IS THIS LOVE SSpart2b page7 15/07 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: diti96

half correct
Thanx for liking ittt

Half correct? Let me guess...Kalpi will fall and he will catch but romance won't happen. Or he will let her fall!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Nyc update... Have a feeling that I'll love this story 😉
N who the hell is the idiot who told u dat ur not a gud writer? 😛
Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Thank u guys or liking it
Sorry but i wil update next part on monday
Sry as i hav loads of work to do on tjis weekend
I will try to update as i hav ideas for itt
Thanx for liking it 🤗
1 more thing if u want pm then just say that in comment or like the next update
Last but not least there will be no paakhi in my ff as i m fed up of this character in programme...
Sorry if there is any oaakhi lover
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Nice start😊
kalpi don't believe in love, its interesting to read..
waiting for ragna
plz continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
nyc strt
loved to red more
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Nice update...i m loving it...update soon...waiting for kalpi fall and raghav's catch☺️...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Thank for the appreciation
So heres part 2(a) as part 2 was vry long so i divided this
Sat morning
Yadav's house
K- shruti, come fast baby.. we are getting late Suman didi aati hi hong
i Sh- i m ready
K- wow u r luking gud in this dress
Sh- y not ...my di gave me this Suman enters
Su- hi shruti kaiso ho.. namentey uncle and aunty
K-hi ab chalein
Su- y not
Suman is from rich family but vry ground to earth.
Singhania msnsion
Vansh&sneha- mamu chalo na late ho raha hai.
R- bas ye 1 last call
V&S- nahi agar ab aap nhi chle toh hum dadi se shikayat laga denge
Dadi enters
D- kya complaint karni hai mjhse
V - dekhiye na dadi mamu kab se late kr rahe hain shopping ke liye
R- gud mrng dadi ma.. dadi ma bas 2 mins i m goin
S- dadi ma wats this he alys is busy on his phone Aise kar dijiye inki shaadi phone se hi krwa dijiye
Sammy- yes sneha thats a brilliant idea
D- kyu na aisi ladki dhoonde jiske saamne ye apna phone hi bhul jaaye
R- now stop it all of u... kya dadi ma aap bhi...mjhe abhi shaadi nhi karni
D- okayy leave this topic... Tumhein late ho rha hai ...
V& S - bye dadi All went to mall
In mall
Kalpi- suman tu aur kitninshoppjng karegi thhakti nhi hai shopping krke
Suman- nhi lekin abhi humaari princess ne toh shopping ki hi nhi Then they went to kids corner where vansh and sneha wer shopping
Sh- hi vansh! Hi sheha! Kaiso ho !!
Shruti studies in same skul in that of vansh amd sneha ehich is 1of the best skuls of city..kalpi is doing part tym job so as to give suman best facilities
Kalpi-hello vansh and sneha!!
V&s - hello!!
Raghav was outside attending some call and when he was returning he saw most beautiful girl playing with his nephew snd niece... He just freezed their as tym has stopped.. He forgot he was tsliking on phone and his thoughts wer disturbed by sammy eho missed that he was gazing at a girl..
S- client se baat ho gyi
R- haan
S-achha chl fir mjhe apme liye thodi dhopping krni hai tu bachhon ke paas ja
R-hmmm
S- are u ok
R- yeah mjhe kya hona hai
S- nhi tu aise khoya hai jaise tune kisi apsara ko dekh liya ho
R- kya! Nhi toh
At shop
K- shruti just be here.. I m coming in 2 mins just looking where is suman
Sh- okay di As she was going a boy was playing with his toy car .
.. As usual kalpi didnt look at it and she was abt to fall but sum1 caught her... And it was none other than raghav
K- how dare u touch me
R- kya aap aise thank u bolti hain jo aapko bachata hai
K- thanx but mai sambhal leti apne aapko
R- really
K- yes
R- okay then try this tym
Raghav losened his grip... She was abt to fall again but before she touched the ground he hold her again This tym she just closed her eyes hard... Raghav was just gazing at her... He was noticing her carefully Kalpi slowly open her eyes her eyes and then there was an eyelock.. It was broken by suman and sammy who just saw this and came there
Su- hey kalpi
K- ( to raghav) thanx..she was abt to say more but interrupted her and asked r u f9
K- yeah giving angry looks to raghav
Sammy- hi suman! Tum yahaan..


Abhi ke liye itna hi
Tell me howz it
All criticisms and suggestions are welcum
Dont forget to hit like button and comment
Sorry for the errors...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Awesome update...
raghav toh gya..hehehehe
Continue soon
Edited by aanchal57 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Beautiful update... please continue soon.. interesting meeting...
Haha Rags apna ph conversation bhool jaata hai looking at our angel Kalpi talking to his nephew n neice...


👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
wow awesome update..
dadi ka wish pura hogaya..
Ragna eye lock
plz continue soon..

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