RagNa(AshNa)FF:That's called revenge. link to thread 2 added - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Nice prologue...Story seems Interesting
here kalpi taking revenge from raghav n kapoors
Looking frwd to read more...continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
interesting...this time its kalpi's turn to take revenge...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Watching Kalpi's revenge would be awesome! 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Here's Part one...please tell me whether you guys liked it or not..
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The air had the frangrance of revenge...atleast for her it did..
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"KS Constructions... Kapoor & Singhaania Construction", the hoarding in front of her read...

Someone tapped on her shoulder and as soon as she turned the person hugged her...
"Paakhi", kalpi said...

(That's Paakhi Kapoor... Kalpana's classmate and closest friend...)

Paakhi- Hi kalpi...best of luck for interview...
Kalpi- Thanks...by the way are you coming??
Paakhi- of course not...dad ke company mein job pakki and anyway i need to go..
Kalpi- Where???
Paakhi- Today Raghav bhaiyya's gonna be back... I'm going to recieve him and ya ... there's a party in the evening so you definately are coming...i don't want any excuses..
Kalpi- Of course I'm coming..
Paakhi- ok bye..

She gave a quick kiss on kalpi's cheek and went...

RAGHAV SINGHAANIA...kalpi's biggest target but ...instead of hatred on hearing that name she remembered the boy who wipped her tears when her mother was busy caringg about someone else's daughter...

Rubbishing away those thoughts...in mind,"Thanks paakhi for again helping me... today my biggest enemy gonna be back...(With a smirk) Welcome back Raghav ..."



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The interviews didn't start yet...all students including kalpi were waiting outside when kalpi got a call from pakya...she went to a corner in order to recieve his call...

Kalpi- Hi dada...
Pakya- Kalpi...how can you forget to lock your room...today aai almost was about to go in...luckily I came at the right moment...
Kalpi- Oh sh*t... Actually I left in hurry na... so... Anyway I've a great news... Today Raghav Singhaania is coming back...
Pakya- What!!!! That's great...but...
Kalpi- I know...Ok dada i need to go...we'll talk about it at lunch...

Hanging up Kalpi came back to her seat...

It was her turn to go in...

"May I come in Sir??..",Kalpi said as she knocked the door...
"Come in",.. said the male voice facing the wall...

His face was covered with the file but kalpi could recognise the voice...
"Hello Ms.Kalpana Varma.."...the guy said as he lowered the file and extended his hand towards her...
With a small smile on her face she placed her hand in his and said,"Hello Sir"..
Laughing slightly.."Seriously kalpi...sir...please I'm bored with that Sir thing...boring interviews"..
Smiling at his words she said ,"What are you doing here Prem...??"

(Meet Prem kapoor...paakhi's brother)

Prem- Taking your interview of course.. sit na..
Kalpi- Thanks...(sitting on the chair)... I mean why are you here to take interview??
Prem- Dad is busy with some meetings and other people are busy in preparation of the new project...so may we start the interview...Ms.Varma..
Kalpi- Sure Mr.Kapoor..
Prem- Your resume is flawless...Distinction in every examination...college and university topper... you'll be a great asset...the job is yours..
Kalpi- Thank you sir...I promise you'll never regret your decision..
Prem- Sure I won't but before that one question..
Kalpi- What??
Prem- Would you like to have dinner with me??
Kalpi- Sorry but I'm busy..
Prem- May i know what's the thing that's keeping you busy..??
Kalpi- Party at Kapoor mansion..
Prem- Oh yeah...I almost forgot...
Kalpi- Ok then bye..
Prem- Wait outside I'll drop you after completing this interview thing..
Kalpi- No ...I'm not going home... I've to go meet dada first..
Prem- Ok bye..
Kalpi- Bye..


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Kalpi was waiting at a restaurant for Pakya ...

"I don't wish to but... No kalpi... you have no other option...remember what they did"..

She was brought out of her thoughts when pakya snapped his fingers..

Pakya- Where were u lost??
Kalpi- Me... nowhere..Lets order..
Pakya- Ya sure.. I'm damn hungry..

While having lunch Pakya sensed that something was wrong with kalpi...she was lost in her thoughts yet again...shaking her hand slightly..

Pakya- What happened kalpi??
Kalpi- Na...nothing dada..
Pakya- Don't you dare lie to me..
Kalpi- I ...I sometimes feel that ...that..
Pakya- You shouldn't take advantage of paakhi's friendship and trust...
Kalpi- (With a sad face) Yes..
Pakya- Kalpi we paid for the mistakes that our baba didn't commit...now they need to pay for their dad's mistakes... And we don't have any other option..
Kalpi- (Sighs) You are right dada... We lost our baba because of them... they should also feel some pain...
Pakya- Anyway... you know right we have a major issue...
Kalpi- Ya...Revenge on kapoors is easy...just take away their wealth and they are finished..
Pakya- But Raghav Singhaania has no weakness... He's a part of their family now but isn't like them... we need to find his weak point...
Kalpi- Dada don't worry... today I'll meet him at the party which kapoors have kept ... hopefully that helps us...

They finished their lunch...Pakya headed to his office and kalpi went to her house to get ready for the party..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Nice one.. Prem is friendly with Kalpi.. Well it's a revenge story so m expecting some layers to his character as well... N Pakhi's Raghav Bhaiya!! Lolz!! Waiting for his entry.. Hope Kalpi doesn't use Pakhi's friendship for her selfish motives... Conitnue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
nice update...hmm seems kalpi hv soft corner for raghav...dont want her to fall for him
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Amazing update
Wow raghav is khi's bhai so no tension of ra...khi 😆
Eager for ragna first meeting
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
It's different. I think nit's gonna be interesting with Kalpi playing revenge game, and also having a slight soft corner for Raghav.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Superb update Arpita...U writes awesome as usual..Continue soon and pls Pm me..I cant press LIKE due to my stupid lappy..Plsss Pm me also don't forget :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Congrats on your new ff. It's got an amazing feel. I love the revenge thing. Prem likes Kalpi. Can we expect a love triangle? Also if she's Pakhi's friend how come he addresses her as Kalpana Verma? Doesn't he know who she is? Raghav is coming. Obviously they will fall for each other. What needs to be seen is how Kalpi keeps her mind focused on revenge. Great going buddy! Continue soon. Pm me as usual 😳

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