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cutyneha

@cutyneha

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Awesome update throughout d update i was actually smiling

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#422

Ohooo my impish Raghav!!!! All set to be in action! To get his lady love!

Ufff!!!!! me blush blush! My heart goes dhak dhak!!!

Kalpi is so strong!!!! koi aur hoti toh she would have melted away like chocolate!!!!!

Wow supppuuu u r simply Suppperb!!!

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sumasridhar

@sumasridhar

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#423

Wow yaar how romantic chikee ilu

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#424

Loved it TOTALLY TOTALLY LOVED. Ashiq bangaya Raghav 😆 and kalpi is putty in his hands. Totally had me rofling when rags asked is that an R in your design 😆 2nd update so soon!!! THANKYOU 🤗 please 1 more update since u left at an awesome spot. Am dying to read how the rest of the night progresses.

Edited by sunyy - 10 years ago

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#425

OMG, let me catch my own breaths now! 😆 That was so beautiful and hot, and cute! love this Raghav! Poor Kalpi, too much hotness to handle in a span of few minutes! 😃😳 ☺️ Loooved it so-so much. No words to describe. one request, please try to give regular updates now,as per your schedule? 😃

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#426

wow... BONUS.

this one was just tooo amazing. Loved it to the core. super romantically sensational.

The kiss, his concern over her disheveled look is quiet justified. He did not want their rendezvous to become public too soon.

But the bold bangle selection scene was sizzling. I am still imagining in my head. Phew... btw my imagination is running wild.

Please help me control them by constant updates...

I cant wait for the next update... 😊 it will never be soon enough Chickee...😉

Waiting with baited breath

Edited by spontaneousmini - 10 years ago

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#427

nice update dear... Bechari kalpi...omg i m blushng coz of ragna update nxt chappy soon

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#428

thnx 4 pm chikee... Nd ho sake to aad me in ur buddy list mei buddy rqust nahi send ker skti hun

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#429

Aww Kalpi was in another world all together
She was enjoying every touch of Raghav 😛
I love the effect they have on each other
Kalpi refusing to open her eyes until Raghav leave was hilarious
The messages was cute
And I love the way Raghav hold Kalpi by her waist while she look at bangles lol
Fabulous update