RagNa(AshNa)FF:That's called revenge. link to thread 2 added - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Congrats on your new ff. It's got an amazing feel. I love the revenge thing. Prem likes Kalpi. Can we expect a love triangle? Also if she's Pakhi's friend how come he addresses her as Kalpana Verma? Doesn't he know who she is? Raghav is coming. Obviously they will fall for each other. What needs to be seen is how Kalpi keeps her mind focused on revenge. Great going buddy! Continue soon. Pm me as usual 😳


Yup there's a love triangle but its a bit ...hmmm...😉
You'll know about Verma thing soon...
Sure will pm u...glad u liked the first part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chahat4u

It's different. I think nit's gonna be interesting with Kalpi playing revenge game, and also having a slight soft corner for Raghav.😃


Hope u like it...😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sharanya0011

wow beautiful update..

loved it..
its revenge story waiting to read it.
plz continue soon..


Thanks a lot dear...
surely will continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru

nice update yaar...
story is getting very intresting...
continue soon...


Thanks a lot...
surely will ...
Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
very interesting.. hope u dont plan to discontinue... do update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: spontaneousmini

very interesting.. hope u dont plan to discontinue... do update soon.


I just started it and am surely ain't discontinuing...
let the cv's go to hell for me AshNa is RagNa forever...

will continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: appyK


Yup there's a love triangle but its a bit ...hmmm...😉
You'll know about Verma thing soon...
Sure will pm u...glad u liked the first part..

You are continuing your ff s , right? Thank you. In our world there is no Asha. It's only Ashish and Rachna. Our Ragna! Forever always!!!!!! CV s can make their version, I don't care.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ragna_luv

You are continuing your ff s , right? Thank you. In our world there is no Asha. It's only Ashish and Rachna. Our Ragna! Forever always!!!!!! CV s can make their version, I don't care.


Yup I am gonna continue... hell with pd and other cv's

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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Hola Guys here's an update... I'm still coming out of trauma so further updates of all my ff's will be delayed...Anyway please leave your comments ...All criticisms are welcomed..


In a huge banquet hall the party was going on in full swing...Many well known faces of construction business were present at the do...Among the buzzing crowd two guys who were actually the reason for the party were sitting alone...

Prem was sitting with a glass of orange juice his hands circling the rim of the glass and eyes constantly on the entrance... waiting for someone...

"Where's she??? She said she'll be here... Kalpi come soon.. I'm really bored with this Silent film.."

To the guy sitting with him...,"Raghav I thought atleast now you would've changed...but you are still the old silent film.."

Raghav- Prem you know I never liked talking on random stuff ...And I'm never gonna change..

Just then Kamla came there... Prem got up and touched her feet...

"Bless you prem baba", Kamla said...

Prem- Glad you came Kamla ma... Today I'll introduce you to paakhi's friend..but unfortunately she's not yet arrived..

Raghav was looking at them... the words 'Kamla Ma' raised an alarm ...

"Kamla Jadhav...",he said in his mind...

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"Welcome Ladies and Gentlemen... I'm glad that all of you are here ... today is the day I lost a dear friend of mine... the person with whom I started this company... though he's not with us today his blood...his son is... I'm really happy and proud to introduce two new faces to our business world... the two faces that are future of Kapoor and Singhaania constructions... Please put your hands together for Prem Kapoor and Raghav Singhaania"...Sahil Kapoor announced..

Prem and Raghav went on the stage...they hugged Sahil...

While all eyes were looking at the loving Kapoor family on stage... a pair of eyes were looking at them with fire in her eyes...

"Sahil Kapoor enjoy your happy family time just for few more days... coz your bad time is gonna start soon"... Then her gaze fell on the guy standing besides Prem...Her enemy...Raghav Singhaania...She saw paakhi standing beside him and waving her hand...Paakhi came near kalpi along with Raghav...

Paakhi- Bhai this is my best friend Kalpana...

Raghav-Hello...

Kalpi- Hi..

Raghav was about to say something when Sahil and Prem came their...

Prem- (while holding kalpana by her shoulder) Dad meet your new marketing supervisor Kalpana Varma...

Sahil- I was sure Kalpana beta you'll bag this job... I had seen your resume and have heard a lot about your hardwork from paakhi... See you soon in the office..

Kalpi- Thank you Sir..

Sahil- Aha... Sir after you join the office for now uncle would do...ok excuse me...

As Sahil went from there Prem called kamla who was standing behind them... on hearing prem call out to kamla kalpi's face turned blue.. Prem introduced kalpi to her," I was telling you na kamla ma me and paakhi wanted you to meet someone...here she is...kalpana"...Kalpi and Kamla acted like they didn't know each other...

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'Kalpana Varma'...The name was still echoing in kamla's ears...She finally decided to talk about it to kalpi..

"Why did you lie to them... you know right I've been working for them since so many years... they helped us in our bad times"... Kamla yelled at kalpi..

With a cold expression Kalpi replied," We wouldn't have needed their help ever... They were responsible for our bad times... Sahil Kapoor and Raghav Singhaania"

"Raghav baba was a child kalpi... it was not his fault...",Kamla tried to reason with her...

"It was and always will be...for your husband..our dad..don't tell them the truth..You won't tell them that Kalpi is Kalpana Jadhav and not Kalpana Varma...coz then they'll know we are your children...this might alert Sahil Kapoor...Please aai..", Pakya said to kamla and left...


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Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res😭

unres🤣
me 1st😲😲😲
yeh kya kia tune prem ko shraavan kumar bana diya aur yaha v pakhi ko rags ki behen 🤣🤣🤣

aur rags kalpi ka dushman😲 luv story shuru kab karegi tu inn dono ke beech😳
um luving dis kalpi nd ur ff😳

awsum update👏👏👏

big 🤗🤗🤗
Edited by wildcatluvragna - 11 years ago

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