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Arpita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: rani214
Loved d update was short n sweet
Kalpi bossing around was nice
Sneha was cute
Felt bad for sunaina...fikar not humari kalpi sab thik karegi😃

Oh yeah kalpi sab thik kar degi..😉 Glad you liked it..😃

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Arpita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#342

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With droooped shoulders and folded legs Aryan was sitting beside his bed turning pages of some book... The pages had photos stuck on the left hand side page and then something written on right page...He kept turning the pages until he found the one he was searching for.. Three pages which had pics of a young boy with a middle-aged woman ... he caressed the pic and a tear rolled down his cheek.. before it could fall on his lap it was caught by someone who touched his cheek to wipe the tear trail...

"If you love her then why do you behave like this with her??", Kalpi asked Aryan... Their relationship surely had that comfort level that they could trust each other but Aryan was still reluctant in sharing that part of his life of his self which he never allowed to grow and sometimes even ignored its existence...

************* Flashback ***************

"Mom.. mom.. I wanna go with ma please please..." A 12- year old Aryan said while pleading to his mom to let him go with his sunaina ma..

"Aryan.. seriously I doubt whom do you love more me or your sunaina ma..Me and your dad want you to stay with us but you're adamant on going to Delhi with your Sunaina ma...", said Aryan's mom while cutting vegetables..

With a mischevious smile he said, "I love to spend time with her and to answer your question.. The answer is ... Mmm...Ma..".. laughing he ran out of the kitchen while his mom smiled at his antics...

This was the happy perfect family of Aryan six years before the fateful night... Mr. and Mrs.Khanna brought a silent boy home who as time passed turned into the most mischevious kid they'd ever known or will know..

Aryan would play mischiefs and before he could be scolded for it his ma came for rescue.. Sunaina was his mom's close friend and his favorite aunt cum best friend cum mentor cum role model and many things.. she was the person with whom Aryan could share all his secrets .. to whom he could tell anything and everything... she was the person who knew him beter than his parents sometimes even himself..

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After telling Kalpi everything .. the accident ..his family before accident.. Aryan said,"I speak to her rudely so that I can hide the love I still have in my heart... She is responsible for ruining my family and if I forgive her then my parents won't forgive me.. then it would mean i don't care about mom dad... I never changed after their accident because I know they wouldn't be happy seeing a changed me.."

Kalpi placed her hand above Aryan's hand and said, "Ask yourself Aryan.. do you really think your mom-dad would be happy seeing that you hate their dearest friend .. would they be happy to see that their son is suffering just to make them happy.."

With his eyes welled up Aryan said," Then what do you expect me to do Kalpana.. forgive her .. just like that.. forgive the woman who destroyed my family.. who took away Sneha's share of happiness.."

Kalpi looked at him with questioning eyes ," .. Sneha's share of happiness ?? really?? You know who's taking away sneha's share of happiness.. its you.. You are deprieving her of her family's love.. you're the one who forcing her to choose between her brother who fulfilled her every wish who didn't let her miss her parents or the woman who actually filled the void of mother's love and care.. Whenever Sneha comes to the office to spend time with sunaina mom she misses you and when she's with you she misses her.. And you're blaming Sunaina mom for everything.. did she cause the landslide ... no na.. then how can you blame her.."

"She's right", Aryan thought but there was still something.. something that was not allowing him to let go of his pain.. something was not letting him forgive Sunaina..

Placing her other hand on his shoulder," And if you really think that it was her mistake then too you should forgive her now... she had her share of penance for her mistake which technically she didn't even commit... she has suffered as she saw herself as a murderer in eyes of the child who once loved her more than his own mom.. Do you think she still needs to suffer more than this... Sometimes we need to forgive and forget .. in some situations that's the best option...there's no use in making the other person suffer when you too are suffering seeing their condition"...

Saying so Kalpi was about to get up and leave when Aryan stopped her by holding her hand and he made her sit again.. There was silence which spoke for itself.. Aryan couldn't express inwords how grateful he was and how relieved he felt now.. he simply engulfed Kalpi in a hug..

Breaking the hug he picked up the book that was beside him and handed it to Kalpi..

