Celebration of Fates: RagNa FF, Part-23, Pg-147, 30/07

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Both were in odd situation, raghav carried away, he kissed her firstly enjoyed but her realisation lead to slap waiting for raghavs reaction. Awesome update. Waiting for ur update. Update soon.

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#222

woww charu.. dat was awesum!!!

lol raghav can't control his unknown feelings fr kalpi.. and he taking care of kalpi n making accept to stay in his guest huz was good to read..

and sumhw he had managed to cum out of his ego n arrogant attitude he was carrying from long.. and the kiss.. it was beautifulll bt kamla's aatma has cum to ruin this Lol..

and nw their equatns gonna be normal back to their places.. raghav being more harsh to her n all..

and u can carry on with the past fr 2-3 updates.. dat ll be fyn

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#223

haye chahat ...

that slap is just hovering in my mind.

actually i have dis special obsession for girls slapping guys ... and dis 1 toh was awesome

speaking bout the rest of the update ...it was beautiful

loved the way they gave into each other while speaking abt each others pasts. & then he finding care & solace in kalpi's arms.

& then the man in him which was aroused & he ended up kissing her. in so love with this particular update

CONTINUE SOON , DIEING TO GET AN UPDATE

MARUSHKAA

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#224

beautiful, I hope he does not take advantage of Kalpi, pls continue

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Arpita

@appyK

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Kamla ma's daughter awoke😆

Fabulous update.. Loved how Raghav shed down his guards in front of kalpi.. And continue the story how you want to.. No objections as long as you keep updating😃

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Fabulous update Charu! Loved it totally! Raghav didn't know he had a thing for his childhood enemy till she appeared all wet and sexy in front of him. He is surprised with himself. He's thinking why the sight of this Kalpana is bothering him. So for masking his feelings he puts on attitude. She mistook it as his arrogance. But when he started eyeing her she realised he's not just someone she fights with, but he's a man as well. He was amused to see her unsuccessfully trying to cover herself. I knew something like this is gonna happen but I thought they will have to spend the night in the car. Then the hug ... I always say this, I have a thing for ragna hugs. It's the most romantic thing in the world. They have hugged before in their plays but as characters. This time it was Raghav and Kalpana who were hugging. Then she also felt something for him. Later she had to wear his t-shirt and he like a true gentleman took the food to her room so that she doesn't have to come down in that dress. How sweet! But he couldn't stop himself from staring at her. To his surprise he broke down in front of her while talking about his dad. She took him in her arms and pacified him surprising both of them. Initially he was just revelling in her solace but later the man in him was aroused by the proximity and he started kissing her. She too gave in at first, then the Kalpi ( fighter one?) kicked in and she just slapped him. What the hell! Now she will blame him for taking advantage of her. Also no problem if there is more to the flashback and there are more of these updates. Would help in understanding them better. Sorry , thoda zyada long comment ho gaya!

Edited by ragna_luv - 11 years ago

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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#227

omg... great update...loved it...I find flashback short...can make it long...really enjoyed it...

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal
Amazing update...
continue soon😊

Thank you Shikha. I'll try yo update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: priya_remix
OMG wat an update! Wow loved it! absolutely!
And yes no worries go on with the flashback 2- 3 4 as many as you want!

And Kalpi I am sure she enjoyed the kiss but later she slapped him! Kamla's aatma entered her body???? Kamla ka hamla via Kalpi! LOL😆
Poor Raghav!!!

I already read this update twice! Loved the way he tried to cover her with her dupatta! Poor Raghav couldn't control his hormones could he!???😉

Update soon charu me waiting!!!

