Not a Fool : Two Shots update on page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello guys.. Now many of u know me.. I am Vish.. Nowadays m trying my hands on writing.. So today m here with a two Shot on current story. hope u like it... On response I may convert it in Three shots but till now i have only planned two parts of it

Pakhi is getting ready happily in the room.. The last night moments were flashing in her mind.. She applies sindoor on her head when Raghav wakes up.. He looks around himself and finds him on the bed without his shirt and few lipstick marks on his chest.. He looks at Pakhi and wonders what she is doing in his room.. Pakhi too notices him and hugs him.. Raghav pushes her away..

Pakhi : What Raghav.. yesterday only u accepted me and today.. That was the best night of my life.. U accepted ur love for me... I still can't believe it.. I was expecting it to be ur last birthday that we are celebrating together but u.. u said that we are going to stay together always.. I love u Raghav. Thank u for accepting me in ur life..

Raghav gets the blur flashes of the happenings of night.. He remembers seeing Kalpi in Pakhi and leaves the room.. Pakhi smirks. She remembers how she drugged him and tried to seduce him..


Flashback

Pakhi spikes Raghav's drinks and they share an intimate moment.. Raghav saying I love u kalpi and Pakhi pretending to be kalpi.. finally she pushes raghav on the bed and kisses his chest when he falls asleep coz of heavy drug alcohal.. She fumes on him for passing out before doing anything but than she smiles and takes out the hidden camera she installed to capture the moments.. She sees the video and takes out the snapshots which proves that Raghav was trying to be intimate with her.. She laughs..

Gauri enters the room.. Pakhi shows her thumb to her when Gauri startles and asks what she did.. Pakhi tells her the story and how she is going to send this pics to Kalpi to prove that she has won Raghav.. Gauri gives a mysterious smile and tells her to make sure that her plan doesn't backfires as she doesn't want to lose her son coz of Pakhi's stupidity but Pakhi assures that she will manage everything..

Flashback ends


Pakhi calls Kalpi and asks her whether she saw the photographs she sent.

Kalpi : What do u think Pakhi.. My trust for Raghav is so weak that few photographs will break it.. I know my Raghav.. I trust him that he can not touch anyone other than me.. M coming there and will prove u wrong.. We can confront Raghav.

Saying so Kalpi hangs the call.. Pakhi panics.. She was expecting Kalpi to get hurt on seeing the pics and leave Raghav.

Pakhi(to herself) : No.. Kalpi can't come here.. She can't show that pics to Raghav as raghav will understand that I clicked them to throw Kalpi out of his life.. I need to do something.. I have to stop her from coming.

Pakhi calls someone and ask him to hit Kalpi today. I want to see her dead.. The man asks for money.. Pakhi replies that he will give her so much money that he wud not have seen in his life but make sure it looks like an accident.. Man agrees. Pakhi hangs the call and smiles evilly... "Now u r gone Kalpi."

Raghav gets ready for the office and Gauri tells him to take an off today but Raghav tells her that he will try to come early but he has to go as he has an important meeting.. Pakhi comes with his lunchbox but he goes away from there without taking it.. Gauri wonders what it is but Pakhi tells her not to worry as his son will take time to accept what happened yesterday..

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Kalpi comes out of the chawl.. She has ordered a tempo to take out all the food they have prepared and she will follow them in the auto..She tells Kamla to accompany her but Kamla denies saying she won't go there where Pakhi and Gauri are..

Kalpi's auto takes the left turn where they see a truck coming towards them.. Truck drives pushes the accelerator and jumpos out of the auto...Truck hits the auto and a big blast happens and BOOM.. The only thing people can see was the fire..

Driver calls Pakhi.. "Work done!! Sent the target to heaven."

Pakhi : Ohk.. Now leave the city.. U will get ur money and tickets at bust stop.. My man is waiting there

Gauri who was listening to this asks her to whom she is talking.. Pakhi says "I was talking to the bakery guy.. I am telling him to not deliver the cake and I will send my man to pick it up. Actually I have ordered a special cake for Raghav so does not want him to see at the time of delivery." Gauri just nods and goes away from there..

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Party is about to start... The food has reached Singhania mansion but Kalpi was nowhere to be seen.. Pakhi tells the man to leave the food in the kitchen and leave as she will arrange waiters to serve it..

Kamla is panicking as she is not able to contact Kalpi.. She takes an auto towards Singhania Mansion..

Raghav has entered his house.. he asks about Kalpi from Pakhi but Pakhi tells that Kalpi dint come but sent the order.. Raghav gives her an angry look and goes to his room. Pakhi follows him.

Pakhii : Raghav.. Is something hurting u..

Raghav : I.. Actually I..

Pqkhi : I know Raghav.. I understood that u do not love me and what all happened was a mistake.. Don't worry, I won't share it with kalpi or anyone.. We were frnz and will always remain frnz.. u don't need to feel guilty about it. U were not in ur senses.. It was my fault. I should have stopped u. I am sorry Raghav..

Pakhi starts crying.. Raghav consoles her saying forget all what happened.. We are frnz.. I will tell kalpi everything on right time.. u don't worry. Pakhi leaves the room saying.. "Get ready for the party as ur frn wants u to come on time.."

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Party starts in full swing.. Everyone arrives.. pakhi requests Raghav to cut the cake but he tells to wait till Kalpi arrives.. Pakhi tells him that she is trying to call Kapi from a long time but she is not receiving th call.. Raghav takes out his cell to call her but gets no answer.. Pakhi tells him to cut the cake as all guests are waiting. Raghav nods.. Pakhi brings the cake and tells everyone to join them.. Raghav looks at the cake and asks her where is the cake that Kalpi sent.. Pakhi tells that it was small and doesn't suit the decoration so she changed it.. But she assures him that we will cut that cake later.. He nods and blows the candle.. Same time lights go out and spotlight flashes at the door.. Everyone wonders who it is and Raghav looks in the direction with a smile..

P.S. : Plz hit like and comment. sorry for all the mistakes

Regards

Vish

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome shot! Lest see how Kalpi reacts
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx vish😊

Kameena is still majboor
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow... this was really good👍🏼... do write more on wat happens 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Hanz91

Awesome shot! Lest see how Kalpi reacts


Thank u dear.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhanuli

Thanx vish😊

Kameena is still majboor


dhani baby.. The title is specially for u.. But I should replace it as Not a Kameena.😆

Wait for the last part re!! He will play his card very well.😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rrinka

nice update.

pls continue soon


Thank u dear.. Will write next part in lunch break.. 😊
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Originally posted by: fairylover


dhani baby.. The title is specially for u.. But I should replace it as Not a Kameena.😆

Wait for the last part re!! He will play his card very well.😉


I will change his name then😉..by editing..😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank u Swetha.😊
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Originally posted by: i5hy

wow... this was really good👍🏼... do write more on wat happens 😳


Thank u.. Will try to update soon.

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