"You know Ma was the first to discover my talent... In my orphanage I had written a song about life without parents... After Mom dad brought me in their house I still couldn't get away from my loneliness.. One day ma came in my room and saw the paper lying on the fooor in which I had written a song... she asked me whether I had written it.. I said yes.. She kept on praising me and then I showed her the three-four songs I had written ... Those songs were all about my experience my pain everuthing and she was the first person to know about it... She then brought me these scrap books ..its a set of four", Aryan went to get the books while Kalpi sat there remembering the day when Sneha had told her not to touch Aryan's song book as he never allowed anyone to read them not even her (The rainy night when Kalpi comes to drop sneha and then has to stay back)..

"This black coloured book that has my painful childhood", he showed her the book... it had pics of a kid sitting sad and alone ... then a kid staring at a girl who played with her dad and mom... "It was ma's idea that witheach song I should sticka pic on the left side page... This black book has pain ... this yellow book has songs which I wrote after I got my family... this red book is for that time when I'll fall in love..", Aryan looked at Kalpi who was busy flipping pages of the yellow book which had many pics of small Aryan with his parents with sunaina along with beautiful songs.. "Guess so I'll start writing songs in my red book now"..he thought.. "Why isn't there any song in this book??", Kalpi asked showing the blank red book.. "When ma gave me this book she said that one day someone will enter my life and all things will be set right.. she'll make me the happiest person alive.. and this book will have her pic and songs about her.. ".. he sensed Kalpi's discomfort as he was actually talking about really personal things.. to get over it he showed her the white book.."And this is when I turn old.."..."You think you'll be able to write songs then... I mean you won't even be able to remember your own name", Kalpi said as she giggled a bit..

"Oh yeah.. I'll just be bhulakkad but you'll be ugly..fighting with your wrinkles and white hai ", hearing that she hit Aryan's arm slightly while making a hawhh.. face

In their chitter-chatter they didn't even realise that it was morning... Kalpi went to her apartment while Aryan too got busy in his daily routine... Kalpi had actually taken of a huge burden off his shoulder... he was finally gonna mend the mistake he comitted ears ago.. finally he was gonna get his perfect family

P.S : Tried hard to make it emotional but I'm not very good at it I know.. All criticisms are welcome..😊

Edited by appyK - 10 years ago

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Kiaraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#343

Nice update Arpita. Kalpi trying to solve everything between Aryan and Sunaina. He confided in her about his past. Sunaina was once everything for him. She meant more than his own mother. She was his friend cum confidante. But when his parents died he put the blame on her. He thinks if he forgive her then he's not doing justice to his parents. Loved little Aryan and his song books. He's relieved that he's confided in Kalpi. She made him understand that Sneha is torn between him and Sunaina.

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MagicalMadness

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Posted: 10 years ago

#344

Awesome update. Liked how Aryana looked at kalpi and thought it was time to start writing in his red book. Looking forward to More of his realization as well as kalpis realization. Pls update soon.

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Arpita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#345

Thanks a lot for all your lovely comments.. Here's the last part..

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One week that's all it took for her life to change.. Kalpi thought while she sat on the back seat of the cab fidgeting her tiny fingers ... praying to god to save that person who helped her , guided her and most importantly loved her..

******** Flashback *************

"Finally", Kalpi said to herself as she saw Sunaina feeding Aryan.. She smiled and started adding oil to the diyas besides bappa's idol.. When she looked away Aryan looked at her thanking god that she came in his life... Sunaina was about to feed him another morsel when she saw him staring somewhere... she followed his gaze which rested on Kalpi.. a smile came on her face as she immediately recognised that someone here has fallen in love but then reality struck her... Kalpi was still dwelling in her past .. she surely made Aryan let go of it but her past was something she hadn't confronted yet..

Aryan turned away and saw Sunaina who was immersed in some big thought process ,"Ma".. he said as he snapped his fingers in front of her eyes.. Coming out of her trance Sunaina began feeding Aryan breakfast...

After about an hour guests started to come... most of them being office people while some where business partners...

Kalpi was busy in pooja preparations when someone closed her eyes from behind... Feeling that familiar touch she turned back to see her dear baba standing in front... she couldn't remember when was the last day she actually hugged her baba... Crying like a small kid she hugged her baba and then pakya who himself got emotional seeing this wiped the tears that were formed at the edge of his eyes and said," Beti aagayi aur aap log mujhe phirse bhul gaye ".. Kalpi lifted her head up and saw her mischevious brother and ran to him and hugged him tightly..

