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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#401

OMG! I am FIRST ! 😎 Awesome

Will be back SOON 😉

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Chickee.. it was an amazing update... loved it to no end. Please please try to take out some time and write a paragraph each day. that could easily suffice into a hot and most amazing writing from you - A gift from you to your readers.

You have detailed their anxiety, jealousy, and attraction towards each other so well.

And finally they kissed... Phew.. how looong have we waited for this...

Rishi, Pakhi and Kalpi equation is super sweet.

ps- update could have been longer. But letting you go this one time since you felt a lot of pressure from us. Check my chapters to know.. what I mean by long chapters 😉

I really hope you will update on a regular basis.

Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#402

Omg girl u have made my dark night bright. Who needs a bulb when u can build a fire. 😆 😉 rags came with a mission and he completed it. He wanted kalpi and he has kissed her. So what next? I m so excited can't wait for next part. Update soon.

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charvi3

@charvi3

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#403

😳Hauut update dear😉

In this cold there is no need of hitter because ur update is enough for it...

Rags had kissed her😉...& he is very much jealous of rishi

Eagerly waiting for ur next update...please update soon😛

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Aru18

@Aru18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#404

finally u update

awesome update..raghav kissed her...now next what??

continue soon

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Nisha VS

@redpetal

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#405

Too good Yaar. What more can I say. I enjoyed it. Thank you. Don't make us wait for long like this time.

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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#406

Raghav kissed kalpi...much neesed for both

Lovely

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#407

nice update dear... Wow ragna kiss.. I luvd it... Plzz update nxt chappy soon waitng

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sweet1308

@sweet1308

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#408

Too awesome really lovely moment of ragna

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ArthunaAlive

@ArthunaAlive

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#409

What a stupendous. Update !!!!!!!!! Gaawd👏 CHIKEE 😳 Tussi great ho paaji 😛

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#410

OMG you made my Saturday! 😃 👏 Finally the realisation of attraction for Kalpi and Raghav got what he wanted! 😃😳 Looking forward for the next update. 😃

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