Celebration of Fates: RagNa FF, Part-23, Pg-147, 30/07

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Aru18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#241

amazing update dear.

plz update soon

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hathway

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Posted: 11 years ago

#242

Was this the punishment for kalpi for slaping Raghav or did Raghav have true feelings for her?? i just hope he is not attracted towards Kalpi physically, but loves her and cares for her to the core.

And if he truly loves her, then how can he live with 8 years of separation?

Eagerly waiting for the next update, as to why he did not get back to her for so many years??

Loved the update, it was too hot😉

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#243

kya aapne hamara man mohit karni ki kasam kha rakhi hai ? Shabdon mein bayaan karna kathin hai ki aapke vichaar aur bhasha prayog se ham kitne prabhavit hai. is lekh ki har ek baat ne hamare vichaar gher rakhe hai...yadi parso ki pariksha mein hamaare kam ank aaye toh iska dosh kahi na kahi aapke is lekh ko jaayega😆

chahat ...i loved it ...simply loved it. Though im usually away from writng & reading physical romance ...but u have that art of presenting it all in a way so that it doesnt seem vulgur.

at first i used to claim... chahat cannot beat her glass wall ( u noe how much i like it ) ...but u urself proved me wrong. Now its tough to decide which 1 i like more..this or glass well...actually i love both.

please keep updating ...im waiting.

& that exam thing ...i was just kidding...dont take it seriously.

LOVE, MARUSHKAA

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Shivanie Ramballie

@Shivanie05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#244

Wow awesome update my darling I am in Ragna heaven Rags getting it on with Kalpu my gosh hot hot hot update

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MagicalMadness

@MagicalMadness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#245

Naughty update 😉 I hope they sort out their differences soon

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b.baheti

@b.baheti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#246

This ff of urs is completely different. I enjoyed every update of urs. Its too good n amazing. The flashback part was awesome how he proved his point to kalpi.

Update soon wanna know how is he going to tackle the present situation

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: appyK
Res.. Here before pm😉
Unres..

Awesome update.. You really raised the temperature...😳
Glad that Raghav didn't take her advantage or I would've really hated him...
Eagerly waiting to know what happened on play night..

Arpita you are awesome. 😆 ❤️ Thanks for being stalker no.1! 😃 I am happy to raise the temperature.😛 I'll update soon next part. 😊

Originally posted by: ragnaareangel
Res
Nice update

Thanks. 😊

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Wow me staker #3

Loved it !

Whoosh!!! What a hot update!!! My my! I am out of breath now!

Too much heh!!! Poor Kalpi all of just 17! and to be tortured by Raghav in this fashion!

Must say Kalpi is sooo strong to resist him!!!! mmm my yummy Raghav!!!! LOL

Okay lemme have second read at this!😛

Love u!

Priya thanks for this lovely comment. 😊 n for being a sweet stalker. 😆😃 yes, Kalpi is too strong to resist so much hotness 😆 Even i couldn't resist it while writing it. 😛 ☺️ Love you loads too. 😃 🤗

Originally posted by: vasishna
😊Res
Unresss
Wowww charu.. dat was realyyy awesum n too romantic one!!
I dint expect dat he would kiss her again to prove her wrong.. totally romantic n amazngg dear.. poor guys tryng to hide their feelings again!
Eager to know wat happens nxt

Thank you Vasishna. 😃 I am guessing that second surprise was a good one. 😆😳 I was afraid that I maybe criticised for showing so much hotness. 😆😛 I'll try to update next part soon. 😃

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal
Awesome🤗

Thanks dear. 😃 🤗

Originally posted by: jiya007
Nice Update

Thank you Jiya. 😊

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: sweet1308
just lovely
waiting 4 more

Thanks dear. I'll try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: premap
Hmmm! Thrilling updates. Keeps us awaiting for the next update. SOON ,PLEASE 1

Thanks. 😃 I will try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: DiVirgo
👏 👏 👏 damn hot update! I love it!! Loved every bit of the seduction! Did he do it because he couldn't resist? Or he did it because he wanted to prove to her that she have feelings for him?! Or is it a way to get back to her for doing everything he did?! Was it a punishment? And he's sorry now?! Did he really want to do it?! Or he couldn't resist her Sexiness?! Charu you're awesome!! Plz I need answers!! Update soon!! xoxoxoxoxox

