New ff/ss on RagNa (AshNa):Love. Part 24 updated. 18/8/14. Completed - Page 67

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Happy Independence Day my sweet hearts...
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A week passed after Kalpi came back to Mumbai ... Kalpi was as usual having her afternoon me-time sitting alone near her room window... the only thing that changed was that now she just couldn't stop smiling... She was smiling thinking about that night when Raghav did so much efforts just to apologise to her... Then she blushed on thinking about their dance...

"O hello... Ms.I-am-smiling-without-reason AGAIN...",Raj said as he snapped his fingers in front of Kalpi's eyes bringing her out of her memory lane...

Coming out of her trance Kalpi said stammerring a little..."Huh... Ya... Ya.. "

Raj- Sweetheart if you're done with your daydreaming then we need to go for shopping...
Kalpi- Ya ok fine... (Holding his collar ) I wasn't daydreaming...
Raj- (Removing her hand ) Ok... chill... you weren't (in low voice ) just like you're not lying now...
Kalpi- What?? What did you say???
Raj- Nah... nothing... go get ready ... I'm waiting in the car...
Kalpi- Ok fine..

Kalpi got up and went to get ready while Raj went downstairs to wait in his car...


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"It's very heavy", Kalpi said as she rejected yet another dress...

Kalpi-"Raj... yeh Maya di kaha reh gayi... She was supposed to be here half an hour ago..."
Raj- (Turning her around by holding her shoulder) See there she is...

And Kalpi saw Maya enter the shop with a guy..."Raghav", Kalpi said as she saw Raghav come along with Maya..

Maya came near the duo ,"That's my would-be sis-in-law Kalpana and that's Raj... And guys he is my cousin Raghav... "...

Before Kalpi could say anything Raj held his hand forward and shook hands with Raghav.. then he said to Maya," Thank god Maya you came or else you would've found my dead body here as KJ here was boring me to death..."..Kalpi gave Raj an angry glare and took Maya to the counter ...

After sometime Prem too joined them and all got busy in shopping... Maya and Prem were busy teasing each other as they selected dresses for each other while Raj stood in between Raghav and Kalpi having convo with both while helping Kalpi select dresses for different functions ...

Kalpi couldn't choose a single dress and said to the shopkeeper ,"Nah ... I don't like these heavy dresses... show me some lehengas..."... While placing his hand over Kalpi's shoulder Raj said ,"Do one thing ... show all the dresses you've in your shop ... If possible get some from neighbouring shops too... then our Ms.Choosy would be happy..."..."Shut up yaar Raj",Kalpi said while playfully hitting his arm...

The sweet talks and hitting of the friends was making Raghav burn in jealousy... He went to a side while talking to someone on the phone...

Kalpi couldn't choose a dress so she decided to buy earrings first... she moved the small mirror placed on the table to see which earrings suited her...Raj was standing at some distance away as he too was choosing a sherwaani for himself...

Kalpi tried different earrings but she was still not able to choose which one would look best.. she picked up a small pearl earrings and Raghav saw that... Kalpi had by-mistake or fortunately arranged the mirror such that Raghav was visible in it.. Raghav nodded in a no while Kalpi placed the earrings on her ear... then she picked up traditional jhumkas..Raghav nodded in a yes... "Pack these",Kalpi said to the shopkeeper..

After choosing jewellry Kalpi moved onto dresses... She asked Raghav through her eyes which she should wear and Raghav helped her to choose dresses in same manner... She was done with shopping and trying the dresses for all functions except marriage...

She picked up a yellow with orange colour lehenga and looked into the mirror to ask Raghav's opinion but Raghav wasn't there... She turned to see where Raghav was but there was no sign of him... Just then a salesgirl came to Kalpi and handed her a Red-coloured saree... "Who gave this??",Kalpi asked her.. "That person",the girl pointed at Raghav who was standing with Maya...

They exchanged silent thankyou and my pleasure which unknow to them was observed by Raj..."Daal mein kuch kaala hai",Raj thought as he rubbed his chin in detective style..


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The whole Jadhav family with Raj was busy in unwrapping the shopped stuff while arrangemnts were going on for mehendi..."Aaj kal humaare KJ ke choices kaafi badal rahe hai",Raj said as she showed Kamla the saree Kalpi bought... "The girl who hated sarees and thought them to be uncomfortable has bought it to wear at her brother's wedding...waah bhai waah..."

Kamla- (Looking at the saree) The saree is beautiful beta ... by the way from when did you started liking sarees..?? I know you wore that saree I gave just because I gifted it and your sir had asked you to wear something traditional...
Kalpi- Its nothing like that... I just thought to wear something different at bhai's wedding...
Raj- (Narrowing his eyebrows) You thought or someone else made you think so... hmmm??? (To Kamla) Aunty you know today we met Maya's cousin Raghav (stressing on the name)

Kalpi's heart unknowingly skipped a beat on hearing Raghav's name... She excused herself from their which grew Raj's suspicion ..."Definately kuch to gadbad hai",He thought...

Kalpi got busy in checking the decoration for next day's mehendi as Raj sneakily got hold of her cell-phone... He read all the text messages sent by Raghav ... Though they weren't romantic by any angle... but his detective mind said that his best friend liked Raghav and the only thing that would confirm it was... The weapon that would make love-birds do weirdest things...Jealousy...

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Note: Thanks a lot : diti96, zindgidilse, Cinderella81, lolor, ...Natasha..., 4eversara, DiVirgo, fairylover, rani214, sunyy for your suggestions... sorry if i missed out anyone.. thanks kiara aka ragna_luv for correcting the rahul instead of raj thing...

Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a good update. Loved the ddlj type scene between kalpi and rags. Waiting for their next convo. WIting for rags to get jealous. Hope to have kalpi mesmerize rags with a dance at prems wedding. Update asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update!!! Loved the way how RAGNA were eye talking to each other for their likes. Its too cute. Continue soon😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome, if Raj is Kalpi's best friend why is not telling him about Raghav, the unexpected twist was Maya and Raghav been cousins
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anjinie

awesome, if Raj is Kalpi's best friend why is not telling him about Raghav, the unexpected twist was Maya and Raghav been cousins


Kalpi hasn't told him anything as there's nothing much to tell about... I'll make that part clear in next update.. Thanks a lot for your feedback😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow Arpita! You are getting romantic day by day and giving us oh so ragnalicious updates. First apologising and now dress selection. Awesome yaar. Reminded me of the wedding shopping scene in ema just before dressing room romance. Our good old ragna days! Absolutely loved it. They are getting closer day by day. Yet to acknowledge it though. Looks like Raj's jealousy factor will work. Rags is already jealous of the camaraderie between Kalpi and Raj. So won't take much to jalaofy him. I really liked the way Raghav gave the red saree to Kalpi through sales girl. Can't wait for the romance to start. Way to go girl! Thank you for the acknowledgement before the update. Love you 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update..
continue soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
So Raghav is Maya cousin so marriage nok jhok will be there, awesome update I like kalpi daydreaming, blushing, enjoyed silent conversation between Raghav and Kalpi. So sweet so slowly unofficial romance started.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww Kalpi is falling for Raghav as well
I like how she was daydreaming and Raj caught her lol
Raghav getting jealous of Kalpi and Raj was awesome ;)
I love the way Raghav help Kalpi in choosing her clothing and jewelry for Prem wedding
Beautiful update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Raghav n Maya r cousins!!!😲 now Raghav wil come to marriage then n RagNa eyelocks
Raghav wil burn with more jealousy now bcz of Raj...i am loving Raj's detective job😉
awesome update😊

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