"Arey bas bas kalpu mera naya kurta kharaab ho jaayega", on hearing that Kalpi lifted her head and punched Pakya on his chest lightly... She asked them how come they were here in Khanna mansion.. on which Vithal narrated her the whole incident of Aryan calling them up to invite for the pooja...

Kalpi had almost thought that for the first time she would not be able to celebrate some festival without her family as after those two days she again was gonna get busy with work ... but Aryan had understood her unspoken words and called Jadhav family.. much to Kalpi's dismay Kamla yet again had let her down as she was busy taking care of Paakhi at the hospital...

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"Why could I never see that care?? why did I never see that love?? That day you burnt your hand so that you could save me and then knowing that I'm missing my family you helped me meet them... You always cared for every need of mine and all I did was hurt you", Kalpi said as she sobbed at the backseat... the tears were not stopping ...

Picking up her phone she called up Sunaina..

Kalpi- Hows he mom??

Sunaina- Doctor said that there's been a lost of blood loss and they're trying to stabilse his condition still...

Those words were enough for Kalpi to breakdown fully... "Its all because of me... ", she said as she cried bitterly... "Please god ... please save him...I love him a lot... please..."...

******** Flashback *************

The disappointment of not meeting her mother had still not left her mind... though she was now used to become a second priority since childhood she couldn't take it this time... even after all that happened Kamla was still with paakhi... the hurt was killing kalpi from inside .. she couldn't concentrate on work... she already was faking sternness with her colleagues but now that fake sternness turned to real anger...

Finally one day afternoon Aryan barged into her cabin and told her to come with him... He knew that sweet talk won't work this time and so ordered her to come with him...

She went with him and aftr few minutes drive she found herself at the gate of St.John mental hospital.. the hospital where paakhi was admitted...

Aryan leaned towards her and opened the door, "Go meet your mom.. ask some nurse Paakhi Kapoor's ward... I'll wait for you..."

Yet again Aryan understood her feelings... giving him a quick hug Kalpi went inside... she reached paakhi's ward and saw paakhi murmuring something..

The nurse who escorted Kalpi there left after telling Kalpi that the patient's mom has gone out and will be back after sometime... Kalpi stood there at the door staring at the mentally unstable paakhi.. she walked towards her.. Paakhi was playing with her dolls...

Kalpi placed her hand on paakhi's shoulder... Paakhi turned to look at her.. excitedly she said," Arey Kalpi... (pulling kalpi down to sit with her) Accha hua kalpi tu aa gayi mujhe laga tu mere shaadi pe nahi aayegi... tujhe pata hai Raghav mujhse bahut pyaar karta hai aur usne mujhe shaadi ke liye poocha... Mein toh uss din se jaanti thi jab hum dono date pe gaye aur Raghav ne mere liye pura restaurant book kar liya..", Paakhi giggled while Kalpi stared at her with wide eyes.. DATE...

"Mein toh jaanti thi.. woh comitment se darta hai issliye usne mujhe party waale din jawaab nahi diya.. ab sab thik ho gaya... ab meri Raghav se shaadi hogi..", Paakhi giggled again... Just then kamla came there nd took Kalpi away..

Kamla- Tu yaha kya kar rahi hai kalpi?? Agar paakhi ko dohra pad jaata toh..

Kalpi- Bas aayi.. Aur kitni baar... Jab dekho tab paakhi paakhi paakhi... tu humesha bhool jaathi hai ki teri aur ek beti hai kalpi jiska muh dekhna toh durki baat jisse tune do-teen hafto se baat bhi nahi ki..

Kamla - Mein jaanti hoon kalpi par.. Paakhi ka khayaal rakhne ke liye koi nahi hai issliye..

Kalpi just walked away from there as she didn't want to say something to Kamla that she would regret later and plus she had another matter to deal with..

Without speaking a word Kalpi sat back on her seat and they went back to the office.. After reaching the office Kalpi straightaway went in her cabin.. She picked up her phone and told her secretary to not let anyone disturb her..

Kalpi leaned back on the chair recalling her encounter with Paakhi.. "Raghav took her on date.. he knew she loved him and still he proposed to me.. he knew about paakhi's feelings and played with them" , Kalpi thought... Her reviere was broken by her secretary call..