Di...🤗 🤗 🤗 Thanks for loving that...seduction.😆😳 I was skeptical and afraid lest I maybe criticised for showing this much hotness, but I can't helpt it! LOL! 😆😛 Yes, he could not resist her, but he did it primarily to prove to her that he was right, that she had feelings for him too, that she too enjoyed it as much as he did, and that also served to satisfy his ego! 😆😛 No he won;t get back to her in this way for their childhood times enemy sake. Thanks you so much Di for your encouragement. I'll try to update soon. 😃 🤗 ❤️ ❤️

Originally posted by: singhania
Awesome dear,Hats off to you! This is pure RagNa Heaven moments❤️❤️. Im gonna read it a 2nd time, coz one time isnt enough😉😆

Thank you Razia. 😊😃 This is a sweet compliment, hope you had a good second time reading also! 😃 ❤️

Originally posted by: sweet_aditi
awesome update charu 👏
update next part soon 😃

Thanks Aditi. I'll try to update next part soon. 😊😃

Originally posted by: Aru18
amazing update dear.
plz update soon

Thank you so much Aruhi. I will try to update next part soon. 😊😃

Originally posted by: hathway
Was this the punishment for kalpi for slaping Raghav or did Raghav have true feelings for her?? i just hope he is not attracted towards Kalpi physically, but loves her and cares for her to the core.

And if he truly loves her, then how can he live with 8 years of separation?

Eagerly waiting for the next update, as to why he did not get back to her for so many years??

Loved the update, it was too hot😉

Raghav does have feelings for her, it was a sweet punishment. Let's say he wanted her to acknowledge what she was so visibly denying to accept; and in turn satisfy his ego too.

I will try my best to give answers to some of your questions in the next updates. 😃😊 n Thanks so much for loving it dear. 😃 🤗

Originally posted by: niru04
awesome update

Thank you. 😊

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#249

awesome, cannot wait for them to work together and see how they react towards each other

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: mariee
kya aapne hamara man mohit karni ki kasam kha rakhi hai ? Shabdon mein bayaan karna kathin hai ki aapke vichaar aur bhasha prayog se ham kitne prabhavit hai. is lekh ki har ek baat ne hamare vichaar gher rakhe hai...yadi parso ki pariksha mein hamaare kam ank aaye toh iska dosh kahi na kahi aapke is lekh ko jaayega😆
chahat ...i loved it ...simply loved it. Though im usually away from writng & reading physical romance ...but u have that art of presenting it all in a way so that it doesnt seem vulgur.
at first i used to claim... chahat cannot beat her glass wall ( u noe how much i like it ) ...but u urself proved me wrong. Now its tough to decide which 1 i like more..this or glass well...actually i love both.
please keep updating ...im waiting.
& that exam thing ...i was just kidding...dont take it seriously.

LOVE, MARUSHKAA

ha ha. humein mohini astra ka upyog karne mein ati anand ka anubhav hota hai. vishesh roop se jab humare pathak apni prasaanta itne sunder shabdon mein vyakt karte hain. aap ko parson ki pareekhs k liya humari bahut-bahut shubh kaamnaayein. humara uddeshya aapko pareeksha mei kam ank lana ya anuttern karna kabhi nahi tha. humein gyat hai ki aap ati buddhimaan hain, aur achchhe ank avashya layengi. (OMG so much hindi, nice revision for me!) 😆

Thank you so much Marushkaa. I am aware that many readers are not comfortable with reading physical intimacy part. So I guess I am fortunate that I was able to present it in a decent way, if I may say so; and going by your sweet feedback. I have grown up on hard core Mills & Boon and other kind of romantic novels besides others, and that made my acceptance in such things better.I think that i wn't write too much of it, but every time I write I go away with the flow; and hence hotness level increases a bit too much. So, Ia m sorry if anytime you found anything comfortable. I am touched and bowled over by your sweet compliment though.😃😊🤗

I will try to update next part soon. 😃❤️

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