FF: Grits and Glory's Of Love *chap-14*last(Pg-16) - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
loved dis part.. n raghav is suffering.. wow he deserves dis... though i love ragna but he need 2 suffer for his deeds.. waiting 4 next part.. update next part asap 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
All the chapters are amazing
I like Sammy and Kalpi plan of faking their marriage
I must say Raghav is smart lol
He knows something is up
Gauri is a witch 🤢 hope she got a stroke or something
Raghav rushing to the hospital to be with his Kalpi was amazing
I can't wait to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter- 8



Guilt , sorrow for hurting the love of her life makes kalpi cringe and wince in pain...kamala & pakya enters to check on kalpi...kalpi breaks down in her aai's arms...aai...why is he here...sobbing...why is Raghav here aai...kamala tries to console her...but kalpi cries her heart out...Hushhh !! Calm down beta...please do not over stress your self...it may worsen your health...please calm down...Pakya voice outs...I'm sorry yaar kalpi...it's coz of me Raghav is here...I thought it's long you guys have met...and moreverr I thought you would recover soon enough after this meet...guess as usual my guess went wrong and it created the damage I never wanted..forgive me...kalpi calms down a bit and assures her dada that it's okay...!!

Doctor prescibes the medication to be followed and grants kalpi a discharge.

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Raghav reaches home all hurt and in a foul mode...shuts the door...kalpi "was expecting sammy"..re-echoing all his room...he feels dejected of his own self...the buzz of sammy's phone averts his gaze...he answers the call and let sammy know about his left over mobile phone.

Sammy thanks him...he was about to cut the call...Raghav informs about kalpi !!

Raghav - sammy...kalpi met with a minor accident...she had a minor fracture and a bruised hand...i met her today..shez fine but i want you to take good care of her...I know you will...please go check her...sammy...she said...she wanted to see you...!!

Sammy - thanks Raghav...I will go check her ...and yeah...I will see to it that she gets well soon..!!

Raghav heaves a sigh of relief and follows his usual routine alcohol consumption...as it was the only dope that keeps him sane to stay away from his kalpi.

Guari sees his son's room was shut as every night...she thinks to be more communicative with her son..and help him get him over come from his past...she plans to be more friendly & spend as much of time possible with him from tomorrow on...I promise you beta...new day brings a new ray of hope...I want you to see happy with me beta...I will try my all love and affection on you..and you shall over cone of your past sooner.

Sun rises...mommy Guari makes her son a healthy breakfast and a hangover drink as well...!!
Raghav wakes to see his mother with a tray of breakfast...he was about to deny her efforts...mom...I..
Nothing doing Raghav...not a word...have it...I m not gonna leave you...enough of drinking...from today...I m gonna keep a check on your habits...health is important beta...I don't want my son to get ill...!!!
Mom...I know you care for me and I respect your efforts as well..said is easy mom...done is diffferent and equally difficult...I know you expect me to be normal...and get over...but mom...I can't...I just can't...!!!!

I understand beta..your mom is here now to support you in all your lows and highs..I want you to try...though at a slower pace...you must try...life must go on Raghav beta...as humans we might not get all we wanted and wished for...that doesn't mean life ends or pauses...just because you dint get what you wanted...I 've seen you drinking or busying yourself in work...I want you to be happy...as your mother...is it too much to expet from you...!!!

Mom...agreed you want me to be happy...you know how things got conspired recently...yet you expect me to be at ease...for godsake mom...leave me alone...and yeah...stop quoting that you understand me...as you don't...saying so he leaves a teary eyed Guari behind.

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Sammy enquires about kalpana's well being...she asks him take care of Raghav..!!

Raghav reaches office and his thoughts drift to kalpi...the fracture must be painful enough for her...should I go meet her ??...

Sammy greets him...Morning Raghav...can I have my phone back...
Raghav - yeah...here you go...ah...Sammy. ...howz kalpi doin ?? I hope the wounds aren't way painful for her...between is she back to your home ??

Sammy - kalpana is fine...shez doing well as well...lastly he makes up that no shez staying with her family...I asked her to stay there till the recovery.

Raghav - that's better...glad shez doin well.