"Didn't I tell you not to disturb me!!" , Kalpi said sternly..

"Ma'am actually"..

Before the secretary could say anything Raghav barged into Kalpi's cabin and said "We need to talk"..

Kalpi placed the reciever back and got up from her seat.. "Look Mr.Singhaania.." Raghav came near her and held her shoulder... "Kalpi you didn't come to your office these two days and after that day I too got busy... Can't we talk.. its been.." Raghav was stopped from saying anything else as their private meet was interrupted by Aryan..

"Mr.Singhaania how can you..",Aryan was about to hold Raghav's collar but Kalpi stopped him... "Aryan please.. this is personal.. ", Kalpi said...

"But Kalpana", Aryan tried to reason..

"Aryan please ... please stop interfering in my life...", Kalpi said ina loud tone..

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"I really regret it.. I really do... I never knew that those words which I spoke would be the last words you'll hear from me...",Kalpi thought...

The taxi came to a halt as she reached the hospital.. paying the taxi driver she rushed inside the hospital and went to the reception..

"Aryan Khanna", Kalpi said ..

"The accident case???",the lady asked...said

"Ye..yes..", stammeringly kalpi answered..

"ICU.. its at the end of right side passage..", the lady replied..

With tears flowing continuosly Kalpi headed towards the said place... She saw sunaina and sneha sitting outside... Sunaina got up on seeing Kalpi.. Kalpi held Sunaina's hands hoping to hear some good news.. but Sunaina's face showed no sign of such news...

Doctor came out and said," Mr.Khanna's condition is now stabilised but the next 24 hours are critical.. if he does not regain consciousness then he may slip into coma.."

Sunaina and sneha went to the small temple in the passage while Kalpi sat there .. she felt someone's hand on her shoulder and was shocked seeing Raghav..

She was ablut to say something but just then a nurse came there with a glass of water and gave it to Raghav," Mr.Singhaania please have this water and take rest.. after donating so much blood you might feel tired and dizzy.."

As soon as the nurse walked away Kalpi gave Raghav a friendly hug while saying thanks almost innumerable times... Raghav held her shoulder and reluctantly broke the hug.. "He loves you a lot and he deserves you.. (Placing his hand on her head) Hope you stay happy .. always...", saying so he walked away ...

*********** Flashback *************

Aryan left the cabin after kalpi said to him that he should stop interfering in her life...

Raghav- (Again holding her shoulder while caressing it) Kalpi I wanted to tell you something..

Kalpi- (Removing his hands) First I want to ask you something.. And just answer in a yes or no..

Raghav just nodded his head in approval as he was eager to tell kalpi the truth as now he had finally fulfilled the promise he gave to his mom of getting justice for her and his dad and now he was free to live his life with the love of his life .. with kalpi..

Kalpi- Did you take paakhi on a date before the office party??

Raghav- (With a confused expression) Kalpi why are you asking this now??

Kalpi- Yes or No..

Raghav- Yes but..

Kalpi- Fine... did Paakhi propose to you at the party..??

Raghav- Kalpi I..

Kalpi- Yes or no..

Raghav- Yes..

Kalpi- Did you tell her that you didn't love her??

Raghav- (Lowering his eyes) No..

Kalpi looked away with a disgusted look on her face.. Raghav tried to hold her hand but kalpi withdrew it.. .

Raghav- Kalpi I can explain..

Kalpi- Maybe you can but I don't wanna listen to any explanation Raghav.. I loved you Raghav.. even after you came at the altar where you were gonna marry me with your wife I didn't stop loving you.. You blackmailed me into coming to the temple where you filled my maang with sindoor .. opposing my aai I accepted you as my husband... the chawl people insulted me and my family all because of you but still I didn't let the love for you decrease.. though seeing you with paakhi was like piercing my heart with a big sharp knife I beared all of it and what did I get in return.. your lack of trust on me and you hiding the truth from me... I always trusted you .. i thought paakhi's one sided love as the cause of all the things that happened but today I got to know that why she built those fdreams of hers.. it was all because of you.. you let her do that..

Raghav- But kalpi its the past.. we can start afresh.. letting go of all the social barriers we can be one now..

Kalpi- No Raghav.. I want to end it right here ..

Raghav- You don't mean it Kalpi..

