Ragna SS : There are no coincidences- Epilogue- Pg 125 13/2 - Page 86

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Posted: 10 years ago
ooo its last update...ye dil mange more... 😛
awesome...love cute fighting over singing divorce papers...pahele aap pahele aap ... 😛 😆
& kamala is W***h...
but missed Malhar... waiting for her in Epilogue & Sammy also...
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear..
but i disapoint with kamala's change chara..i thought its some go a dramatic way..
like gauri and kamala play a parnk on raghav-kalpi and add there spice on there this fake marriage natak..
but u give me jhataka by this update..its something i didn't think..
its amazing and hat's off to u dear..i feel bad its end..but koi baat nahi
u r other story update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Note- :
added a few lines in the end (after he gives her the painting) ...do check if interested ! The climax somewhat seemed incomplete ...but now i think i have mended it to some extent
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome awesome awesome update MARSH
Loved this update from its beginning to the end...specially kalpi's confession to raghav..it was like raghav has succeed in his plan to made her confess her love...
you know, i was smiling while reading.."you...no you.,u first...no u first." 😆 Nd finally she confessed.

when i read raghav's outburst hearing kalpi had appealed for their divorce, i thought he was literally saying all that,but then i read "but he didn't" I was like he is quite yet..😆 but i really felt his pain.😭
and after that his face to face to lawyer😲 i Was praying for him that pls kalpi do something to stop him.,then i read "u signed it first",,,i said " raghav jaag gaya" 😆 Bada maza aya mujhe toh..

and then confession 😳
and then lap scene ☺️ But this kamla "kabab mein haddi,..haddi ,.haddi" 😡 Nd her true personality came out.,.she was not less than kapoors in the original series but i wish this kamla's presence in original ema... But u did it marsh here,..in ur story...u deserve muah muah...one for ur right cheek nd one for ur left cheek..love u marsh for showing this selfish kamla.

love strong kalpi here...nd then raghav saying "u r not alone anymore"😳

nd their bedroom scene., nd the newspaper wali headline 🤣


u deserve 👏⭐️ for this update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mariee what a dhamakedar ending dear !!!! Loved it and evil kamala kya twist hai boss ! Ekdum jhakaas !!!!!!! Bhidu ek epilogue tho pakka banta hai re itni badiya isstory ka !!!!!! 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi mariee how r u remember me? after a long time u have updated & the update is just awsome I loved it say aren't u writting any ff or ss if u r pls notify me pls...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Note - This 1s written entirely for the rockstar of this ss...she was supposed to do just a cameo kindda thing , but then writing her was fun & I let her remain till the end. Poor thing , couldn't incorporate her in the last update ...& hence the epilogue for the one & only ' Malhar' !

The epilogue is dedicated to every single reader of my tp ss- There are no Coincidences ! 😃😃

Epilogue

He stood there near his cupboard, flinging his clothes on the bed one by one after they underwent rejection from the 'Raghav test'. A carefree Raghav who never paid attention to his attire was keen on looking his best today. Afterall today was a special day , actually a day specialer than the specialist (i know no such words exist , but bear it !) "Arghhh"he groaned as his fingers grasped a fistful of hair with frustration. Then passing a hand from his forehead till his bearded jaw he turned around lazily...

His eyes discerned a nice big heap of clothes scattered all over the bed.

R POV : O Shit ! Kalpana's gonna screw me bad if she sees this ..

The very next moment, the Punjabi sher rushed to the bed as he tried sorting the clothes he had thrown a while ago. He had just started with his task when "Mr. Singhaniya ? U aren't ready yet ? & what is this ...why is ur bed so messy ? The function's gonna start in an hour & here u r , yet in ur shorts? How irresponsible can a human be ...

R POV : & there comes the khatarnak mini version of wifey !

Plainly ignoring Malhar's rant , rant which he was quite accustomed by then he continued to gather his clothes. A second later Raghav saw a 3 ft Malhar standing in front of him , her hands on her hips as she glares at Raghav with her ever-fiery eyes. Straightening her spectacles like she always does, she huffed

M : Mr Singhaniya , when are you planning to get ready ? After the function gets over ... Do u want Kalpana Di to be congratulated alone ? (studying the mess around) If u were finding it tough to decide what to wear , u should hve called me na !

Raghav's eyes shone like a naughty elf as he drove his gaze on Malhar from top to bottom to make her conscious. Then patting her head lightly to irritate her on purpose

R : Babbbyy ? Have u seen urself in the mirror first. U r looking like a clown ...just a red spongy nose here (pinching her nose & shaking her head vigorously) & Ull be all ready to be delivered to the circus.

