Kalpana The vicious Girl updt on new thread(24th Nov)

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#961

Vish how do you do it everytime, write a most beautiful, awesome update; and then end at a crucial point. and that too with a grand twist! 👏⭐️The update was super-duper good. Vitthal finally knows the truth, and he will burn in guilt now. Hope Kalpi doesn't forgive him this easily. He should know what it feels like when your loved one disowns you, doesn't trust you.

Loved Pakhya-Raghav convo.Pakhi is and always will be a witch only.Wonder who that mysterious lady was behind whom Sammy has left.

Raghav is close to the truth of finding out that it was Kalpi who had destroyed him to take her revenge. he'll surely be break even more after knowing the whole truth. Hope he and Sammy are able to gather evidences to prove Kalpi's innocence.

I love the trio of Prem-Maria and Kalpi. Such cute friendship and hope to see it like this in future also.

Oh no, Pakhi is here! 😲 What game she wants to play now. Hope she doesn't make things difficult for Kalpi more.

You are a brilliant story-teller, especially when it comes to twists, turns, and suspense.👏 Plan to write your own thriller book someday Vish? it shall surely be a hit.😃

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#962

This Kamla don't deserve Kalpi love and definitely not her forgiveness...
Vitthal on the other hand love Kalpi a lot but still fail to see her innocence
I love the way Pakya understood his sister and see her innocent
Pakya explaining things to Raghav was awesome
Superb update

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Lolor

@lolor

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#963

pls give worst punishment to kamla...

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Aru18

@Aru18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#964

wonderful update.

and give punishement to kamala

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#965

Oh wow what an awesome update!!! The mystery is unfolding and what a point to stop at!!!! Paakhi at Prem's house????

What??? Nooo!!! Did she see Kalpi's mobile on her bed. Did she check Kalpi's calls??? Oh no how could have Kalpi done something so stupid!!!!! Oh no Oh no!!!...Not now Vish when they were so close to it!!!!

Please I dont want Kalpi to lose to that witch!!!! OMG she parked her car in front of Kapoor mansion!!! What if Paakhi followed Kalpi and Raghav? what the hell is wrong with Kalpi????

What happened to her???? Love making her weak and brainless again!!! Nooo!

I liked her vicious!!! Please Vish no more EMA CV's ka twist!!! Please!!!

Next update soonnn!!! God I cant wait!!!! This is sooo damn interesting!!!!👏

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maarushkaa

@maarushkaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#966

Though i dont comment regularly on ur ff ...but lemme tell u i am a regular reader of this particular work of urs.

The raghav-pakya convo was quite good.

I dont know why but that hug they shared , i found it very pleasant & warm while reading.That scene quickly flashed in mind & i was smiling !!

Chalo, atleast vitthal is a sensible character in ur ff ... thank god !😉😉

I am waiting for kalpi-vitthal confrontation DESPERATELY !!😃

As always u r 1 unpredictable being ... I can correctly predict what might happen next for most ffs in here ...but this 1 ,its simply impossible.

Initially i used to try ... but then failed each time as u came up with something super hatke.

Now toh i have stopped trying & prefer waiting for ur updates😆😆

Do continue sooner than the soonest ... i wanna read more & more & more

MARUSHKAA

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sampa79

@sampa79

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#967

Superb update

Eagerly waiting for next update

try to update soon

thanks for PM

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#968

Oh my! Vish. .. This is awesome . You are the mystery queen. James Patterson, Mary Higgins Clark and Frederick Forsyth all rolled into one. I was biting my nails in tension throughout the update and you left us in cliffhanger. How do you always know where to stop? Truly brilliant my dear! You are too good.

Raghav wanting to tell Kamala about Kalpi 's innocence. But Pakya stopped him as Raghav doesn't have any clues yet and she won't believe him. Doesn't he know that even if it's thousand against Pakhi, Kamala will support Pakhi only. Like Kalpi, even I think she never loved Kalpi. Vithal overheard Raghav - Pakya conversation and is guilt ridden now. Though he has loved her , he never supported Kalpi and believed what others said. He should have believed in her. So I don't think Kalpi should forgive them but I know how much she misses her parents, especially dad. So maybe for her, you can make her forgive them. But not before they suffer little.

Sammy is at last about to find Sheetal , hopefully. Raghav is confused seeing Kalpi at the Kapoors house. Will he seek answers? Loved how Kalpi made Prem come out of his trauma on seeing his dad's death. Also how she comforted Maria and then Prem -Maria scene too. All three have formed a good bond between them. Did this Pakhi had to butt in now? I think she's here to ask Prem for money to give to Sheetal. Hopefully she hasn't seen Kalpi 's phone or car . But Kalpi needs to be back to her vicious self to get back at Pakhi.

Kudos to you for your excellent writing 👏 . Keep up the good job dear. 🤗, my special only for you!

Edited by ragna_luv - 10 years ago

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@.Del.ici.ous.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#969

I m in love wid this ff
Raghav is torn i think
Pata nhi Paakhi in logon ko dekh na le

Waiting waiting

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#970

Heyyllooo senior..😉😛

Reallyyy wenever I read this ff.. I feel lyk I'm reading sum suspense full of story or CID epi lol😆

Its vryyy intrestnggg to read.. and pakya's reason to stop raghav was justified n I'm sumhw happy dat nw vittal has cum to know d truth abt kalpi.. I want to u to forgive vittal w/o punishing him much (if he s punished much wat ll be d diff btw her n enemies) bt don't leave kamla😡 n don't even forgive her its my sincere request!

I hope raghav won't MU kalpi dis tym wen things r getting well.. kalpi comfortng prem was good n emotional too.. and nw wat s pakhi's plan ya wat s she upto nw.. curious to know wat happens next..

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