RAGNA FF-TUM PAR BAS HAQ HAI MERA part 70 pg 165 (NO PM) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Lovely update
I like Prem and his Pana bonding
Payal is so clam while Kalpi is the opposite lol
Omg! Raghav and Sammy bet is crazy
I want to see how Raghav will succeed in his mission ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start.. prem and kalpi are cute.. excited for next part..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello my dear interesting story I'm guessing this will be going like the movie "She's All That" anyways I have a small request whenever you are writing in Hindi could you please translate that part to English since I don't know Hindi thanks again and please continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely I am liking Prem here, hope Kalpi teaches raghav a lesson, not not mess with any females, I hope Kalpi beats Raghav at his own game
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update nd different.pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice ff n good ro see raghav and prem in a completely different character. So Raghz is a Playboy n Prem is descent. Liked kalpi's character too. Now I am really lookibg forward to kbow how Raghav will win dis bet n impress kalpi since she doesn't like singhania kids. Please if u r done withbsecond update upload it soon. Eagerly waiting to read it.

N ya i loved ur previous ff n really liked kids. They were so cute n added a special touch to ur ff.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shivanie05

Hello my dear interesting story I'm guessing this will be going like the movie "She's All That" anyways I have a small request whenever you are writing in Hindi could you please translate that part to English since I don't know Hindi thanks again and please continue soon.

sure darling as my hindi sucks tooo
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

----next day

Singhainas land to india (mumbai), & heading toward there mansion

R:wow,so many girls, I like indian beauty Sammy (looking here & there)koi se Sammy bol

S:no,not them, I will tell u, fr nw let go...

R:haan,theek hai,bt paaki kahan hai???

P:I'm here (coming frm behind)

R:I told u to be with us, phir bhi u r behind me y paakhi

P:bhai don't treat me like a kid,I can take care of me (rudely)

R:don't talk to me in tune of urs, I'm nt mom to tolerate u bad behaver,I will slap u fr that got it

P:sorry bhai (tear eye)

R:let go

----in car

Sammy got neetu call

N:so reached there huh!!! (Smiling)achi, choco pie, first go to Kamla house then home

S:aunty pls it's Samar, ok theek hai

R:kya hua

S:wo aunty wnt k hum Kamla ma k ghar jaaye

R:what?? Have mom lost it...shit, suhana is waiting for me

S:raghav cme down, don't worry only for 5 mins

R:ok

P:driver ji pls Kamla k ghar chala

------reach Kamla house

Pakhi run inside the house

P:Kamla ma, hum aagaye!!!!(hugging her)

Ka:mera paakhi baby, aur kon aaye hai??(hugging her back)

P:wo raghav bhahiya & Sammy bhahiya

Ka:aur Saab & madam

P:wo kuch time baad aaye gaye

Ka:ok, bt where is raghav & Samar baba

P:outside

Kamla go & greet them & bring them in...

Ka:raghav kaise hai aap

R:I'm good Kamla ma

Pa:aai, where is my book (didn't realise who is here, Sammy staring her,raghav dnt like her)

R:stp stare she is nt that pretty, she don't even have dressing sense (hitting elbow on his stomach)nt ur type

S:ouch!!! Bt she is cute, indian beauty

Ka:payal dekha kon aaye hai

Pa:kon aai???

Ka:raghav baba,Samar baba & pakhi baby...

P:OMG!!! Payal di, Remeber I'm pakhi (hugging her)

Pa:haan, how r u,

S:hi, I'm Samar bt aapno k liye Sammy (move hand toward her)

Pa:hi, I'm payal (shaking hand)

R:hi payal

Pa:hi raghav, sorry bt I hav to reach my class bye to all

Ka:where is Kalpi

Pa:aai, she is sleeping bye (walking out)

After sometime Kalpi come out on phone swearing some1 in her night short & singlet,

K:ullu ka Patha, call kyun nahi ke

Raghav is staring her from head to top

Ka:Kalpi beta, yeh dekho...

K:I will call u later,haan aai

R:hi, I'm raghav Singhania, (with smile)

K:hi I'm kalpana (shaking hand )

S:Sammy

K:hi

P:I'm pakhi di u Remeber me...

K:haan how r u (hugging her)

P:I'm good

Ka:u all talk I will gt u something to eat

Kalpi & pakhi tlking, raghav staring at her ,

S:stop staring she is nt ur type, so

R:so??? (Looking at him)

S:Issa pata,wo bhi ek month, ur time start nw(smiling)

R: are u sure

S:raghav leave it, chor da she is nt ur type raghav, she is nt bimbo who fall fr u

R:she will I promise , so miss kalpana wht u do???

K:I'm xxx degrees

R:wow, any future plans

K:MR Singhaina, ap mujhse shaadi karna aaye hai???

R:no

K:then y r u asking these,I dnt like hare my personal life (leave frm there, & Sammy & pakhi crack up laughing)

R:how dare she??? None talk to me in my life..now I want her in my bed ??? (Smirk)

P:how cheap bhai????

R:Paakhi shut ur mouth, let go home (leave frm there)

------

Raghav keep thinking abt Kalpi, he hate her bt wnt to teach her a lesson to talk to raghav Singhania, he kick suhana out from room & think abt Kalpi, her sexy figure is nt going out of his mind,Sammy entry

S:wht happend???

R:I want her

S:u kick her out of ur room

R:nahi, mujhe wo chahiye

S:who u talking abt

R:kalpana, I want her

S:haan, theek hai, sleep now we will talk tomorrow

R:hmmm,he think of plan to bring her closer...

--------next day

Sammy & raghav stuck in traffic, Kalpi was passing by & sw some kids crying,Kalpi knw those kids meena,Sana & ali

K:kya hua?? Ro kyu rahi ho ???

A:Kalpi di, humhare female singer is nt coming & show must go on!! It's for kids who suffered for cancer, di kuch Karo pls

M:haan di pls

S:di u knw I'm suffering from cancer too do it for me pls

K(in tear):ok, I will sing for u guys, happy now(in mind:I will nt let anything happend 2 Sana)

Kalpi sing & dance on Saturday Saturday

raghav saw her dancing & got angry ,leave the place..reach home & walk toward his room

R:how dare she dancing in pubilc, wo bhi happily (throwing things in room)

S:raghav wht u doing???

R:I want Kalpi & today I will reach my first step toward my plan (smirk) & go frm there to Kamla ma house...

Ka:raghav baba,aap yeha kuch kaam hai,

R:why can't I just cme to meet my Kamla ma (looking here & there) ma girls nahi hai

Ka:Kalpi nahi hai, payal is in room, u sit I will come

Kalpi entry the house & saw raghav, fake smile walk toward his

K:hi, how r u

R:I'm good, how r u

K:I'm super kool

R:so where u coming frm

K:I want college, kuch kaam tha??? Aai mr Singhania aa hai (& abt to leave)

R(hold her hand):raghav

K:sorry

R:call me raghav

K:pls leave my hand (raghav leave it )

R:oh, sorry but I'm here to invite u & payal for party

K:thanks but we have exam so party,aai will nt give permission

R:u tell u wnt to come, I will talk to Kamla ma

K:ok, if she give permisson we will come...got to go..bye

R:bye (smirk)

------precape:ragna close paper dance, set dance floor on fire

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting story concept!! Brilliant updates, so far!! Love the way Raghav is falling for Kalpi. Continue soon 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
😉

Originally posted by: Ragnaislife

Awesomeness my Dhuki bitiya!

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