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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

Kiara bae! 🤗 Yup. This one was all for you. It was such a cute way to ask that it melted my heart completely. Lol. That was a very good guess. Actually I changed Kalpi's name from "Candy" to "Belle". It felt too mainstream for me so instead I went with "Belle" instead. Yup. That's their life for them. I know! I love Dan Brown too! DaVinci Code, Angels and Demons, Deception Point, The Lost Symbol, I love 'em all. He's one of my favorite authors of all time. Lol. You guessed right! You will have to wait and see. But one thing I can say is that the meeting will happen very soon. I'm not going to drag it at all because I believe dragging just makes the reader lose interest but not moving too quickly so that the readers can't process it. We'll go at an even pace that allows everything to sink in and so that you and I both can enjoy. Thanks love! I appreciate it! ❤️

Thank you Raz, once again for the dedication. I didn't know you have a weak heart or I would have manipulated you earlier. ...lol. I understand, when i hear the name Candy all I could think of was a pole dancer or someone from striptease. Hey, I love Dan Brown too and have read them all. Priya once mentioned that you are also a Potter maniac like me. Seems we actually have a lot in common. My all time favourite author is James Patterson though.

I know how good you are. I have complete faith in you as a writer. You will keep us hooked to this story as well, no doubt. Thanks once again sweetheart! Love ya...mwaah. ... How about an update soon? 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: sunyy
Loved the beginning but do u have to have pakhi. That character leaves a bad taste in my mouth. I don't like rags with her and super hot I don't think so. But loving kalpi and aira. Interested to see how rags and kalpi meet pls update soon.

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LOL! The way you said that cracked me up and I had to take a two minute break just to laugh like a maniac. I'm sorry but yes I do have to have Pakhi. The only thing I will say is that when you know that the two won't end up together, there's no need to worry 😛. Ahahahaahaha! Trust me I don't like Pakhi one bit either so you can expect her to be kicked off soon. 😆 Will update soon!

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: chahat4u
thanks for the PM Raz and once again a different concept. Actually so different that I hadn't even expected it. LOL. But I am loving it, this would make the journey interesting and intriguing. Thanks for differentiating between escorts and prostitutes. I was aware of some differences. I love it that you're showing the other side of the coin, their pains and the helplessness, their dreams of still a loving man, a stable family. Also what you are showing is very-very realistic, & practical; from the point of view of two girls who are not wanted at home; and who left their home to make their own home. in search of a good life. But life is not easy for girl,s and especially for helpless, alone girls. They had to accept this profession as they had no other choice. ..
n Thanks for introducing Aira again, I have come to love this character so much. 😃

You also differentiated the love lives of Raghav and Samar Singhania (I love yo made Samar a Singhania) 😆 They already have girl friends, and they also don't seem to be going to escorts, at least right now. Then how'll they meet these two girls? I am curious to know, and loved the normal simple girl side of the two girls as well. Please do not take time to update next part, loving it so much. 😃 👏❤️

P.S.: In Love with your banner. 😃

I can't believe I missed this comment 😭😭. But here I am! 😊 Well that's what I like! I love the unexpected hence why most of my stories have cliffhangers and such. Yes. I had to make sure the distinction was clear before we begun. Well I won't say that every escort faces a double life but for hte purpose of this story this was how I wanted to shape their backstory up. It really isn't. Specially in India judging from what I've heard and read.

Ahahahhahaha. She grows on you doesn't she? Hence why she has become one of my favorite OCs. I love her to the core. Yes I did. Many people already are opposing the Raghav-Pakhi thing but trust me, no worries are needed when you know RagNa are going to end up together.LOL! Yes I did! I made him into Singhania because the bond that the two share is more of brothers than of friends. Hmm..Keep reading! The first meeting isn't too far off. I will update soon!

Take care!

Thank hun! The banner I really wasn't sure of. 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: vasishna
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heyyllooo..
update was nyc n intrestng..
even though its jus a beginning I'm jus waiting fr their frst meeting bt intro s a necessary one ryt.. and u made samar a singhania dats good to hear..
waiting fr further updates..

Hello hello! THank you! Meeting isn't too far off. I promise. I think next update or so we will have the first meet. Yup, Samar had to become a Singhania because I have found their friendship bond to be deeper and more like that of brothers.

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Dee (Daisy)

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

This is getting more interesting, so Sammy & Raghav are bros. Pakhi is Raghav's GF well I don't like that character but I'm sure you have something interesting planned here.

Guess the change you made were in the professional name of Kalpi, it sorta hit me when I read Belle cause that's a name I like& was sure you hadn't mentioned it before (am I right)

Looking forward to the Ragna meeting, also looks like Aira has a crush on Raghav, looks like there might be some twist or complication in future

P.S. Forgot to mention earlier, I really love the banner Raz

Edited by drdee142 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

And I'm back to reply!

Originally posted by: smileysmile
Thanks for the PM Raz. The way you introduced Raghav and Sammy with their girlfriends, that too deeply in love with their respective GFs, I am mulling over. How will then Raghav will meet Kalpi? I know you have already thought about this. Just waiting for the next chapter. 😊

No problem! Oh that's good then! Keep mulling over it because you will soon at peace in the next update. 😉 Lol. I've tried to think this through but trust me, whenever I plan a story it always ends up going the opposite way. Isiliye never trust what I have planned. I have my light-bulb moments 😆.