RagNa OS: A Wound Heals

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incredible96

@incredible96

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

i would have been the first one to comment if i clicked on your post the moment i saw it...but i thought lets leave the best to the last! i get soo soo so happy when i have seen u have a new update or a new story! just wished it to be longetr... you know how i love the looong updates! :P :D

😭 you made this jatti senti sohniyeh! 😛😉

Edited by incredible96 - 11 years ago

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sb1234

@sb1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

A good one though I hope this does not happen !!!

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Roshna

@RoshnA1

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Amazing work Raz..👏
The way you portrayed Kalpi's emotions made me cry😭😭..I wanna kill Raghav for slapping my Angel😡..I am happy that Kalpi didnt wait for his explanations and she moved away from his life.. Superb job👏👏👏

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idonkno

@idonkno

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Amazing OS Raz!! Loved it from the start till the end!! Emotions were beautifully portrayed 👏

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Megha

@ForeverFabulous

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Dayum Dadi Ma! What a beginning!👏 Though I'm completely clueless on what's going on since I've stopped watching the show and can't be bothered to even read the written updates!🤔 But judging from your OS, I'm guessing it's confrontation time? Oh whatevs!

Coming back to the OS, Raghav ne Kalpi ko thappad maara?!😲 Uski itni himmat?! 😡You better make sure Kalpi returns his slap with interest in the coming updates! Now I dislike Raghav too! He has become completely blind I tell you! Like he's lost his ability to think for himself! Pfft!

Chalo, please continue soon... 😳

P.S: You think you can make this into a SS instead of OS? 😃

Edited by ForeverFabulous - 11 years ago

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Beautiful OS
After reading today update
I'm dreading to even read tomorrow update because it look like Raghav will not believe Kalpi
But stick with him evil mother
Wonderfully written
I love that Kalpi get up and took her mom and walk out without turning back
It shows that she take a stand and will not stick around for more pain

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Burns n Trolls

@shahsb_26

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

This is something I do expect from aaj ka episode..!!!

This would be nothing but moment from when Raghav will start suffering seeing his Kalpi and... I want Kalpi to move on from here...!!