Kalpi- I do Raghav.. I can't love the man who has lost all the respect I had for him ... whom I can't trust and who can't trust me...

Raghav- Kalpi..

Kalpi- Don't make it difficult Raghav... its my final decision...

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"Its my time to pay for my mistakes... for breaking your heart...And there couldn't be a bigger punishment for me than to stay away from you.", Raghav said as he walked away after looking at Kalpi for the last time...

After requesting a lot Kalpi was allowed to go inside the ICU... the wires stuck to Aryan's body brought fresh tears in her eyes..She went near Aryan and sat on the stool beside his bed.. the nurse left to give the two their much needed privacy...

A tear droplet fell from Kalpi's eye and fell on Aryan's hand which made the hand that laid still move a bit.. Kalpi's hope rose again..

"I know you can hear me.. Aryan...I..", tears were trying to make their way out and her voice was stuck in her vocal chord..clearing her throat a bit she said it," I love you Aryan.."

Kalpi was staring at him and saw his eyelids move a bit she called out the nurse but noone came.. she got up to call the doctor but before she could go Aryan held her hand.. he signed her to come near him and when her ear was near his mouth he said in a weak tone," I love you too.."

*********** Flashback *************

After her confrontation with Raghav Kalpi went to the washroom... she looked at herself in the mirror and felt proud of herself as there was no sign of tears in her eyes.. Justbthen the feeling of guilt covered her heart and mind..

"I shouldn't have apoken so rudely to Aryan.. he was just trying to help.. though unintentionally I hurt him a lot.."

Saying so Kalpi went into his cabin but Aryan was not there... She went to ask to his personal secretary.. she said ," I don't know where he went but yeah he had booked Blue moon restaurant for the evening.."

Kalpi immediately left.. she actually wanted to share the news of she finally having confronted Raghav with Aryan first..

She reached the blue moon restaurant ... there she got to know that Aryan cancelled the booking.. while leaving the place she found that people were removing the carnations and lights and other decoration but what shocked her was the board qhich read I LOVE YOU KALPANA and beside it was her pic ... out of curiousity she asked the manager for whom were the decorations for.. the manager replied," Aryan sir.. "

Kalpi was in total shock as she tried to recollect all the incidences when Aryan cared for her.. she wanted to drive back home but she took the way to Aryan's house.. she got out of her car and saw herself before khanna mansion.. she sat back and was about to start the car and leave but then stopped...

It wasn't only Aryan who cared for her but she too did.. Realisation struck her... she need to sort these things . she went inside... Kalpi was now like a family member so the maid who opened the door let her in.. She asked Kalpi to sit in Aryan's room as it was the only room that was unlocked and the living area had the decorations being removed.. Sneha had gone with Sunaina for some movie.. while kalpi was sitting on the couch in Aryan's room she got a call from Sunaina to inform about Aryan's accident ... while leaving the room Kalpi's hand made some books fall down.. and her eyes fell on the red scrap book..which had her pic on the left page... she remembered Aryan's words,"one day someone will enter my life and all things will be set right.. she'll make me the happiest person alive.. and this book will have her pic and songs about her."...

She immeduately ran to her car but to her bad luck her car broke down in middle and she had to reach the hospital in a cab...

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Kalpi,Sunaina and Sneha waited for the doctor.. The doctor came out of the ICU and said," He's fine now.. we'll shift him to the ward very soon"...

Turn to next page for epilogue

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Arpita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#346

Epilogue

"Ma'am please listen to me", Mary - kalpi's PA pleaded...

"Not a word more... whatever price they want they can quote but that building is not for sale", Kalpi said in a determined voice... "And tell the driver to get my car ready I need to go to the concert.."

At the concert...

Backstage..

Assistant - Sir the concert will start in ten minutes..

Aryan- Not till my wonder girls are here...

"Bhai", a girl called Aryan.. Sneha came along with sunaina and hugged her brother..

Wishing him good luck for his first live concert Sneha and Sunaina went in the vip stall...

"Sir can we start now ??" , The assistant asked..

Aryan gave him a look and said," Two people more..."

And finally Kalpi arrived.. Smiling she went to Aryan whose mic was being fixed by a female assistant..

