Kalpana The vicious Girl updt on new thread(24th Nov)

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laavanya4u

@laavanya4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#971

U had given us a very beautiful update after a good break!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good in ur FF,Pakhya is smart and sensible and he is very affectionate towards Kalpi.And wants to support and prove the innocence of Kalpi.

Again this Vitthal is Kamla's ghulam .Good he had overheard Pakhya's and raghav's convo and realised his mistake.But couldn't wait to share it with Kamla thus proving that he will be Kamla's kathputhi rather than his Rajkumari's father.

And hats off to the soon to be detective Sammy.How is the psycho related to Sheetal??.

U have beautifully narrated the emotions of the trio :Prem - Maria -Kalpi.

Let the psycho leave her brain at home and not notice either Kalpi or Kalpi's car

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Anjinie

@Anjinie

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#972

Pakhaya just knows kamala and her behaviour towards Kalpi, just curious is Gauri also helping Paakhi

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rani214

@rani214

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#973

Superb update

Loved pakya n raghav convo...he knows his parents well

I actually wanted sum punishment for vitthal as he culd not trust his own blood but also feeling bad for him at d same tim so let kalpi forgive him

Pakhi got threatning call n guess its sumthng related to khushi...hope Sammy finds mystery lady soon

Loved premna n maria scene

Wonder wat has pkhi planned nw as kapi left her phone in her room n pakhi must have chkd it n got sum clues abt kalpi knowing d truth or she simply came to ask for money from prem ...vish u left us on cliff hanger...pls update soon

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Saumya

@SamBricka

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#974

hey di...suprb update 👏 👏 👏 thnx 4 pm di... Luvd pakya nd rags hug...it ws tuchng d way kalpi handld prem...wt a frnd di aapne poll kiya tha meine apna vote diya bt phir bt cumnt bhi ker deti hun i thnk kalpi shuld 4giv vitthal bt she shuld'nt 4giv that kamla the damla...i hate dat witch 😡 😡 plz di update as soon as posibl...last time apne aftr 10 days update kiya...bt plz iss bar jaldi plz...plz...plz...plzzz...

Update di...update

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#975

Originally posted by: appyK
Stalker😆😉
Yippee me first🥳 aise hi subah update kara kar.. i'll always be first to comment😆

wow.. Pakya is rocking .. he showed that he is VitLa's son.. knows his mom and dad so wel.. kammo won't even trust god over paakhi🤢 she seriously deserves punishment and as of vithal.. i feel bad for him.. father always loves his daughter more and because of the mu he was forced by circumstances to react the way he did... but he still oves kalpi so defo uske liye maafi..

wat is paakhi doing there😲😲 u left us on cliff hanger ab next part jaldi update kar..

Thank u Appy... I will try to give updates in the morning as I love writing in the night. It gives an awesome atmosphere u know.😊

Pakya proved that he is a true son but VithLa failed to prove themselves a good parent as they dint understand their daughter.

I will punish Kamla for sure... Vitthal will reunite with Kalpi.

I am trying to update asap.

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#976

Originally posted by: sweet1308
Great update n now pakhi has t pay for hurting n interfering on ragna life

Originally posted by: niru04
wonderful update

Originally posted by: ovee
Superb update.

Originally posted by: lolor
pls give worst punishment to kamla...

Originally posted by: Aru18
wonderful update.
and give punishement to kamala

Originally posted by: premap
Thrilling! Plz update .

Thank u so much guys... i assure u that I will update soon and will punish Kamla as well. Sorry but saving time so that i can give update soon.

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#977

Originally posted by: chahat4u
Vish how do you do it everytime, write a most beautiful, awesome update; and then end at a crucial point. and that too with a grand twist! 👏⭐️The update was super-duper good. Vitthal finally knows the truth, and he will burn in guilt now. Hope Kalpi doesn't forgive him this easily. He should know what it feels like when your loved one disowns you, doesn't trust you.
Loved Pakhya-Raghav convo.Pakhi is and always will be a witch only.Wonder who that mysterious lady was behind whom Sammy has left.