Sammy - wantedly diverts him to work...we have a busy day ahead...new project needs to be handled with attention and care...let's get started...

Raghav - yeah...let's get started.

Few days pass...kalpi is fit and fine , back to routine.
Lately...there is no change in Raghav...he either works or gets doped.

Guari's worry multiplies by each passing day...her all good plans goes wasted...yet there was no sign of guilt for her...as she was the sole reason behind all this...shez the one to be branded as culprit...for ruining her own son's life.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Very nice update!! Raghav is shown concern for Kalpi is lovely. Continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Gauri is such a selfish mother, what happened to Paakhi, lovely update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Mssed a lot of parts in between read all in one go..
Fabulous storyline.. Now Raghav will understand what kalpi felt..
Great going.. Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very lovely update.dnt delay plz.update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
RagNa are suffering because of Gauri and that selfish lady show no sign of guilt
Kalpi crying and worrying for Raghav each day while he drink himself to numbness is awful
I wish Raghav leave Gauri alone and maybe then that selfish lady will wake up if she has a heart
Beautiful update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
Thank you for all the likes and comments...:):):):):)






Chapter-9


Soothing sea shore...wavy waters & sand beneath their feet...hand in hand...they walk ahead...with all the love binded in hearts to each other...kalpi I love you...says Raghav...she inturn...goes shy...yet manage to pass an love filled intense gaze to him...what am I supposed to read from that look of your's...boliye...miss.kalpi. ...stop it Raghav...you so well know it...you can read my eyes...and so I can...laughs...Raghav embracing her in a side hug...I see !!!...but it feels good when those helluva expressive looks gets replaced by words and even more good if they get replaced by actions...Trying to get cosy in intimate manner...Raghav. ...stop it...please. ..bystanders around...and here you are...so what...my love comes unconditional for you baby...rest of the things are least bothered...ohhh...shameless...stop it now...Raghav. ...he goes dramatic and teases her...I can't...she starts running away...stop kalpi...giggling...laughing...no...Raghav. ...kalpi. ...kalpi. ..kalpi. ...kalpi. ...kalpi. ...

The scream caughts the attention of Guari...She places her comforting hand on his fore- head...Raghav beta...

Raghav wakes up...expecting the above all to be reality...sight of mommy Guari...breaks his dream...he averts his gaze from her...and excuses himself !!

Guari...Raghav beta...it's high time you get over kalpi...guess I should plan a holiday for us both...change in place...might help you...beta...I'm sure of it...!!!


Raghav...can I ever get over you...God...a hell no...I can never ever...even if I wanted I can't get over you...not in my life time...that I'm sure off...you are still very much brisk in my dreams , my thoughts travel around you...and you...me...are still parting ways...life is tougher !!


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Sammy - Hello Raghav...Mr.Mehta called up for a emergency meeting...I asked regarding...but he wasn't available on phone..!!

Raghav - yeah...he might be here any moment...let's meet...the only option.


Mr.Mehta - hello...Mr.Singhania...thank you for the meet on a short notice.

Raghav - Mr.Mehta...work and client are always priorities.

Mr.Mehta - previous presentation formated by your efficient employee ms.Kalpana...Is truly appreciable...my higher authorities were impressed by her skills...and want her on this project as well...so I request you to bring her in to this project...considering her talent it isn't too much to ask for.

Raghav - felt proud for kalpi...but the next moment...recent events flashed !!

Sammy - considering...the change in Raghav's face...he answered...ofcourse Mr.Mehta. ...we will call her and let you know...shez on a hiatus from work to concentrate on other commitments of her's...will try our level best to convince her with a smile he concludes.

Mr.Mehta - that will be great...if she agrees to trems...anyways...thank you...I will take your leave.

Raghav - sammy...kalpi will not agree to this...why is it...you made Mr.Mehta's hope high...??

Sammy - Raghav...this is a vital project...and we can't let them down...let's talk to kalpi...I'm sure...I can convince her !!

Raghav - okay...!!

Sammy - kalpana...I want you to do me a favor...will you ??

Kalpi - favor...from me...!!! Ofcourse sammy sir...anything at my will to you sir.

Sammy - Mr.Mehta want you to pattern and format the new project's presentation...their team is quite impressed by your skills...and must say you really do have some exceptional skills...and yeah I make sure you work from home...okay...???

