Celebration of Fates: RagNa FF, Part-23, Pg-147, 30/07 - Page 66

At last, the' clouds in Kalpi's sky [life ] are clearing ' ! Sammy/Rags convo is amusing. Thanks for the update.

Raghav lost in his honeybee thoughts was amazing
I love the smirk and the genuine smile he had on his face during his daydream
Sammy is truly a love guru :)
I love Sammy and Raghav conversation. The way he explain the feeling of love was superb
(Charu u did a marvelous job with the love description 😊 )
Kalpi telling Sapna about Raghav and her past was wonderful
I like how Sapna help her to realized how wrong she was about Raghav eight year ago
Beautiful update, I love it

Oh wow!! So beautiful you have described both of their fights within them and how talking it aloud made them aware of the feelings that they were denying...

Ease update waiting for ragna face to face after realization and trp party 😛

Charu not fair at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, firstly let me say Sorry for late to comment. sorry again i have no words for express my delight in read your story. Thanks a lot dear... m speechless.. just... I can say is; I loved it.

Update plzz dida... Not fair... Why u r not updating... Why??? Why???? Why???? We all r waiting... Update dedo na plzzz...

Wow dear the iron fort broke btw who propose first chahat its really so nice dear

Oh My My charuuu wat an update 👏 You displayed Both of Their emotions Very Well I felt It..
Well from start yaar humare hero day dreaming wat To do He got honey from his honeybee "wah u know I love Ur honeybee wala dialogue charuu " whenever honeybee dialogue cums dunno I'll end up blushing 😛 ok The funniest thing s sammy observing his each n every expression hahaha who won't laugh THE MIGHTY RAGHAV SINGHANIA s DAY-DREAMING ABOUT HIS LADY LOVE treat To Watch him Nd Next The way Sammy explained him about love at frst I thought He Did PhD 😆 😆 jokes apart concern fr his frnd I must say sammy jaisa frnd sabko mila yar Too good he s atlast Now He got to knw dat he s n lv With her . 😳 I felt really bad fr raghv bcz She didn't trusted him..IT pains alot when person who knows us Very Well still She didnt trust him nt even given a chance to explain...
Now About kalpi thank God due To sapna She got To know There Is other side of The coin... She didn't Even Think once how Can raghv Do such a stupid thing anyway her mind ruled dat day... The way sapna s firing questions on her glad dat atleast kalpi realized It Now dat She did a mistake by Not trusting him.. sometimes wat v see nd hear may nt be truth.. She knows him Very well how he always kept his promises... fir bhi abt dat dreadful event her mind still rules... I felt emotional When She breakdown...
YOU showed Both raghv nd kalpi emotions Very well... I felt Their pain It happened bcz f ur writing u r fab my charuupooo love you fr This update... waiting fr next one 😉

Update next part soon charu