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Posted: 11 years ago
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As per my promise I am updating the 2nd shot of the story.. I have excluded Gauri-Raghav confrontation in it but if u want i can provide u one more part with Gauri-Raghav confrontation and RagNa birthday celebration and marriage. Right now enjoy this part. Hope u all like it. I tried not to goof up with it still sorry for mistakes.

The spotlight flashes on the door spotting a girl in mask.. She is wearing a red churidaar suit...Her hair tied in a bun.. She comes inside with a cake in her hands and sings

"Happy birthday to you..

happy birthday dear Raghav..

Happy birthday to u..

May evil stays away from u

And ur wife stays with u..

Happy birthday Dear hubby

Very happy birthday to u.."

Pakhi and all gets shocked on hearing Happy birthday hubby. Pakhi recognizes the voice as Kalpi's but brushes off the thought as she is dead now.. Everyone waits for the girl to unveil her mask and reveal her identity when Raghav goes to her and brings her in the centre.. He blows the candle and cuts the cake.. Feeds 1st piece to the girl and hugs her. He loosens her mask and loudly says , "Thank you Mrs. Kalpana Raghav Singhania". The mask falls on the ground and lights come back.. Pakhi is shell shocked to see Kalpi alive.. but she composes herself and with a smile on her face she pulls raghav in the side but he jerks off her hand with a force and tells her to say in public.

Pakhi : What is this humiliation Raghav.. I am ur wife.. How can u address her as Kalpana Raghav Singhania... I know u love each other but u married me. So why are u insulting me like this in the public.. Specially after whatever happened in night..

Raghav : What happened in night Pakhi.. I do not remember anything.. Will u help me in remembering it.. Plz.

Pakhi : Raghav.. How can I.. How can u expect me to say all this in public..

Kalpi(in a baby tone) : Ohh my babydoll is feeling shy to explain her golden night in public but u dint felt shy while taking the photographs and videos... Now please do not tell me that u forgot about which photographs m talking..

Pakhi : I dint take any photographs.. Why do I need to take photographs of me and my hubby..

Kalpi throws the photographs on her face.. Raghav picks the one and shows it to Pakhi..

Raghav : Now do not tell me that this is photoshopped coz I know it is not..

Pakhi : Raghav.. I just installed that camera to capture the party moments.. I dint knew that u r going to do all that with me... I talked with u in the morning than y r u doing all this with me.. This is so shameful.. plz Raghav.. M ur frn.. Is this the way to behave with a frn??

Raghav(sarcastically) : No no.. This is not the way to talk to ur frn.. I m so sorry frn!!! I should learn friendship from u.. U r such an awesome frn who tried to snatch my happiness... u tried to spike my drink and forced me to have sex with u.. That is what real friendship is..

Now anger takes place of sarcasm.. He yells : "Do u think I am a fool Pakhi.. Who can't see and understand anything.. The way u came in that vulgar gown to celebrate and forced me to have alcohal in name of kalpi.. a dumb can realize ur plan.. N m not a fool.. I am raghav singhania.. a businessman...

Pakhi(crying) : Raghav I did all that coz I love u.. I am ur wife and I have full rights on u.. U cheated me.. I dint come to propose u but u did.. Do u expect ur wife to sit and see u going after another girl??

Raghav : U always knew that I was marrying u for revenge.. U planned it with my mom and now trying to be a victim..

Pakhi and Gauri gets shocked on hearing this.. A tear roll down from Gauri's eyes..

Gauri : Raghav.. Beta, I did all this for revenge.. I was never with Pakhi but just using her for my selfish motives.. I am sorry beta.

Ragahv : Do not call me beta.. u have lost that right.. But I will talk to u later.. Right now I want to talk to my so called Frn.. So miss Pakhi.. R u going to confess urself or u want me to do the honors??

Pakhi : Enough Raghav.. What wrong I have done.. I am ur wife.. N I have all the rights to come close to u.. This chawl girl is trying to snatch my husband from me.. The characterless she is...

Tadak!! Everyone shivers on hearing the loud sound of slap on Pakhi's face.. Kalpi is looking at her in anger..

