New ff/ss on RagNa (AshNa):Love. Part 24 updated. 18/8/14. Completed - Page 69

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dimpleagar

Raghav n Maya r cousins!!!😲 now Raghav wil come to marriage then n RagNa eyelocks
Raghav wil burn with more jealousy now bcz of Raj...i am loving Raj's detective job😉
awesome update😊


Yup a lot of burning in jealousy things are coming up...
Glad you liked it so far..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chahat4u

such a nice update. I want next update asap! 😭 can't wait anymore. Awesome. 😃👏 Loved silent conversation between Raghav & Kalpana; the way Raghav helped Kalpi choose dresses and even gifted her one; Kalpi's changing choices for Raghav 😳, and Raj is so adorable, true best friend. 😃 😊


You'll get it asap charu.. No worries😉
Glad you liking it😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...

Aww Kalpi is falling for Raghav as well
I like how she was daydreaming and Raj caught her lol
Raghav getting jealous of Kalpi and Raj was awesome ;)
I love the way Raghav help Kalpi in choosing her clothing and jewelry for Prem wedding
Beautiful update


Thanks a lot😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sharanya0011

beautiful update dear...


Thanks a lot😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aaj ka second and last update... Hope u like it...😉
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Kalpi was running around in the house trying to manage everything... checking whether all arrangements are proper and that everything is being done properly or not as Raj sat in the corner observing his one prey and waiting for another to arrive..

"I know KJ that you thought I would ask thousand questions about Raghav and then keep on pestering you to get more and more info about him and so you didn't tell me anything about Raghav... but don't forget...I'm Raj Malhotra and you my friend can't hide anything from me",He said to himself...

Just then Raghav came along with his family and Sammy... On seeing Raghav Raj called up someone and said, "He has arrived... he's wearing white coloured Kurta-pyjama... attack when he's alone ..."...


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While Sammy and Paakhi went along with Gauri to meet Kamla , Raghav's eyes were constantly searching for Kalpi...

Atlast he found her ... She was wearing a golden-yellow coloured lenga and red coloured short blouse with a red net dupatta... She stood there at some distance with her hand covered in mehendi she was scolding some worker about the decoration...The flicks coming on her eyes constantly disturbing her...

Unknowingly his legs began to move in that direction as his eyes refused to leave the lovely sight ... Suddenly he bumped into someone ... Just when the girl was about to fall he held her waist...

Raghav- I'm so sorry..
Girl- (Blushing & Smiling ) Its ok.. Actually instead of you saying sorry I should be thanking you for saving me.. thanks... Mr. ??
Raghav- Raghav...
Girl- Hi I'm Aishwarya...You can call me Aish...

On cue Aish's phone rang..

Aish- Raghav can you do me a favour please..
Raghav- Ahhh.. ya sure..
Aish- Just remove my phone from the purse (showing the purse hanging by her waist)..

Raghav helped her and held the phone on her ear..


Aish- Hello.
Raj- Fabulous work dear.. Kalpi is coming in your direction go near him now..

Aish does the same.. She goes near Raghav under the pretext of adjusting the phone.. Raghav tries to keep his hand away but that is not seen by Kalpi as she could see only the side parts of both.. Seeing that girl coming close to Raghav Kalpi goes near the duo..

Before she comes there Aish goes as Raj informs her on time.. On seeing Kalpi coming near him Raghav smiles..

Raghav- Hi Kalpana..
Kalpi- (In an angry tone) Who was that girl??
Raghav- Oh that... Aish.. I mean Aishwarya..
Kalpi- And why was she getting so close to you?? huh??
Raghav- (With a clueless expression) No Kalpana ... Actually I..
Kalpi- Let it be.. Enjoy the function..

Stomping her feet Kalpi went away...

"Act one succesful... Mission Know KJ's feelings accomplished..",Raj said to himself.."Raghav ke feelings are clearly visible and now KJ ke bhi confirmed.. Now Mission Hitch RagNa .. on the roll.."


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"Aish",Kalpi said in a mocking tone as she paced in her room... "All boys are dogs... ladki dekhi nahi ki phisal gaye... Mujhe toh kabhi Kalpi nahi bulaaya and uss Aishwarya ko Aish.."

"What was the need to chipkofy with her... Wasn't there anyone else to help her... Was he the only person there... No na... so ...whatever ... unhe jo karna hai kare I don't care... but then why am I getting frustrated.."

Just then there was a knock at her door.. "Who's it??",Kalpi yelled in frustration...

"Its me... Maya.. if you're busy then I'll talk to you later",Maya said from outside...

Taking deep breathe Kalpi opened the door.. Maya immediately barged in...

Kalpi-Arey di.. I mean vahini (Sis-in-law in marathi) what happened??
Maya- (Stomping around as she paced ) Your brother is a dog...
Kalpi- Why?? What did he do??
Maya- I asked him to get nimbu to apply it on my mehendi but then instead of applying it on my hand he was helping some other girl... Now I'm not talking to him..
Kalpi- Arey Vahini ... he maybe just helping her... don't get so hyper..
Maya- Kalpi now he's gonna get married and still he's helping other girls...

While Kalpi was trying to calm Maya down Prem came there...

Prem- Maya I'm sorry (holding ears)
Maya- No need of your sorry Mr.Social Worker..
Prem- Maya listen na.. she was forcing me to give her that nimbu... (Holding Maya's hand) See your mehendi is so dark.. that means I love you a lot right...then how can you think that I'll flirt with someone else..

Seeing Prem's cute pout Maya forgives him...

Prem- By the way.. why is it that you girls get jealous so easily??
Maya- Jealousy is a clear sign of love... We girls get jealous coz we genuinely love the other person...Anyway Gauri maushi might be waiting for me...

Hugging Kalpi and Prem ,Maya went downstairs and Prem too went after saying good night to Kalpi...

Kalpi drifted off to sleep while Maya's words kept ringing in her ears "Jealousy is a clear sign of love"...

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Edited by appyK - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!! It's too cute with the jealousy factor. Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Read both parts...simply awesome update
Hmm kalpi daydrming n smiling was cue for raj
Loved ragna aakhon aakhon me isshare while selecting dress n earings reminding dressing room romance
Wow raghav gifted red saree hoping 4 an awesome ragna scene on prem's wedding confession bhi chalega 😉
Raj is adorable n a true bff
Finally kalpi realizing her feelings twrds raghav
Bechara raghav kalpi ko dekhne aaya n angry young kalpi ka saamna hua😆
Hmm loving dis jealousy track...eager to read next part
Edited by rani214 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update. Jealousy starts😉 so first step to love.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love is in the air! Kalpi ke dil mein kuch kuch hone laga hai. I'm loving Raj for this. It's funny how he tries to know about Kalpi's feelings. Obviously Raghav's emotions are not hidden. Even a blind person can see. Only our angel doesn't understand. Thanks to Prem and Maya, Kalpi realising that she feels something other than platonic relation to Raghav. Loved how she got jealous when she saw the other girl near Raghav. Now cupid Raj to bring them closer. Wow! I'm in la. ...la. ..la. ...ragna land.
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Posted: 11 years ago
lets see what Raj has planned for Raghav to make him jealous, lovely update

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