Kalpi - sammy sir...I...don't know...it's been a while am away from work...don't know how'd new presentation turn out to be !!!!

Sammy - oh come on kalpana...do not doubt your skills...I am confident on your skills and you should be as well...this is an important project to our firm...moreover it would be great relief for you and trust me you are gonna excel as usual...I will only take your yes...is it a yes...right ??

Kalpi - sammy sir...you haven't left me with a choice either...I will .

Sammy - great...I will drop a laptop and other stuff at your place...see you.

It's done man...I convinced...shez ready to work on this project from home.

Raghav - kalpi's yes makes him happy for a monent , as he thinks she still cares for him...the line " work from home " makes him pale back...he voice outs that's great sammy...I see you guys bond well and glad she gets along with your words.

Sammy - hmmm...yeah...will see you later.

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A few days later

Sammy - kalpi...are the files complete ??

Kalpi - almost sammy sir...a few last moment changes and re check...I' m done with it all...!!

Sammy - that's great...well i have got a busy and rough schedule...it might strecth too late...do one thing...please drop the files at my place...my helper is home...!!

Kalpi - not a problem sir...I will .

Sammy - thank you.

Kalpi - aai ...I will just drop these fikes at sammy sir place and be back.

Kamala - beta it's late...I will accompany you !!

Kalpi - yeah...the re check took little longer while than expected...it's a near by place I will manage aai.

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Sammy - dails out to Raghav...yaar...the files are complete...please come over to my place...we can discuss and process the futher proceedings.., I'm on way...you reach soon

Raghav - sammy...kalpi. ..I mean will she be fine if I come to your place.

Sammy - considering kalpana might have left...he makes up.. ofcourse...infact she will be leaving to kamala aunty's place...by now...so come over.

Raghav reaches sammy's place...waiting for him. The door bell rings...expecting sammy he opens it...only to meet the drenched sight of kalpi with files in her hand...!!

Kalpi - flabbergasted...completely blank to face the unexpected.

Raghav - looks at her discomfort...asks her to get in...and paves her way to get inside.

Kalpi - she gets in...places the files on the hall table...makes a move to leave. !!

Raghav - kalpi...stop...please. ..the weather isn't good enough outside...I will leave...please stay back...!!

Kalpi - no it's okay...guess you are here for some work...I will manage.

Raghav - what ever...I will fix that with sammy..you don't need to leave your place for my sake.

Kalpi - inwardly..oh you might be thinking that I moved on to samm sir's place...how I wish I could tell you it's all a sham...sighing...she sees him leaving...Raghav. ..stop...weather isn't good enough for either of us...please stay back.

Raghav - nods and sits back...considering her shivering form...kalpi why don't you get changed...you're drenched...you might fall sick...!!

Kalpi - don't know what to answer...she fights within to find an appropriate answer...and blurts out...actually I moved in here with a few of my wardrobe and unfortunately all my clothes were due at a laundry.

Raghav - is it...??...oh yeah...between sammy informed that you will be going to kamala maa to night.

Kalpi - thank god...yeah...was about to leave...stuck by rain...so was back here.

Raghav - he plasters a weak smile...!!

Sammy enters...to catch the unexpected sight..kalpana. ...Raghav. ..

Raghav - informs about kalpi's presence.

Sammy - inwardly feels happy for Raghav as he met her kalpi...but kalpana...I'm sure you might be gritting me...for putting you through this...let's have a coffee.


The helper brings in the tray of hot milk , coffee fill and sugar cubes.he starts making coffee for them...he makes hands it to sammy and raghav...he makes an other one asking kalpana...mam would you like a cube or two of sugar to be added in your coffee...Raghav unknowingly voice outs yes she takes a cube in her coffee...kalpi is taken aback and so is Sammy...mean while Raghav questions...wait a moment...she isn't new here..why are you asking your owner's spouse of her tastes and preferences in coffee...the helper couldn't help but giggles a bit and voices...spouse...??????whose spouse...?????


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very interesting. Tit for Tat. I like What Kalpi did , to teach spineless Rags a lesson. Looking forward to your updates! Thanks.

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