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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved d update
Eager to knw abt raghav's plan
Precap seems interesting
Continue soon
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Chapter-17

Shinghania Mension:

Evening: 6:30 PM

(raghav tell everyone all the truth...all are shocked to listen about kalpi and kids...its 2-3 hour's left...in room all are sileance and didn't talk a single word...for broke the silance raghav start coversation)

Raghav- plz koi kuch bolega??? pichle 2 ghante se aap sab shaant hai...jo bhi hai maan main plz wo bol dijiye but plz chup mat rahiye.

kamala- kya bolu main samajah nahi aa raha hai?? main toh ye soch soch ke pareshaan ho rahi hoon ki kalpi 5 saal akele kaise raho hogi...5 saal usne apne bacho ko kaise sambhala hoga???nahi bahut hua main kalpi ke pass jaa rahi hoon ab aur wo akeli nahi rahegi.wo aur hum chawl main saath main hi rahenge.

Gauri- kamala wo tumhare saath chwal main kyun rahegi.wo iss gher ki bahu hai aur wo yahi rahegi singhanai mension main.

Kamala- per tai kalpi yaha nahi aayegi.

Gauri- tum keh toh sahi rahi ho but raghav hai naa..wo leke aayega usse wo bhi kal..(to raghav) look raghav mujhe nahi pata ki tum kya karoge but mujhe kalpi aur bache dono yaha iss gher main chahiye.

Raghav- but mom...its impossible kalpi yaha nahi aayegi.

Gauri- no argue raghav..its my final decision..ager tum ye nahi kar sakte to wo waha darwaja hai..waha se jab agli baar baher jaayoge tab wapas mat aana.

Raghav- what??? ye kya baat hui mom aap mujhe blacmail kar rahi hai.aap ko pata hai ki kalpi abhi meri baat sune ko bhi ready nahi hai aur aap keh rahi hai ki main kal usko aur bacho ko yaha leke aao..ager usko pata chal gaya naa ki mujhe sab kuch pata hai toh agli flight se wo gayab ho jaayegi..plz mom understand that its not easy to convince kalpi to come back.

Vitthal- he is right tai..its not easy task to convince kalpi for return to raghav's life.raghav ne uska trust toda hai aur ab phir se raghav per trust karne mai kalpi ko time toh lagega.

Paakhi-toh tab ke liya kya hum bacho se nahi mil paayenge??? that's not faie sammy...kam se kam raghav ko humain bacho se toh milna chahiye

Gauri- right...ager tum kalpi ko abhi yaha nahi la sakte then thik hai bacho se toh mila hi sakte ho...kal tumhe chawl lekar aayoge aur ager tumne ais nahi kiya toh main tumse kabhi baat karungi.

Raghav- its not fair mom ...aap aisa kaise kar sakti hai???kamala maa aap toh kuch kaho.

Kamala- main tai ke saath hoon aur ager wo kal chawl nahi aaye toh main bhi aapse baat nahi karungi.

Vitthal- main bhi...

Paakhi- me to...

Raghav- aap sab bhi...sammy ab tumhe inko samjhao.

Sammy- sorry raghav this time main inke saath hoon...so if tumne ye task poora nahi kiya toh humain se koi bhi tumse baat nahi karega..

(said this all left from there)

Raghav (pov)- ab ye kya musibat hai??? main khud unn dono se nahi mil sakta toh inko kaise milao...i think mujhe ashwini se baat karni chahiye ab wahi hai jo meri help kar sakti hai.

(raghav call ashwini)

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kalpi's flat:

(ashwini do a work in laptop and sitting dinning table...raghav call her)

Ashu (pov)- Mr.singhania..ye abhi call kar rahe hai.main toh inko 10 se 11 baje ke bich call karne ke liye kaha tha abhi toh 9:30 baje hai...ye mujhe kalpi ke haato marwa kar hi manege.

Kalpi- ashu pick up the phone kab se phone baj raha hai...(kalpi shout from kitchen counter)..aur kaun hai jo tujhe itni raat ko phone kar raha hai.

Ashu- koi nahi wo dubai se tulika ka phone hai...usse kaam main thodi problem ho rahi thi issliye wo phone kar rahi hai.

Kalpi- haan toh utha lo naa...

Ashu- ok...(in mind) kaise utha loon...ye yahi khadi hai..

Kalpi- ahu phone uthao baat karo tulika se tab tak main tiya ko dekh kar aati hoon.

(kalpi go from there and ashu attend raghav's call and shout n him)

Ashu- Mr.singhania app mujhe kalpi ke haato marwana chahte ho kya??? main aapse kaha tha naa ki 10 se 11 baje ke bich phone karna phir bhi aapne iss time pe phone kiya???aap ...

