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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for raghavs bonding with darsh...& I know when kalpi will see them 2gether she will be really happy...but wont show...thnx for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read last 3 parts loved it
Finally raghav ko pata chala abt his kids
Can u pm m
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Missed last few updates...
Awesome... great going... continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank you so much for reply's its means alot to me...and sorry for late update bcoz in my area power cut problem is going .
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Chapter-16

Chapter-16

Shinghania mension

Morning : 7:00 AM

(kalpi come to raghav's house...she press the door bell and Raghav open the door)

Raghav- finally tum aa gayi...plz come in.

Kalpi- no mujhe late ho raha hai plz jaldi se file de dijiye.

Raghav- itni bhi kya jaldi pehle ander toh aa jayo..

(gauri come out of the room to see how come in earily moring)

Gauri- kaun hai raghav???itni subah subah kaun a gaya?

(gauri see kalpi standing in door...she is happy to see kalpi)

Kalpi- sorry wo main itni subah aa gayi..lekin mujhe raghav se filr leni thi isliye...

(gauri stop her by touch her head)

Gauri- sorry for what? sorry toh mujhe bolna chahiye jo kuch bhi uske liye.

Kalpi- no plz aap sorry mat boliye aur jo hua usko bhool jaaiye.

Raghav(in low voice)- ye baat mujhe chodkar sab laagu hoti hai...ye sab ko maaf karne ke liye ready hai but mujhe nahi.

Kalpi- kuch kaha apne?

Raghav- nahi..kuch nahi...

Gauri- aao naa ander aao...

Kalpi- nahi mujhe jaana hai meeting ke liye der ho rahi hai.(to raghav) plz aap file de denge.

Gauri- tum file lene aayi ho naa pehle ander toh aa jayo...hamare saath chai pe lene aur phir chali jaana...

(gauri never leave kalpi and insist her to come in...kalpi enter the house...sammy and paakhi come out of there room...paakhi is happy to see kalpi)

Paakhi- kalpi...tu aur yaha (paakhi hug kalpi...kalpi don't react on this and but a small smile spread on her face)i'm so happy to see u...achha hua tum hi yaha aa gayi warna main hi tumse milne aane waali thi...mujhe tumse baat karni hai...

(paakhi stop by kalpi)

Kalpi- abhi nahi paakhi main abhi jaldi main hoon phir kabhi (to raghav) plz kya aap mujhe jaldi se file laake de denge.

Raghav(dispointed tone)- ok wait...

(raghav come back after 5 min with file and give it to kalpi...kalpi cheak the file and go from there but gauri stop her again)

Gauri- thodi der to ruk jaayo beta...plz

kalpi- main ruk jaati but...(that time kalpi's phone start ringing..kalpi answer the call and other side darsh and tiya shouting)

Tiya- mom meri barbie waali bottle kaha hai???

Darsh- mom meri drawing book kaha hai???

Tiya- aur mom meri diary bhi nahi mil rahi hai wo kaha hai???

Darsh- mom meri bhi diary nahi mil rahi hai...

Tiya- mom 1st maine poocha tha so pehle mujhe answer karo.

Darsh- mom main bada hoon 1st main...

(tiya and darsh start fighting with each other...and for that kalpi angry on them and shout)

Kalpi-chupp...plz stop fighting..kyun fight kar rahe ho tumari ki saari cheeze wahi hai jaha roz hoti hai...cheak karo

Tiya- no mom wo waha nahi hai isliye toh aapko ko call kiya...

Kalpi- ok fine...wo waha nahi hai...are u sure?

Darsh- ya mom we are sure...

Kalpi- so dairy & book apne bag main cheak karo and about u r bottle wo kitchen main table per hogi...go and cheak.

Darsh- mom mil gayi...

Tiya- haan mom mujhe bhi apni saari cheeze mil gayi...

Kalpi-good no plz don't fight & plz ashu massi ko pareshaan mat karna.

(kalpi talking with tiya & darsh that time raghav smile and try listen what they are talking with kalpi and other all stare her & thinking that kalpi kise baat kar rahi wo bhi itni soft tone main...kalpi see them and cut the call)

Raghav- its everything all right???koi problem toh nahi hai naa???

Kalpi- nahi koi problem nahi hai sab thik hai..,,app ko aisa kyun laga ko koi problem hai???