Kalpi : Don't u dare to utter a single word about my character.. Else I won't mind slapping u again... I was feeling pity on u coz of the revenge marriage but it was u who planned to separate me with Raghav.. It was u who sent notice to my cafe.. U tried to spike Raghav's drink.. Ur obsession has made u criminal Pakhi.. U tried to kill me.. It was u who sent that truck driver to kill me.. How can u do this Pakhi..

Pakhi looks at her in shock.. She stammers.. "Murder.. how do u know.."

Raghav : I told her. Do u think it was ur plan.. No madam.. U were just a pawn in my plan.. The day Kamla maa told me about u and mom I believed her but I wanted proof to prove u culprit.. So I started keeping an eye on u.. I installed cameras in my room and the hall.. I caught u talking with mom about the birthday party. And that's why I accepted it. Later I saw u trying to touch me intentionally and realized what u r upto.. U forced me to drink but it wasn't spiked one.. I have seen u keeping drugs in the table drawer and changed it with the vitamin tablets.. Yes.. the tablets u added in the drink were not drugs but mere vitamin tablets.I was never drugged but was just acting to know ur further plans.. No need to mention that through the camera I saw u calling the truck driver and planning the accident.. That time I wanted to come and slap u but thought to play along. Now surprised.. how I saved Kalpi.. I just traced the number of truck driver from ur call details and offered him more money to fake an accident and he agreed.. So Pakhi.. get ready to go to jail..

Pakhi : But how will u prove that it was my plan..

Kalpi : Ohh Pakhi.. u r such a weak player.. Is it so tough to present truck driver in the court?? N ur call records will support his sentence..

Pakhi : U guys can't do this.. raghav I am ur wife.. u can't send me to the jail.. I am Mrs. Pakhi Raghav Singhania.. I can send u to the jail for bigamy as u married Kalpi without divorcing me..

Raghav : Offo.. I repeat Pakhi... I am not a Fool. Do u really think I married u?? Ohh God Pakhi... U have a pea size brain.. Which court allows marriage in a day?? Don't u know the rules.. N baby.. why dint u read the papers before signing them.. Never mind.. Read it now. Kalpi darling.. Plz handover the paper to Pakhi baby.

Pakhi reads the paper and falls on the ground.. She keeps her palms around her face and yells.. No.. This can't be true..

Raghav : This is true sweetheart.. U r not my wife but u agreed to stay with me for 1 month and 1 month is over.. U have signed that I am not responsible for any misery in ur life and u r not expecting me to marry u after this 1 month. It's also written that I can marry whoever I want and u do not have any problem with this.. I hope I am clear now.. so time to go to prison.. Bbi.

Raghav calls the cop and tells them to arrest Pakhi for attempt to murder on Kalpi. He provides Pakhi's mobile and truck driver as the evidence.. Cops thanks him and pakhi is taken to the jail.

Kamla who was witnessing all this doesn't know whether to be happy for Kalpi or to cry for Pakhi. Pakhi has refused to acknowledge her as mother but Pakhi is still her daughter.

Regards

Vish

Edited by fairylover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Mihika

awesome story vishesha 👏 fantastic i want this pakhi to die seriously kill her in ur 2 shots😡😡


Thanks Mihi😊

I have sent her to the jail.. Death will be an easy punishment for her.. She needs to suffer.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Awesome vish...but alas this will remain our wish in the real show :(
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ANewFan

Awesome vish...but alas this will remain our wish in the real show :(


Thank u dear. I m sure they still has chance to raise their TRPs by ending RaKhi.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Oh wow...super love to it! 😃 At least Ragz has brains here. Wish Cvs borrow some from you! 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
awesome update. loved it.😊
pls give us 3rd shot too
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: appyK

Awesome one vish...loved it...


Thanks Appy.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: chahat4u

Oh wow...super love to it! 😃 At least Ragz has brains here. Wish Cvs borrow some from you! 😛


Thank u Charu.. Borrowing my brain would be risky for them... i will kill Pakhi, Make Rags pair with Sammy and Kalpi will get a good guy... and will make Kamla negative.. May sent Gauri to aylum and ViTu marriage. I too don't know what I will do but either this show will be a boom or doom.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rrinka

awesome update. loved it.😊

pls give us 3rd shot too


Thank u dear.. Will try to give one more shot.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So much much better thn the real thng happenin' PD suld hire u n learn sm talent called creativity well done dear...u made me quite happy

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