(raghav sto her)

Raghav- i'm sorry ki main tumhri baat nahi maani..trust me its really imporatnt warna main phone nahi karta..plz listen to me.

Ashu- ok boliye...

Raghav-kal meri family tiya aur darsh se milna chati hai.

Ashu- what?kya kaha aapne??

Raghav- yahi ki kal meri family tiya aur darsh...

Ashu- ohh..ho wo suna maine...aapko pata hai ki aap kya bol rahe hai...ye nahi ho sakta kalpi kabhi tiya aur darsh ko akela nahi chodti..unke saath ya toh main,ya phir kandy hote hi hai.aur kal toh impossible hai..kal sunday hai aur kalpu apna poora sunday tiya aur darsh ke saath spend karti hai and wo tino kal avantika mam ke saath kisi site visit ke liye jaa rahe hai

Raghav-no ... plz do somthing naa...kya kuch nahi ho sakta???

Ashu- ho sakta hai if tiya and darsh kalpi ko jaane ke liya mana kar de.

Darsh- but hum mom ko kyun mana karenge???

(darsh listen all convo)

Ashu- ye phone se achanak darsh ki awaaj kaise aayi..

Darsh- maasi awaaj phone se nahi aa rahi hai.main yaha hoon table ke niche..

(ashu sit down and see darsh sitting under the table)

Ashu- hold down Mr.singhania..(to darsh) aap yaha table ke niche kya kar rahe hai???

Darsh- kuch nahi wo main spider dhoodh raha tha...

Ashu- spider???ab wo kis liye chahiye tujhe???

Darsh- mujhe dekhna ki wo apna gher kaise banata hai..but hamre gher main ek bhi spider nahi hai.

Ashu- ohh einstein secretary tumhari maa her roz ye gher ache se saaf kart hai so tumhe yaha koi spider nahi milne wala.

Darsh- oh my bad luck...ab kahi aur jakar dhoodh naa padega spider...kya aap bata sakti hai ki mujhe spider kaha milega..

Ashu- nahi mujhe nahi pata shayab tumhari mamma ko pata ko pata ho.jayo usse jakar poocho.(darsh say ok and go from there...raghav listen full convo and smiling on darsh's question)( to raghav) sorry for ditrubance..haan toh app kya keh rahe the.

Raghav- ye darsh ki awaaj thi naa??? kya keh raha tha wo???

Ashu- haan ye darsh ki awaaj thi...usse spider chahiye tha.

Raghav- spider???

Ashu- haan wo use aadat hai aisi ajeeb si chezze karne ki..u ignore him...and i'll help you kal main unko chwal lekar aayungi but sirf thodi der ke liye.

(raghav happy to listen this )

Raghav- thank u so much..we all wait.

(after that they cut the call)

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Next day:

Chwal: 2:00 PM

(ashu come to chawl with tiya and arsh.all are waiting for them...raghav come and receive them and go from there to call evryone)

Tiya(low voice)- massi hum yaha kyun aaye hai???

Ashu(low voice)- wo Mr.singhania ki family tumse milna chati hai naa isliye.

Darsh(low voice)- ok but iske liye mom se jhoot bolne ki kya jarorat thi?

Ashu(low voice)- to kya tumhari maa ko such bata dete???

Tiya(low voice)- haan usmain kya problem hai???

Ashu(low voice)- if tumhari maa ko such bata dete toh tum mahableswar main kese gum ho gayi and tumne mandir main kaise innse fighting ki sab batana padega...to kya bolte ho tumhari maa ko sab kuch bata de???

Darsh-tiya (shout)- nooo...

(all come and see them shouting and think why they are shouting)

raghav- its everything allright? koi problem toh nahi hai??

Ashu- no Mr.singhania..sab thik hai..

Tiya- haan sab thik hai but aapne humain yaha kyun bulaya hai???

Kamala- humse milne ke liye (said behind from raghav )

Paakhi- taki hum bhi dekh sake ki raghav ke angels kaun hai.

Darsh- but hum sirf humari mamma ke angels hai.

Raghav- no abse tum mere bhi angels ho.

Tiya- ok but 1st hum hamari mamma ke hai baad main aapke...

Raghav- ook..no problem..

Darsh - ab aap sirf humse baate hi karnge ya phir batayenge ki itne saare logo main se aapki family kaunsi hai?

Raghav- ye sab meri family hai...wo meri mom hai..wo sammy uncle hai...wo sammy uncle ki wife hai paakhi...and wo kamala maa hai...aur wo baba...aur wo pakya( raghav introduce all tiya and darsh)

Tiya- wow aapki family main itne saare log hai..

