ragna love stories(single part)(os), note, page 62, 12/03

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IThinkALot

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: premap
Hi ! Rishu ! Your stories are short and sweet as usual, but I wish your endings were a bit more elaborate. Felt a bit abrupt for my satisfaction. Sorry this only my opinion and not meant to discourage you. You have a special talent of giving us a complete story at one go , which all of us look for. the waiting gets one frustrated but you keep us stress-free! Tkz.

Hey dear i update these short stories for you people and i welcome all comments and suggestions. Plz help me and tell me in last story which scene in the end need to be elaborated ?

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@DayAndNight

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

RESERVED! I WILL READ IT SOON 😊 ND GIVE U MY OPINION ON THIS

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rani214

@rani214

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Awww rishu beautiful story ...loved it

It was emotional heart touching story with beautiful concept...kalpi fell in love by hearing guitar played by raghav😳

Loved d reunion of raghav wit kalpi n his daughter

But I have a complaint u could have written it as short story atleast

Love u sweetie❤️ ❤️ n lots of hugs n kisses 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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IThinkALot

@IThinkALot

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: DayAndNight
RESERVED! I WILL READ IT SOON 😊 ND GIVE U MY OPINION ON THIS

😲 😲😲

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IThinkALot

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: rani214
Awww rishu beautiful story ...loved it
It was emotional heart touching story with beautiful concept...kalpi fell in love by hearing guitar played by raghav😳
Loved d reunion of raghav wit kalpi n his daughter
But I have a complaint u could have written it as short story atleast
Love u sweetie❤️ ❤️ n lots of hugs n kisses 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Awww rani dear thnx a lot for the hugs nd kisses 😳 nd m so happy u liked the story.

U know naa m not good in writing long story or dragging a story long n long. it's not my cup of tea but so sweet of u want it as a short story. Thnx dear 🤗