No pm - ch20 pg141 - 22/11 - when love comes calling - Page 59

You have done it again. How do you manage to outdo yourself every time you write? I'm absolutely speechless. Everything is out in the open now. Looks like Raghav and Kalpi are getting to know each other apart from the scorching passion they feel. I love the control Raghav is having. He definitely wants her to be 'the one'. Gosh, it's perfect!

My God Fuzz, how do you manage to outdo yourself everytime! I was literally having goosebumps reading this! ☺️ It was just out of this world, so sweet, romantic and peaceful! 😃👏⭐️ Salute to you. Enjoyed each and everything and the best part, slowly-slowly every one is getting a clearer idea of Raghav, Kalpi & Priya relationships. I could imagine the surprised faces of Sammy & Maya as they looked on to Raghav & Kalpi, totally forgetting about others. I wonder what will be Raghav-Kalpi's reaction after this first peaceful moment between them; and more what will be Prem's reaction. I still have a question though, how is it that at first Kalpi was afraid and upset with Raghav,, then she faced her fears off talking with him and now all of a sudden sh was smiling when she bumped accidentally into his chest and in his arms? is it so because she overcome her inner fears?

ok!! far as I see actions speaks louder than words ;) raghav expressing his true feelings boldly by caressing and hugging kalpi in front of everyone is enough to tell kalpi that he and priya is not in any strong relationship! I mean think about it!! if he was really in love with priya would he be doing this with kalpi? and I think kalpi has enough brains to figure this out! now plz pureness!! I would hate to see a romantic night just end like this!! girl let them pour out their true feelings to one another!! accept the fact that they are in love and what better place than on the shores of the beach!! you know what I mean ;) sand?? get the idea?
Okayyy!! No torrid love scene!! I'm not gonna say I'm dissapointed!! But I understand clearly what you want to portray! It's like a new beginning!! Now the true relationship starts!! Each understanding eachother's feelings just want everything to be pure and real!! One thing!! Rags really controlled himself!! He knows if he did what he wanted to then she would think he only wants her for her body? Am I right? But his feelings is so much more than this!! He cares for her so much! He wants the next love making to be real with full passion from both!! I think he knows he overpowers her and he doesn't want to seem rough on her!! But to be gentle and genuine and passionate and also wants the same from her!! So now it's up to her now to tell how she truly feels!! What say Pureness?? Tell me!!

Originally posted by: DiVirgo

ok!! far as I see actions speaks louder than words ;) raghav expressing his true feelings boldly by caressing and hugging kalpi in front of everyone is enough to tell kalpi that he and priya is not in any strong relationship! I mean think about it!! if he was really in love with priya would he be doing this with kalpi? and I think kalpi has enough brains to figure this out! now plz pureness!! I would hate to see a romantic night just end like this!! girl let them pour out their true feelings to one another!! accept the fact that they are in love and what better place than on the shores of the beach!! you know what I mean ;) sand?? get the idea?
Okayyy!! No torrid love scene!! I'm not gonna say I'm dissapointed!! But I understand clearly what you want to portray! It's like a new beginning!! Now the true relationship starts!! Each understanding eachother's feelings just want everything to be pure and real!! One thing!! Rags really controlled himself!! He knows if he did what he wanted to then she would think he only wants her for her body? Am I right? But his feelings is so much more than this!! He cares for her so much! He wants the next love making to be real with full passion from both!! I think he knows he overpowers her and he doesn't want to seem rough on her!! But to be gentle and genuine and passionate and also wants the same from her!! So now it's up to her now to tell how she truly feels!! What say Pureness?? Tell me!!

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Loved Raghav watching Kalpi from far , mesmerised by her beauty. He isn't feeling jealous of her dancing with Sammy for he knows there's nothing between them. His only regret is its not his arms she's in. He's reminiscing the first time he saw her, he being attracted to her eyes. Her almond eyes bewitching him at the very moment he laid eyes on her. Unable to resist he joins her, rejoicing at the sound of her laughter. She bumps into him and surprised she calls out his name. He just holds her closer and she leans onto him resting her head on his shoulder. They sway to the music, content to be in each other's arms. Gosh, I loved that scene.

The setting was perfect and so was the music. Loved how everything came out. Played the song and read it twice. It can't get any better than that. Oh yeah, missed out on Maya's reaction on seeing Raghav looking at Kalpi. Loved how she told Priya that she's there for her whenever she's ready to talk. Can't wait to read the next part.

Mwah!

Originally posted by: Rakapaul

hi y didn't u pm me pls pm me all ur ff&ss pls I just love them pls & about the update it's just faboulase & awsome seriously I don't have any words & pls pm me from next time pls.

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Fuzz... Please have pity on me... I'm gonna cry, can't stand this. You have made me all mushy! 'Tum hi ho' is synonymous with ragna. I don't think of anyone else whenever I play the song. From now on I think I'm going to visualise them swaying to music in the moonlight with sound of ocean in the background. Loved how he takes her again in his arms possessively, eager to have his fill on her. Both trying hard to mask the pool of desire in their eyes. He has taken her away from the others wanting to keep her all to himself. Why can't he kiss her already!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm dying here...

Originally posted by: chahat4u

My God Fuzz, how do you manage to outdo yourself everytime! I was literally having goosebumps reading this! ☺️ It was just out of this world, so sweet, romantic and peaceful! 😃👏⭐️ Salute to you. Enjoyed each and everything and the best part, slowly-slowly every one is getting a clearer idea of Raghav, Kalpi & Priya relationships. I could imagine the surprised faces of Sammy & Maya as they looked on to Raghav & Kalpi, totally forgetting about others. I wonder what will be Raghav-Kalpi's reaction after this first peaceful moment between them; and more what will be Prem's reaction. I still have a question though, how is it that at first Kalpi was afraid and upset with Raghav,, then she faced her fears off talking with him and now all of a sudden sh was smiling when she bumped accidentally into his chest and in his arms? is it so because she overcome her inner fears?

Lovely update gal, keep it up. You are no doubt the best. 😃👏

Originally posted by: angelpureness

What can I say... they were lost into each other😉

omg loved that silent I love u and I love u too

It's past bedtime here. I'm up with the phone in my hand, my hubby asking me if I'm expecting a call! I don't have the heart to tell him what it is for he will not understand. I can't tell you the relief I felt when I got your pm because I was tired of refreshing forum every few seconds. What an update! It's flawless. He wants more... He want her to understand that he's interested in her as a person and not just sex. I really like that he's in control though he knows if he stay near her for some more time he won't be able to stop himself. He's making her aware of his feelings subtly. Loved how they told 'I love you' through their eyes. I think I'm in love all over again. See what you are doing to me girl! Good night! Phew... finally I will be able to sleep.