"Ok guys make the announcement",Aryan said as he moved towards his beautiful wife.. Taking her in a romantic hug while nuzzling his nose on her shoulder he said huskily," Love you Mrs.Khanna".. blushing hard kalpi pushed Aryan a bit and said," Go your fans are waiting.."..

Aryan was about to go when he turned back and said," forgot to give goodbye kiss to my future fan.. ",saying so he bent down and kissed Kalpi's belly after moving her blue saree's pallu a bit...

"Go", Kalpi said as she pushed Aryan ... She looked around and heaved a sigh of relief on not finding any assistants around.. "Besharam..", she said under her breath and walked to the VIP stall where Sneha and Sunaina were waiting for her...

On stage...

"Ok guys today I'll be singing some of my special songs and this one .. I had written for my lady love.. my dear wife Kalpana Aryan Khanna.. I had planned to sing this to her when I confess about my love but she ruined all my plans ... by confessing first... Better late than never wifey..."

Kalpi smiled and blushed on hearing that... two years after their marriage but nothing had changed except the love they had for each other...which kept on increasing day by day...

Kalpi had her dreams and Aryan had his ... for Aryan nothing was more important than Kalpi and the same was for Kalpi.. she wanted to fill Aryan's life with a lot of happiness but Aryan never wanted to burden her with family responsibilities... Kalpi still wondered what great deeds she might have done to get such a caring,loving husband...

One year after their marriage Kalpana was appointed as the CEO of SK construction as unanimous decision by the board of directors who could not find a single reason to not do so.. along with that she was also appointed as the builders' association president ...

Finally she had got her fistful of sky... finally she fulfilled her aai-baba's dream and that's when tragedy struck them... Due to a severe stroke Vithal died...

There were sorrows later on too but with a companion like Aryan all the sorrows appeared like small pebbles thrown in the ocean.. ripples were created but then the water became still...

After Vithal's death Kamla moved to her village as she felt it was better than living alone at the chawl ... She had finally learnt how Kalpi used to feel when she gave Paakhi first priority as she saw ot when she met Kalpi and Sunaina..

Pakya shifted to delhi where he worked as a hardware engineer ... he got married to Shreeya who was his co-worker and was now happily settled there and Paakhi who was now back to normal lived with her brother Prem suffering for her selfish deeds and living a sad and lonely life under the guilt of having destroyed two lives to get what she wanted... Raghav helped prem get a job abroad and settle there ...

In an attempt to reduce the guilt she began working at many NGOs helping the needy and underprivileged..

After Kalpi left him Raghav got back to becoming a workaholic again... though he couldn't forgive gauri for what she did but continued taking her care till the moment she took her last breath... as his mother's last wish which he felt was his duty to fulfill he got married... the marriage changed him for better as he tried his best to give his wife a happy married life..

After their confession...Neetu was arrested for Gauri's abduction (When they kidnap gauri after holi episode ) and torture and Sahil for that plus singhaania's murder... With the help of his efficient lawyers Raghav made them both rot in jail for the rest of their life

******** Seven months later ************

Aryan was pacing back and forth in the hospital corridor stomping his feet and exhaling heavily...

"Its fine...they're fine...don't worry",Sunaina said sitting on the bench outside the OT..."Bhai...Doc said its a normal delivery...why are you getting hyper",Sneha said as she placed her head on Sunaina's shoulder...

"AAAHHH", a loud scream came from inside the OT which rooted Aryan on his place...

"Why is she screaming????????...Please tell her not to scream...I'm freaking out...", Aryan said while wiping his sweat...he then walked over to the table placed and gulped his third bottle of water...

"You know right she's having labour pain... do you expect her to dance in this situation???", Sunaina said sarcastically...

Just then the doctor came and Aryan ran towards him...

"Congrats Mr.Khanna its a baby girl"... The doctor said to Aryan... Aryan was about to enter the OT but doctor stopped him... "We'll move them in the ward after some time" , Doctor said and went away...

Kalpi was shifted into ward ... Aryan went near her and gave a peck on her forehead whispering," Thanks for the best gift ever"...

"Ahem..ahem", Sneha and sunaina cleared their throats as they enterd the ward...

Sneha- (While walking in) Bhai you wanna see your daughter or you're way too happy with bhabhi??

Sunaina- (Picking up the baby in the cradle) "So what name have you guys decided for this angel??"..

