to tell me to go away, and leave you alone. If you don't I won't be stopped again. Do you understand sweetheart."

Tells u how respectful he is. He could have easily enforced himself on her ..the fact that she was all alone in the country with he being a rich man ...who cud have dared to speak against him. But ..no ..he respected her & her opinions mattered. That truly impressed me ... he was a gentleman 😳 till they were outside the room.😆

Umm...ek thing i can tell u ...tujhe kapde phaadna accha lagta hai na?? 😆😆 I remember a similar scene in ur 4th os as well ...😛 kapde phad romance it is.😆

& last but not the least ws the dramatic ending ...ekdum filmy style mein !! 😉😉 Big fan of hollywood romcom.

OK ...so my concluding words to u. When i started reading ur os i thought it wud have resemblance to the movie queen ...but no ...u proved me wrong. The entire story was ORIGINAL !! Yes starting had a look of queen but the story was different. Waise i love quee-the movie😃 fabulous!

Come up with ur next os soon ..plzzz !! Or else i wud have to threaten u with a chatak chatak 😆😆 chatak chatak 😆 but no other story till 15 feb.

MARUSHKAA thank you so much for a stupendous comment dear 🤗 Mwaaah

Originally posted by: vyshuu..

😃 😆 😆

Originally posted by: anjyy

Amazing os..

Loved it..

Originally posted by: niru04

Wonderful update

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi

beautiful story...😃

Originally posted by: appyK

Tad tad tadaahh😉

Lol Rishu.. You really need no actual funny dialogues to make us laugh.. Maid Kamla and Paakhi weds Ramu.. 😆😆 true!! why to waste time on giving humorous dialogues to ramu and kamla when their names can do the wonder.😆

Now about the story..

Its really not easy to write a single story without making it plain narration and you as always did a marvellous job.. arpita my sister tu hi samjhi mera dard. it's really really difficult to write a single part story

Loved brown beard v/s raghav especially kalpi's hurray..

And then I was busy blushing.. really?😳

My reaction on confession: Lol... Actually rofl.. Filmy!!!!! I so wanted to read some proper filmy stuff for RagNa..!!! Loved it!!! yeah!! confession was quite filmy! complete filmy indeed!!😆

Fabulous short story!!! Will be waiting for next... thank you so much darling! muaah

Originally posted by: sweet_aditi

Rishu dear first to i m very very sryy mene bahot late kiya read karne ke liye. i understand aditi this forum has so many talented writers you might be busy over there.😉

abt story.. kya khaya tha yar tune while writing dis story 😆 chocolate horlicks piya tha. ⭐️
just loved dis passionate, intense , romantic and super duper OS ☺️ 😳 thank you so much dear!!

dis OS was too long but still I never wanted it to finish 😃 awww!! so sweet of you.😃
wat an amazing OS dear!!! 😳 muaaah!!