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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Ohh... i wrote around 4 paras before posting n while switching tab to show something to my partner i reloaded it,😭 Have to write it all again.😆'

Awesome update Appy... Kayan are behaving like married couple without realizing their growing relationship... Kalpi is full in bossy mode... God knows what she will do after proposal... Gosh!! M scared for Aryan now... He going to be Joru ka gulam.😆

Kalpi feeding Aryan😲. She is indeed very comfortable with him... She dint hesitated in feeding him... Sneha is indeed a cupid.. She suggested feeding Aryan but poor soul dint know that Kalpi will do the honors.

I am dying to know how Kalpi will bring Sunaina n Aryan closer... Want bit more details for their relationship before patch up.. Like Aryan hurting her very badly n Kalpi making him realize his folly. Continue soon n hope u won't mind my advice.😳

Whenever i hear about aryan of EMB, i visualize ur Aryan. This one is much better than the show one.. Though I am neither watching the show nor reading updates.. 😆

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: sampa79
Nice update

Thanks a lot😊

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: Chin2_n
Ahh! Pooran polis I'm hungry now😉
Short and sweet update as it has pps 👏

Here I saved some..😉

Glad you liked the update..

btw wat's pps??

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Nice one. Kayan has done puja together. Loved how she is bossing him. Typical biwi mode she's gone into. Liked how she's taking care of him. Felt bad for Sunaina. Kalpi will bring her and Aryan closer. Sneha ( see, now I'm all right) is too cute. Wanted to feed her bhaiyya first.

Yup you now got it right kiara😆

Surely kalpi will bring them close.. Glad you liked KaYan scene..

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Originally posted by: sumasridhar
Chota updt its not fair plz cnt Aryan n kalpi bossing each other is 👍🏼

Sorry for chota update but next waala needs time so gave a quick short update😉

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#336

Originally posted by: Anjinie
that was so sweet, what happened to the rest of them

VitLa and Pakya coming soon and as i mentioned earlier Paakhi is in mental hospital and rags etc. will come back sometime later..

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 11 years ago

#337

U missed my comment on previous page..😭 Was just going through all my comments to make sure that I read all n realized that u missed it.😆

See what an attention seeker i am.😉

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#338

Originally posted by: fairylover
Ohh... i wrote around 4 paras before posting n while switching tab to show something to my partner i reloaded it,😭 Have to write it all again.😆'
Awesome update Appy... Kayan are behaving like married couple without realizing their growing relationship... Kalpi is full in bossy mode... God knows what she will do after proposal... Gosh!! M scared for Aryan now... He going to be Joru ka gulam.😆

Kalpi feeding Aryan😲. She is indeed very comfortable with him... She dint hesitated in feeding him... Sneha is indeed a cupid.. She suggested feeding Aryan but poor soul dint know that Kalpi will do the honors.

I am dying to know how Kalpi will bring Sunaina n Aryan closer... Want bit more details for their relationship before patch up.. Like Aryan hurting her very badly n Kalpi making him realize his folly. Continue soon n hope u won't mind my advice.😳

Whenever i hear about aryan of EMB, i visualize ur Aryan. This one is much better than the show one.. Though I am neither watching the show nor reading updates.. 😆

Aww so sweet of u to type it all again.. Actually I want to make Aryan as adorable as possible.. Just like I loved roy (hope so u didn't forget rohit oberoi😉) i want you guys to like aryan and feel that he's perfect for kalpi..with ragna no more onscreen its difficult to accept someone for kalpi.. Someone who's name is Aryan

Frankly i too sometimes have that confusion so i've put up that collage ...so that people don't think that this is suhaana waala aryan..

I gave this short quick update so that i can show that KaYan are quite comfy with each other and next one would surely have more details and i would try to make it beautifully emotional.. Would try my best..n btw ur advice is always welcome ..

I'm learning to write good stories from writers like you so any advice is always welcome..

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Arpita

@appyK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#339

Originally posted by: fairylover
U missed my comment on previous page..😭 Was just going through all my comments to make sure that I read all n realized that u missed it.😆
See what an attention seeker i am.😉

Hugs and kisses for being an attention seeker 🤗.. If u wouldn't have told then i would've missed even reading your comment.. Actually this time i didn't check whether i missed someone's comment so missed your.. Now i replied.. See above..😉