Raghav is close to the truth of finding out that it was Kalpi who had destroyed him to take her revenge. he'll surely be break even more after knowing the whole truth. Hope he and Sammy are able to gather evidences to prove Kalpi's innocence.

I love the trio of Prem-Maria and Kalpi. Such cute friendship and hope to see it like this in future also.
Oh no, Pakhi is here! 😲 What game she wants to play now. Hope she doesn't make things difficult for Kalpi more.

You are a brilliant story-teller, especially when it comes to twists, turns, and suspense.👏 Plan to write your own thriller book someday Vish? it shall surely be a hit.😃

Charu...🤗 U always manage to make me smile by ur compliments... i just try to maitain the mystery quotient in the story.

I will make Vitthal repent for his mistake.. not a punishment coz many readers do not want it but he will regret for not trusting his daughter.

No mystery behind Pakhi's call.. it Sheetal but why is she blackmailing her is yet to know.

Raghav will find whole truth in next part... Now we need to see how he deals with the situation... I hope I succeeds in showing his pain.

Thriller book?? Well before that i will try to write something on wattpad as it's easy to get good comments in IF coz of RagNa love and the characters already been introduced by cvs... I would like to check my writings there once. Thank u for such an awesome comment... it really means a lot

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#978

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
This Kamla don't deserve Kalpi love and definitely not her forgiveness...
Vitthal on the other hand love Kalpi a lot but still fail to see her innocence
I love the way Pakya understood his sister and see her innocent
Pakya explaining things to Raghav was awesome
Superb update

Won't forgive kamla... max peple want me to forgive Vitthal so I will.

Glad u like Pakya here. Thank u.

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Oh wow what an awesome update!!! The mystery is unfolding and what a point to stop at!!!! Paakhi at Prem's house????
What??? Nooo!!! Did she see Kalpi's mobile on her bed. Did she check Kalpi's calls??? Oh no how could have Kalpi done something so stupid!!!!! Oh no Oh no!!!...Not now Vish when they were so close to it!!!!

Please I dont want Kalpi to lose to that witch!!!! OMG she parked her car in front of Kapoor mansion!!! What if Paakhi followed Kalpi and Raghav? what the hell is wrong with Kalpi????
What happened to her???? Love making her weak and brainless again!!! Nooo!

I liked her vicious!!! Please Vish no more EMA CV's ka twist!!! Please!!!

Next update soonnn!!! God I cant wait!!!! This is sooo damn interesting!!!!👏

Priya.. chill!! Pakhi is at Prem's house but our PremNa are smart enough to deal with her but will they akle to fool her completely or it't the time for them to face their 1st defeat??

Mobile has important role in the story. Will reveal it later.😆

Chill... M not EMA cvs. I have clear vision of my story and won't mess it. So chill baby. Our Kalpi is vicious but she needs to face some opposition as it is becoming one sided story with all ganging up against Pakhi.

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ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#979

Originally posted by: mariee
Though i dont comment regularly on ur ff ...but lemme tell u i am a regular reader of this particular work of urs.
The raghav-pakya convo was quite good.
I dont know why but that hug they shared , i found it very pleasant & warm while reading.That scene quickly flashed in mind & i was smiling !!
Chalo, atleast vitthal is a sensible character in ur ff ... thank god !😉😉
I am waiting for kalpi-vitthal confrontation DESPERATELY !!😃
As always u r 1 unpredictable being ... I can correctly predict what might happen next for most ffs in here ...but this 1 ,its simply impossible.
Initially i used to try ... but then failed each time as u came up with something super hatke.
Now toh i have stopped trying & prefer waiting for ur updates😆😆

Do continue sooner than the soonest ... i wanna read more & more & more

MARUSHKAA

Thanks Marushkaa... It's ok if u do not comment regularly jus let me know that u r readin it by hitting like.

M glad u liked it. Will try to give confrontation soon.

M happy that I am bale to stay unpredictable till now. As I do not want to lose the suspense at such crucial point though almost everyone guessed that Pakhi is the culprit.

Will update next part in a while.