FF : Love revisited - Page 8

Originally posted by: shonali164

resh😳
unresh
vishu 🤗 u gv respect to rakhi relation by making pakhi rags sis.

Kalpi entry to banglow is superb. Blowing dia at FIL's pic is showing hw much she cr as Mrs. Singhania. Later goes to SIL's room asking her 4 dnr n gving reality check of her being carelessness and lastly she goes to he MIL's room n aftr hearing her phone convo gving gauri much needed privacy all dis shows a perfect DIL.

Kalpi's instruction servent is superb. Flashback of cooking is amazing. She is making pakoda for her tired beloved husband n dat to at 11pm. Rags is tired cz of work still nt leaving chance to romance wid kalpi. Cz of rags naughtyness all pakoda burn bt still widout irritating she made it again. Later dey eat all pakoda with sweet romantic gesture. Wow vishu m ltrly on dream land.
Kalpi knw rags nvr take his dnr wid her still she is waitng dats rhows hw much deeply she loves him.

Rags flashback is so much emotional. He lvs kalpi frm 2yrs n cz of status difrnt he kept silent. Later wen he realise tym wl go away he cnfess his loves. N kalpi is impatiently waiting 4 it wow so sweet yar. He wnt his hpy lyf wid kalpi bt cz of his own success he went to much away frm her n he realising it is touching. N lastly he unknwlingly cried, i felt ltl shivered.

Fabulous update vishu

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal

Awesome update
fabulous flashbacks
happy to know raghav wanted to give second chance to their relationship
update soon🤗

Originally posted by: Anjinie

interesting, so what has gone wrong with them,

Originally posted by: Shivanie05

Sweet lord this is excellent writing my dear this FF is getting very very interested please continue soon

Originally posted by: vasishna

Resss

unresss..😃 this tym I really unres-ed soon!😆😛

heyyllooo vish..

update was super intrestngg..

as far as I know.. first tym I read a romantic part in ur ff.. and u did it really well and lso diffrntlyy I lykd it!

in the ff it seems lyk no one cares abt other lyf.. lyk gauri being busy with parties n pakhi in trips and all.. at least kalpi has her daughter as a company to her.. and d reason u gave fr ria in d previous comment s totally agreeable.. it affects children a lot..

even though its still a 2nd chap I'm very curious to know d past.. lyk wat might be d reason dat raghav has done a drastic mistake..

anyways I'll be waiting patientlyy fr d updates..

Originally posted by: fairylover

Thank Vaishu... Glad u unresed soon.

Happy u liked it... It was my first attempt at romance ans m happy that I succeeded.

Gauri n Pakhi do not care abt the relations thats y i wrote that last line in my 1st update.

Ria plays an imp role here.. She is the catalyst while she is the problem.. The story revolves around the conflict of mother n wife and how a father tries to search the lost husband in himself.. I do not know what I am saying,,, I hope I am clear.

I am just scared that I might disappoint u with the past..still i will try my best.😊

Originally posted by: priya_remix

beautiful dear! its strange how you write so many ff's together yet the scenes or the story are so diff from each other! Aww Raghav was an average? Kalpi as usual was brilliant!

Could so relate to Kalpi's loneliness! But it is the bitter truth of life that after marriage relations are taken for granted and then one of them feels lonely and left out!

She has a house full of people but its no longer a happy home!

Aww Raghav was so romantic! And now he expects her to understand? Money people can make but can it buy back the love you have lost?

hmmm you may buy pleasure but not love!

Pity Raghav who ignored Kalpi for so long!

But as they say its never to late to rekindle the fire! Maybe they just need a break only the two of them together and no one else!

Fool all he had to do was plan a second honeymoon😆 or even a family outing would be great and poor Riya would also have enjoyed!

Lets see what Raghav can do to win his Kalpi back other than just claiming the custody of their daughter to hold her back!

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Aww Vish! I don't know what to say... today words fail me... I'm typing...deleting and then typing again. Loved this update would be an understatement. I bonded with the story so much that I still have tears in my eyes. Maybe it has got to do with the harsh reality in life in stark contrast to the other lovey-dovey stories. Kalpi is a perfect daughter-in-law who cares for her husband's family like her own. She enquires about a sis-in-law whose life starts and ends with partying and friends, concerned about a mom-in-law who is too busy in attending exhibitions and kitty parties, maybe. Still sits and waits for her husband who never have dinner with her. She's the perfect mother who doesn't want her daughter to know about her parent's marital discord. She's a simple person who is happy to have lunch with her colleagues in college and help her students in their personal problems.

The flashback scene was very romantic, realistic like that of a newly married couple who finds romance in every little thing they do. They were very much in love. Till now you had shown Kalpi's pov. Now you have shown Raghav reminiscing their past about how he plucked up courage and proposed her. It was lovely how she patiently wait for him to ask her. He doesn't want them to separate and he thinks child custody is the only thing that ensures she doesn't leave him. But why doesn't he make her understand . Agreed he couldn't express himself and she promised to read his mind. But later on he was very romantic. In order to achieve success in life he sacrificed their lives . Eager to know what went wrong for a much in love couple that today their fate is being decided by the court. Loved it so much that. When will you update next. I know you are busy on weekends. But please... update soon 😳

I'm blabbering too much. Still under the effect, I think.