She knocked his hand off her nose abruptly & turned to see herself in the mirror

M : I am not looking like a clown ...do u get that ?

But the firmness in her voice was missing as she gazed at her golden & blue chhudidaar, a side pony tail with matching bob pins ... So not her style ! But she had let it remain for Paakhi & Kalpana Di's sake. She was yet checking herself when she heard Raghav whisper somethin in her ear

R : Babby ? Are u sure ? I mean ...I don't mind dropping u off at a circus ... We can even purchase a red nose for u ...

Ahh ! Now that was straight on Malhar's ego which wud be too high while speaking to her Mr. Singhaniya ... Placing her tiny lil palms on Raghav's chest (since he had bent down to whisper) she pushed him back. He collapsed on the floor due to (1) the sudden attack & (2) coz he loved to infuriate the chhota volcano. & then he was bombarded with a rain of negligibly strong punches on his chest as she sat on his stomach (with this line I wanna show that the matured girl has actually started behaving like a kid..ofcourse with the Malharic touch to it😃)

M : (hitting him & yelling) I have told u so many times not to call me baby ! But u just don't seem to understand ...& u taking me to a circus ? Yes , we should definitely go ...so tat i can leave u in a cage full of hungry lions...

On the other hand Raghav lay there on the floor laughing to his heart's content.

R POV : I am already staying with 2 shernis at home ...vo kya kam hai ?

M : Ahhh ! Stop laughing Mr. Singhaniya ... Trust me I can really do ...

"Malhar...Raghav ! " was a low shriek the duo straggled on the floor heard. It was Kalpana as she took long strides in order to reach them. Raghav couldn't take his eyes off his wifey - Kalpana Raghav Singhaniya who was ascending towards him. She looked ecstatic in her Saree as he continued ogling at his wife. Man ! She was beautiful !!

K : What are the 2 of u upto ? (helping them off the ground) What if the baby had woken up coz of the hassle ull are creating ?

R : But the baby is already awake Kalpana ...see ...Malhar, the babbbyyy is wide awake ...ole ole

& there was Malhar , all set to invade Raghav

M : (yelling) Dont u dare call me a bab...

'ehehhehhe (the threatening fake cry of a baby ... Don't know bout ull. But have heard my nautanki chuttku siblings do this many times'😆) was the crying in the background that interrupted Malhar's words as the trio rushed to the cradle beside the bed. In it was a 1month old baby wrapped in pink. Her cheeks, deep scarlet with jet black hair already reaching her neck. All of them had that unusual awww expression as they saw the baby wriggle out of the cloth wrapped around her as she managed to get one of her hands out. It was as if that made her comfortable as the baby fell asleep all over again snuggling in its pillowy mattresses... The 3 stood there gaping at the baby for a while or more. It was New & unusually different for each 1 of them ...Raghav was away when Paakhi was born , Pakya was Kalpana's elder bro & Malhar had absolute no chances. Affection oozing out of the 3 pair of eyes, their reverie broke when

S : I hope ull haven't forgotten that today is the baby's naming ceremony guys. Fasten up please ... The guests are waiting for ull. & what's this Raghav , u haven't dressed up yet ?

R : Yeah ..yeah ...I am doing it. I wanna look the best at my angel's naming ceremony afterall.

S : Do so quickly ..please! Here are ur drycleaned clothes (handing him a bag)

M : I'll take the baby to Paakhi Di ..ok ?

Saying so Malhar exited the room with the baby in her arms & Sammy following her. Kalpana was about to leave as well , but was pinned to the wall by ...Raghav obviously. His hand roamed on her perfect jawline as he caressed the softness of her skin. His face now hovering above hers precisely

R : Ek kiss toh de do !! (Marushkaa - a die hard fan of non majboor Raghav's dialogues...)

K : Raagghhavvv...

She pushed him lightly (This Kalpana isn't a naazook Kali ...she fought with the goons single-handedly) as he stuttered a few steps back. That was enough for her to escape as she bolted out the door. Raghav followed her as well , but stopped at the door. He knew Kalpana might have succeeded to run away by then. He was abt to turn when he felt someone grabbing his collar & the next he felt were her lips on his. Taking his own sweet time to devour them to the fullest , though he knew he would never get enough of it ...he deepened the kiss. Seconds later Raghav let her go, but not b4 placing a kiss on her forehead , he loved to do that !!

