AT BOSS BECK AND CALL - SS - ch3 pg6 - 25/09 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
Poor kalpi first day scolding
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: hathway

Firstly congrats on your new FF.

Nice start!!

More Khadoos Raghav, more fights. Please make Kalpi answer him back the same way.

Please keep writing!!!



yesss...i want that too...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Raghav is so arrogant..poor kalpi
wonderful start dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow so u have take upon this ss I didn't get it sweet cherry won't continue this ss or all othet ss's also? pls inform me & don't worry u are a wonderful writer & u will do justice to ot as ur other ff's.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Khadoos Raghav is even more Khadoos here 😆😆
Who is Ajay? Diama's son?

I loved the start and the first day of Kalpana is going to be so difficult with Raghav's tactics. Please continue soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fuzz, back with another story! You are going to be one busy bee. Loved it. Eager Kalpi on the way to her job. Got a friend on the first day itself. I hope since there are no parents for her, we don't have to suffer Kamala. I think it's the first time in an ff they show Raghav's dad alive. They are not on good terms? Poor Kalpi, even sacrificed her lunch so that her boss doesn't starve. But Raghav just threw it away. He's a hard taskmaster. Poor girl is gonna have a hard time.
Congrats on the new story. Mwah!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Fuzz this was a beautiful start by you; and I know for sure that if anyone other than the original writer could handle this story than it was only you. 😃 Fab update. Raghav is really too hot-tempered and khadoos! But it makes him even more hotter! 😛😉 Can't wait for the next update now. 😃⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: erikalui

Khadoos Raghav is even more Khadoos here 😆😆

Who is Ajay? Diama's son?

I loved the start and the first day of Kalpana is going to be so difficult with Raghav's tactics. Please continue soon 😳


Ajay is Ragav's father. Daima is Ragav's nanny from childhood.

Yes ma'am... Working on next chappy 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Fuzz, back with another story! You are going to be one busy bee. Loved it. Eager Kalpi on the way to her job. Got a friend on the first day itself. I hope since there are no parents for her, we don't have to suffer Kamala. I think it's the first time in an ff they show Raghav's dad alive. They are not on good terms? Poor Kalpi, even sacrificed her lunch so that her boss doesn't starve. But Raghav just threw it away. He's a hard taskmaster. Poor girl is gonna have a hard time.

Congrats on the new story. Mwah!


When sweetcherry narrated the story... I just loved it. I couldn't wait to write it. I just hope I do it full justice and write what she has envisaged.

Mwah
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: chahat4u

Fuzz this was a beautiful start by you; and I know for sure that if anyone other than the original writer could handle this story than it was only you. 😃 Fab update. Raghav is really too hot-tempered and khadoos! But it makes him even more hotter! 😛😉 Can't wait for the next update now. 😃⭐️


Thinks hun... Mwah

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