Ch4 pg 31 - 31/03 - The guardian: forbidden love

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

interesting was Kalpi living with Raghav and what happened to Kamala, and how it did Kalpi end up with Raghav, pls continue soon cannot wait to find out the mystery behind the tittle of your ff

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Prologue was so cute and lovely highlighting a beautiful bond I loved it, but yaar I must say u always create a suspense in story what will next, I keep on breaking my head become very curious and impatient and eagerly waiting for update, I m fan of writing pls keep writing I enjoy it and also update regularly pls pls pls.

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DiVirgo

@DiVirgo

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Damn girl!! This is brilliant!! Now I'm even more inquisitive!! Love it!! And we see Kalpi hadn't rejected right?!

Edited by DiVirgo - 11 years ago

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shikha

@shikha-aggarwal

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Awesome chapter di
u r truly a wonderful writter
how kamla died?
Looking forward to read more
continue soon😳

Edited by shikha-aggarwal - 11 years ago

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Autumm

@Autumm

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

raghv...n kalpi...right? he luv her frm the very beginning..i luv this...😊

plz pm me ok...angel i luv n ur style of writing...keep it up..😉

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diya

@ragnaareangel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Wow nice but having many queries do complete soon
Plzz pm me

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Waiting to read more! Please complete it asap! 😳 as always fantastic. 😃👏⭐️

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mattieram

@mattieram

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

This is what I call an intriguing story. Can't wait for the continuation. Hopefully soon!

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Minnie

@Illuminatus.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#49

OMG!!

wait lemme read it again I will be back!!

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You girl, you are a killer!!☺️

The emotions are awesome. your way of writing is crisp. not much frills, state the facts + emotions as it is, and it grips my heart.

My heart clenched as I could hear/feel the horrific thud that came from Kalpi's heart when she witnessed - the Proposal.

My heart clenched, for Rags cause he is so torn between whats right and not.

I am sure he, being a casanova, apparently has dated girls of Kalpi's age, but this being HER, he feels the guilty pangs, for betraying Kamla.

Being, the first for a girl is BIG! Rags and Kalps both know it. And thus are now tied through this unknown bond.

Tell me, is this gonna be a dark/sad one or is this gonna be a Love saga with love twists... I need to brace myself. You always succeed in doing something with my weak heart.

This time You better send me 🤗

Edited by spontaneousmini - 11 years ago