After Kalpana had left Raghav stared at his room as he took in the scenic view like a content man. His room was the same , but it now had many many visible traces of kalpana in it. Then may it be 1/2 portion of his cupboard, his dressing table , his bed ... His everything !! & he liked it that way ... He chuckled on seeing the cradle beside his bed

R POV : Singhaniya ...u need to beware now. Its gonna be a woman's house from now onwards ...😆😆

The naming ceremony had finally begun. Raghav & Kalpana sat side by side with the baby resting peacefully in Kalpana's lap. After a couple of rituals , the moment finally arrived when the baby would be named. Raghav's eyes were now fixed on the baby

R : (holding the baby's palm in his) And the baby's name would be ...

He was about to name the baby , but stopped midway on seeing Malhar's gloomy face. He smiled , he knew what she wanted , she wanted to name her baby sister ...

R : would be ... Named by my elder daughter Malhar Raghav Singhaniya.

Yes guys ! After the official ragna confession Raghav & Kalpana had come up with a mutual decision of adopting Malhar. & they did the same ..her biological parents cared a damn about it, but Sammy was happy. He was happy that his niece would finally get the love she deserved . She had changed her name , but her equation with her Mr. Singhaniya & Kalpana Di remained the same until ...

M : (crawling on her knees as she reached the baby) Can I really name her Mr. Singha...ummm...Dad ?

Raghav's lips curved upwards in a parabolic smile. It was after 3 long years that Malhar had accepted that relation which was on-paper so long.

M : What , don't think too much ! I am doing all this for my younger sister. I don't wanna be a wrong influence for her.

R : Yeah right ! (he grinned at her safed jhoot ...along with Kalpana & Sammy...the baby also maybe. Err... let's not consider her now )

Gauri : Name the baby Malhar ?

(its atleast a ritual in our family that we first explain the name , & the reason as to why a particular name is kept. Have tried doing something similar here😃😃)

M : Ok...I have learnt in my singing class , Malhar is one of the ragas of Indian music. Malhar the raga played just before the rains ... & thats when I felt my sister should also have a name related to something as pure & divine like music. She should be the reason of people's happiness like music does. So, Unlike mine - which is sung only during the rains I want my baby sister to be sung daily ...be cherished daily...(holding the baby's hand) similar to the raga of Indian music which is sung every evening ...the baby's name will be

R,K,S,G... : Will be ?

M : Marwa ! (marwa, malhar & yaman are the only 3 ragas I am aware of. So named her this as it started with M & had the sound of 'r' in it)

Everybody smiled. They seemed to like the name as they congratulated Raghav & Kalpana. While all of that was going on, Kalpana carefully handed the baby to Malhar & asked her to take her to their room...as the place was now bustling with noises & that might scare the baby.

Malhar was more than happy to do so. She had always loved to be with the baby ... Once inside the room,she placed Marwa on the bed with utmost care

M : Hey Marwa ! It's me Malhar , ur elder sister...

Malhar smiled when she saw the baby chuckle. It was wriggling like always , but Malhar had carefully placed her between the pillows. A while later , showing her the huge portrait of Raghav & Kalpana

M : Hey ...u see there ! Those are ur...I mean ...our Mom-Dad ! (playing with a chuckling Marwa's fingers) Ur mom is a great great person. I wud love to be somethin like her when I be of her age. & as for our dad ...trust me , he's the most weirdo kindda person on earth ...

Malhar saw Marwa let out a laugh in her babyish voice , as if smiling in agreement

M : But he's a very nice man. He has always been next to me whenever I needed him. Then may it be some instances where my classmates used to tease me for being orphan or when I had cold shivers in the snow...some 3 years back. We are really really very lucky to have him as our father. But that doesnt mean we would stop troubling him...right sister ?

The baby's hand accidently hit her palm as Malhar considered it to be a coincidence...but who knows , that might be a high five ...afterall , there are no coincidences , are there ??

& there goes the epilogue finallyy...😃😃With which i finally seal this ss off ..hope ull enjoyed reading it ...


MARIEE

& 1 more thing , Henceforth if ull see me online (till next friday) pm me there & then''MARIEE ...GO STUDY !! U HAVE EXAMS FROM 16th/ UR EXAMS ARE GOING ON ! "😆😆




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Edited by mariee - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Tee hee!!

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Awwwiiieee!!!!

What an epilogue!!! How sweet that Malhar could get a father and mother in Raghav n Kalpana!

And I loved it that she started behaving like a normal kid now!!!! Such a sweet epilogue just as sweet as my Chakuli!!!!

Ha Ha Ha

Loved it!

But I am gonna miss it tooo!!!!😭

Chal all the best for your assignments dear!!!
Edited by priya_remix - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful epilogue. A family of four. How sweet.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice epilogue really awesome rag n his family

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