Ch4 pg 31 - 31/03 - The guardian: forbidden love - Page 6

awsum angel.. yet another brilliant storyline.. rags nd kalpi so close yet so far... !! Cnt wait to read hw rags will keep himself away frm kalpi.. !!

Update soon !!!

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

OMG!!

wait lemme read it again I will be back!!

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You girl, you are a killer!!☺️

The emotions are awesome. your way of writing is crisp. not much frills state the facts and emotions as it is and it grips my heart.

My heart clenched as I could hear/feel the horrific thud that came from Kalpi's heart when she witnessed the Proposal.

My heart clenched, for Rags cause he is so torn between whats right and not.

I am sure he, being a casanova, apparently has dated girls of Kalpi's age, but this being HER, he feels the guily pangs, for betraying Kamla.

Being, the first for a girl is BIG! Rags and Kalps both know it. And thus are now tied through this unknown bond.

Tell me, is this gonna be a dark/sad one or is this gonna be a Love saga with love twists... I need to brace myself. You always succeed in doing something with my weak heart.

This time You better send me 🤗

Originally posted by: priya_remix

Oh wow fuzz! love this update!

Reminds me of the movie Lamhe! Anil Kapoor and Sridevi!

Awww Raghav must have never thought he would fall for that 10 yr old he got to his place years ago!

Hmmm so hurting Kalpi is going to sort out everything is what he thinks! I am eagerly looking forward to your next update dear!

Damn!!! This too good. Awesome update!!! Continue soon😊

Ohhh Fuzz, damn this is so good. You are amazing. Its so different. It reminds me of movie Lamhe. Sridevi in the song Meri bindiya is my favorite of her performances. Can understand so well regarding the crush and feeling of 16'year old girl. Would like to know since when Raghav started feeling for her?

I like the concept
Raghav taking care of Kalpi for most of her life so far is amazing
Aww Kalpi had her first crush at sixteen ( it reminds me when I was that age and dreaming about Salman Khan )
Kalpi love Raghav and she is not shy to say it
Hmm... Raghav breaking Kalpi heart in the worst way
But I like that she hold herself together to congratulate them
Superb chapter, I can't wait to read more

Awesome awesome awesome. But if rags is going to be like this then have another younger guy come in kalpi life and rags feel jealous and realize his love for her. But very interesting concept. Continue soon .

Interesting ff and very different concept and I like it

Angel one thing i must say u r an amazing writer, u know where to stop n leave ur readers in anxiety.

Great start, so here kalpi falls in love with raghav first, she isn't the kalpi we had seen in serial n its so good to c a different one.

M sure this ff of urs is gonna b as interesting as the other two.

Update all three of them, m anxious to know what will happen next.

Plss plsss plsss update soon

Indeed different take.. Very interesting, plz continue, want to knw how d story unfolds n d past too