Vitthal- haan..aur ab aap abhi humari family ke member ho.(vitthal come forword and give them choclate)

Tiya- darsh- thank you..

Gauri- chalo ab uper chalte hai phie baat karenge.

(they going to kamala's house but stop by darsh)\

Darsh- ruko...

Tiya- waht happend darsh..tum ruk kyun gaye?

(darsh show her singhania chawl's board)

Ashu- what happend ??? tum dono ruk kyun gaye chalo..

Darsh- wait massi...mujhe tiya ke saath personal talk karni hai.

(ashu and everyone surprise on there behaviour but ashu said ok to see there expression..tiya & darsh turn there face and start talking)

Darsh- tiya ye wahi chawl hai jis ki pic mom ne humne dikhayi thi.

Tiya- haan ye wahi chawl hai...that means mom yaha rehti thi and Mr.singhania iss chawl ke owner hai?

Darsh- haan i think so..but pehle cheak kar lete hai.

(tiya and darsh again trun and face all)

Tiya- so M.singhania kya aap iss chwal ke owner Mr.raghav singhania hai?

Raghav- haan...kyun??

(tiya and darsh happy on this line and shout yesss...all surprise on there reaction)

Darsh- very good then kya aap humain ye chawl bechenge humain kharidni hai.

(raghav surprise on darsh line )

Raghav- tum ye chawl kyun kahrid naa chahte ho???

Tiya- bcoz meri mom aur unke mom-dad yahi rehte the.

Kamala- ye umhse kisne kaha???

Darsh- mom ne...unhone bola ki wo dubai jaane se pehle yaha rehti thi...isliye hum ye chawl buy karna chate hai.

(ashu drinking water when tiya & darsh talking this so the water block in her throwt)

Ashu- tum dono pagal ho gaye ho??? kya bole jaa rahe ho??

Tiya- no massi jab mom main humain chawl ki pic dikhayi thi tab main mom se kaha tha ki mujhe iss chwal main rehna hai and ye tabhi possible hai jab ye chawl humari hogi.

Darsh- tiya is right..aur ye chawl humari tabhi hogi jab hum isse buy karenge.

Ashu- chawl buy karenge????tum dono ke dimaag main ye stupid si cheeze aati kaha se hai??(raghav stop her to saying forward)

Raghav- tumhe ye chawl chahiye???

Tiya-haan...kya aap humain isse bechenge??

Raghav- nahi...naa main isse bechuga aur nahi tumhe isse kharidne ki jarorat hai...mera jo bhi hai wo sab tumhara hai so automatically ye chawl bhi tumhari hui.to tumhe isse buy karne ki jarorat nahi hai.

Tiya- aap kya bol rahe hai kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai...app ka sab hamara kaise ho sakta hai Mr.singhania..

Raghav- abhi main tumhe explain nahi kar sakta but time aane per jarora bataunga..tab ke liya ye samjh lo ki ye chwal tumhari hai aur tum jab chahe yaha aa sakte ho.

Ashu- haan jab chahe aa sakte ho but abhi ke liye humne yaha se jana hoga.

Raghav- what???per kyun aur tum sab abhi toh aaye ho?

( in raghav-tiya-darsh convo kalpi call ashu and said to come home)

Ashu- haan Mr.singhania but abhi jana hoga kalpi gher wapas aa gayi hai.

Tiya- but mom toh 3-4 hours ke liye gayi thi aur 5-6 baje aane wali thi then itni jaldi kaise aa gayi.

Ashu- don't no but humain jaana hoga. (all sad the did not spend much time with tiya and darsh..ashu notice them)..plz aap app sab sad mat hoiye...main in dono ke leke jaldi aapse milne aayungi.

(ashu tiya and darsh go from there...and all happy and sad...wish meet them soon)

sorry main jaldi jaldi update kar rahi hoon..means ye part jaldi main likha hai hope u are like it.plz hit like and comments.keep reading and sharing u r viwes.thank u

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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!!! Loved the kids interaction with Raghav. Do continue soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update anu dear
lovely conversation
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful rahhan tiya n darsh conversation...next update soon..if possible every dy one update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow beautiful update😊
loved it..
darsh and tiya conversation was good..
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update👍🏼
Loved darsh n tiya convo wit raghav
Eager to read more update soon
Thnxs 4 pm dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love ur FF it's awesome dear 👍🏼
Edited by prishna_fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
always wanted rags to go on knees.to patao kalpi..pls...continue...update...

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