"Mom we both will discuss that in private...",Aryan said as he winked at Kalpi making kalpi blush and she hit Aryan's shoulder playfully... "Ab toh sudhar jaao.. now you're a father".. "Never sweetheart..", Aryan said with a mischeivous grin..

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Finally it ends.. I thought I was unnecessarily stretching the story a lot and I couldn't find a better end for it... Thanks a lot for all your likes and comments.. your support was the sole reason that I could continue the story and finally finish what I started ...😊

Edited by appyK - 10 years ago

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ButterflyChaser

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Read last two parts n epilogue together... So first of all sorry for the delay but u know weekend time is family time.😉 My only fam in Delhi is my would be hubby.😆

The previous part was the bit rushed one but I liked how Aryan shared his past with Kalpi n that scrapbook one was too good. I liked the idea of having 4 scrapbooks and all. Aryan's love n hate for Sunaina was justified.. That hate was just to hide his love n loved the way Kalpi explained the reason for forgiving her. Kalpi was uncomfortable about 3rd scrapbook... she had her own reasons n quite justified.

The last part..Mindblowing... I loved how u showed Kalpi worried about Aryan and remembering the past incidents.. i felt like watching some movie.. Arya is too cute n best guy for Kalpi. He called her father n brother without her saying a word showed the immense love n care he had for her. Kamla dint disappoint me at all.. She dint changed a bit n m glad Kalpi dint forgive her. Kapi's conversation with Rags was nice one... She chose the best one for him. Aryan planned surprise for Kalpi but it dint happen.. Well everything happens for a good reason n m happy that she took her time for realization... i just knew that 3rd scrapbook will play it's role and it did. Kalpi proposed it 1st... MIND BLOWING UPDATE.

Coming to epilogue... No words for it. Just loved it. Aryan's love for Kalpi and her commitment towards him is superb. But I felt u forgot Sneha's age.😆 She is taking about normal delivery n labor pain is surprising for me... 😉 Thank God Kamla is alone n still paying for her deeds but why Vitthal died. He deserved to see his granddaughter's face.

Sorry for long comments but after reading such awesome updates I can't control myself.😊

Sad that I am not going to read this story more but I am expecting some more awesome stories from u.. u r an awesome writer.👏

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Arpita

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Originally posted by: fairylover
Read last two parts n epilogue together... So first of all sorry for the delay but u know weekend time is family time.😉 My only fam in Delhi is my would be hubby.😆

The previous part was the bit rushed one but I liked how Aryan shared his past with Kalpi n that scrapbook one was too good. I liked the idea of having 4 scrapbooks and all. Aryan's love n hate for Sunaina was justified.. That hate was just to hide his love n loved the way Kalpi explained the reason for forgiving her. Kalpi was uncomfortable about 3rd scrapbook... she had her own reasons n quite justified.

The last part..Mindblowing... I loved how u showed Kalpi worried about Aryan and remembering the past incidents.. i felt like watching some movie.. Arya is too cute n best guy for Kalpi. He called her father n brother without her saying a word showed the immense love n care he had for her. Kamla dint disappoint me at all.. She dint changed a bit n m glad Kalpi dint forgive her. Kapi's conversation with Rags was nice one... She chose the best one for him. Aryan planned surprise for Kalpi but it dint happen.. Well everything happens for a good reason n m happy that she took her time for realization... i just knew that 3rd scrapbook will play it's role and it did. Kalpi proposed it 1st... MIND BLOWING UPDATE.

Coming to epilogue... No words for it. Just loved it. Aryan's love for Kalpi and her commitment towards him is superb. But I felt u forgot Sneha's age.😆 She is taking about normal delivery n labor pain is surprising for me... 😉 Thank God Kamla is alone n still paying for her deeds but why Vitthal died. He deserved to see his granddaughter's face.

Sorry for long comments but after reading such awesome updates I can't control myself.😊
Sad that I am not going to read this story more but I am expecting some more awesome stories from u.. u r an awesome writer.👏

Thanks a lot vish for this long update... Really relieved ... I thought that you guys would hate the flashback waala last parts ... Couldn't come up with some other way for realisation...

Super glad that you liked it... And thanks for correcting me.. I made that sunaina now..😆

Thanks a lot once again.. 🤗Writers like u are my inspiration so surely will keep writing but they'll be RagNa stories as I'm obsessed with that couple..😳