Ragna FF 'Journey to be together' part 31b~147

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SUGANDHII

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Posted: 10 years ago

#901

Originally posted by: sweet1308
Lovely update wow rag fighting wiz kalpi n his fear was amazing

Ty😊

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SUGANDHII

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Posted: 10 years ago

#902

Originally posted by: yadanu
lovely update

ragna conversation was funny n awesome

waiting for precap update

Ty😆😊

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SUGANDHII

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Posted: 10 years ago

#903

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal
Awesome update
continue soon

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I'll try to update soon

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SUGANDHII

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Posted: 10 years ago

#904

Originally posted by: Chin2_n
Very nice update Sugandhi, I guess it will be family Reunion after court hearing😉

Ty😊

N after court hearing😕 m majboor hu😆😲🥱

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Posted: 10 years ago

#905

I love the banner for this ff!! It's amazing!!

Edited by DiVirgo - 10 years ago

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SUGANDHII

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Posted: 10 years ago

#906

Originally posted by: riaka
Awesome update. Ragna R still confused about there feelings😲. What to do? Waiting for court scene and Ragna's hug🤗

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Well we can't do anything😭 it's ok riaka😆😆

Ragna hug😕 u didn't notice the hug in dis update😭

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SUGANDHII

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Posted: 10 years ago

#907

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Ragna are back doing what they do best. Fighting. ... cute though! Raghav is trying to call her and she is not picking up. Worried Raghav reaches the chawl. Didn't even think what Kamala will say but rushed to Kalpi 's side when he learnt she's in terrace. Loved the hug. Eventually broke the hug when they came to their senses. Liked how Raghav made Kalpi realise how he felt when she ignored him. Tit for tat. ... I like it! Kamala witnesses the whole thing. Still doesn't understand what's cooking between these too. No wonder every one calls her 'dumbla'. Even a blind person can see the love for each other in their eyes though they are too strong headed to accept it.

Ty kiara😊

Glad u lyked d Tit for tat moment😆😉

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SUGANDHII

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Posted: 10 years ago

#908

Originally posted by: sunyy
Really awesome update. Can't wait for more

Ty😊

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ovee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#909

When ur updating next part ? I am eagarly waiting for ur update

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SUGANDHII

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Posted: 10 years ago

#910

Originally posted by: mariee
Banda kitna dhith hai ...even now he says hes doin it all for Kamla maa ...gosh ya ...get a reality check singhaniya !!
whom did sammy text ?? i know kalpi will be jealous so i wont be askin that Q.
A small lil suggestion ... the terrace scene was gr8 bur i personally feel u cud have made it better !! That was a perfect scene which had all emotions summed up in it.
Thr story's goin quite well ...
hope to see an update soon with more & more of ragna😉

MARUSHKAA

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Yup she will jealous n will punish raghav in her own way😉

N this what I waited for..

Finally I know exactly what was missing in this part... Even I thought about that terrace scene wasn't up to d mark.. lyk there is lot of things which were missing.. and not written as I wanted

1: kalpana reaction to d hug nd to his questions...it could have been better but😭

2. Kamla's reaction..

N most importantly Ragna..😭 this happen bcz I can't resist myself to update it yesterday only as promised... so I didn't re read it...😆😕

But Marushka ur suggestions really needed at this particular tym.. shall try to improve in a better way😃

But do u think I need to edit it agian?? Or just?? U know??

N thank u😊