Gauri- but tumne itni jor se kaha ki "chup raho" so thought that ki koi problem hai??kya baat hai beta ager koi baat hai toh humne bata sakti ho.

kalpi- nahi aunty koi problem nahi hai wo toh main e isliye jor se bola kyunki wo dono fighting kar rahe the.

Paakhi- wo dono???kaun wo dono kalpi???

(kalpi bite her toungh and thought ye maine kya keh diya)

Kalpi- koi nahi now main late ho rahi hoon bye...(she touch gauri's feet and left from there...gauri is happy for kalpi touch her feet and take blessings)

Paakhi- issa kya pooch liya maine jo ye itna tension main aa gayi???i think she hide somthing from us.

Raghav- u r right...she is hide somthing from us.

Gauri- matlab tumhe pata hai ki wo kisse baat kar rahi thi???

Raghav- haan...wo angels baat kar rahi thi...aur main abhi hun hi se milne jaa raha hoon.baki ki story aapko wapas akar batayunga...bas aap kalama maa aur baba ko bula lijiye.

(said this raghav went from there)

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School:

Morning: 8:00 AM

(raghav come to school to meet tiya and darsh..he see them with ashu)

Tiya- masi gaadi kitni slow chalati ho aap ager hum late ho jaate toh?

Darsh- late ho jaate toh jaate but gaadi 40 ke speed se aage nahi chalani chahiye..and btw ager hum late ho jaate toh its your mistake not ashu massi's.

(raghav watch them from satnding far away but tiya see him and run towords raghav)

Tiya- ohhh Mr.singhania aap yaha???aapne bacho ko chode aaye hai???

(raghav shocked to tiya's question 1st but he smile after that)

Raghav- haan..main yaha apne bacho ko chodne aaya hoon...

(ashu surprise on raghav's asnwer and understand that raghav ko sab kuch pata chal chuka hai)

Tiya-oh ok but wo hai kaha???i want to meet them.

Raghav- wo abhi mere pass nahi hai but ya i promise that you met them soon.

Tiya- ok but don't forget u r promise.

(darsh enter the convo)

Darsh- thank u so much Mr.singhania ki apne tiya ka itna dhyaan rakha?

Raghav- its my pleasure but you?

Tiya- he is my brother drash.

(raghav hppy to see darsh and hug them)

Darsh- are u alright Mr.singhania???

Raghav- ya i'm fine...but why u ask me this question?

Darsh- bcoz you hug us...mom bhi humain issi tarah hug karti hai jab wo happy hoti ya phir sad...aap happy ho ya sad?

Raghav- i'm happy and also sad..but tum abhi nahi samjoge isliye chod do and go warna school ke liye late ho jaayoge.

Tiya- ok hum jaa rahe but ya hum nahi samjhte to koi baat ahi aap unverseji ko bata dena wo apki problem jarora slove kar denge.now humne jana hai baad main milte hai..bye

(darsh and tiya go from there and raghav happy to meet them)

Ashu- aapko sab kuch pata chal gaya hai naa???

Raghav- haan..but plz kalp ko mat batana ki mujhe sab kuch pata chal chuka hai.main chahta hoon ki wo khud akar ye baat mujhse kahe.

Ashu- its not possible wo kabhi nahi batayegi.

Raghav- wo batayegi but uske liye mujhe tumhari help ki jarorat hai.

Ashu-i'll help u but only for angels and kalpu..

Raghav- ok no problem.

Ashu- so karna kya hai???

Raghav- i'll call u in night and phir batayunga ki karna kya hai.

Ashu-ok but 1o se 11 baje ke bich main phone karna tab kalpu bacho ko sula rahi hoti hai isliye usse doubt nahi hoga...and 1 more thing kalpu per humko shak nahi hona chahiye ager usk pata chal gaya ki main aapke saath hoon then she will kill me.

Raghav- don't worry usko kuch nahi pata chalega.now main chalta hoon

(after that raghav and ashu go from there)

Precap- tiya nad darsh go to chawl with raghav.

sorry for late bcoz of power cut i'm late in update..hope u like this part sorry for mistakes.plz read and share u r views and hit like

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update! Do continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing chapter pls update the next chapter today itself
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update!!!!!!!!!!😃😃
Continue soon..
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Super se uppar wala update tha loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update.. Its really cute that Ragz met his kids.. Nice to see their bonding.. Continue soon dear:)

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