Priya...🤗 Coming from a fabulous writer like you this comment means a lot. 😃 ❤️ Yes Kalpi did enjoy the kiss then, Kamla ki aatna woke up in her. 😆 😛 Thanks a lot for loving this so much. I'll try to update soon hon. 😃😳😊

Originally posted by: sunyy
So so good. I m looking forward to rags and kalpi having a friendship bloom between them. Today you have shown a connection between them. Continue soon

Thanks dear. 😊 I'll try to update it soon.😊

Originally posted by: DiVirgo
Damn girl!! This is awesome! I love it!! No objections!! Love the situation!! Want more flash backs! So there's more? Did he do more stuff to her? ;)

Di how sweet of you. How is my birthday girl? 😃 🤗 ❤️ Well, if he did more or not, I'll reveal it soon. 😛😉😃

Originally posted by: dimpleagar
superb yaar... Flash back is soo gud😳
Kamla
Kalpi slapped Raghav...no no infact Kalpi touched Raghavs ego n now wht wil Raghav do😲

Thank you Dimple. 😊 Ha ha, right Kalpi touched Rahav's ego so he'll definitely react! 😛

Originally posted by: eishe10
Very nice update!! Continue soon😊

Thanks. I'll try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: singhania
Hi Charu, Again Bravo for your update dear.👏👏 I enjoy the RagNa flashback & will welcome many more👍🏼. Plz carry on coz Im really missing RagNa moments.❤️❤️ Thanks for replying & PM me, my name is Razia. You are a gem of a writer, plz continue to update & dont forget to PM me. RagNa forever!😉

Wow...Hi Razia. You remember my name! 😲 😃 Thanks for this beautiful and sweet compliment+feedback sweets. 😃 ❤️ i'll try to update it soon. 😊

Originally posted by: hathway
Loved the flashback!!! Cute Ragna Moments😊

Please continue the story in your own pace!!

Waiting for your next update!!

Thank you for your feedback 😊. I'll try to update it asap.

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: Shivanie05
Woderful update my dear that's ok with the flasback but don't drag it for too long ok I am loving the Ragna this way and can't wait to know the reason for the big fight.

Thanks. I'll do my best to complete the flashback part asap. 😊

Originally posted by: niru04
Lovely update

Thanks. 😊

Originally posted by: Cinderella81
Both were in odd situation, raghav carried away, he kissed her firstly enjoyed but her realisation lead to slap waiting for raghavs reaction. Awesome update. Waiting for ur update. Update soon.

Thank you dear. I'll try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: Chin2_n
Beautiful update👍🏼

Thank you. 😃

Originally posted by: vasishna
woww charu.. dat was awesum!!!
lol raghav can't control his unknown feelings fr kalpi.. and he taking care of kalpi n making accept to stay in his guest huz was good to read..
and sumhw he had managed to cum out of his ego n arrogant attitude he was carrying from long.. and the kiss.. it was beautifulll bt kamla's aatma has cum to ruin this Lol..
and nw their equatns gonna be normal back to their places.. raghav being more harsh to her n all..
and u can carry on with the past fr 2-3 updates.. dat ll be fyn

Thank you Vasishna dear for the detailed feedback on everything & for finding Ragna closeness beautiful. 😊 😃❤️

Originally posted by: mariee
haye chahat ...
that slap is just hovering in my mind.
actually i have dis special obsession for girls slapping guys ... and dis 1 toh was awesome
speaking bout the rest of the update ...it was beautiful
loved the way they gave into each other while speaking abt each others pasts. & then he finding care & solace in kalpi's arms.
& then the man in him which was aroused & he ended up kissing her. in so love with this particular update
CONTINUE SOON , DIEING TO GET AN UPDATE

MARUSHKAA

Hi Marushkaa.

😊 😃 Thanks for loving that slap! 😆😳 You're right, when a girl slaps a boy who is wrong, it feels perfect! 😛 I am glad you found rest of the update also beautiful. 😃 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: Anjinie
beautiful, I hope he does not take advantage of Kalpi, pls continue

Thanks dear. I'll try to update asap.😊

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: jiya007
Nice Update

Thanks Jiya.😊

Originally posted by: appyK
Kamla ma's daughter awoke😆
Fabulous update.. Loved how Raghav shed down his guards in front of kalpi.. And continue the story how you want to.. No objections as long as you keep updating😃

yes, Kamla Maa's daughter. 😆😛 Thanks for your feedback. 😃😊

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