The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10

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Baljodh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#711

awesome update charu! do continue soon =))

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sharanya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#712

wow charu dear its really amazing🤗.

the way rags finding truth was awesome..

ragna ka romance ☺️☺️☺️

jealous singhania😆😆

continue soon dear😊

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ReezaZul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#713

luv ur story vmuchh...😃

plez update soonn..😃

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Neha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#714

Awesome and sensuous update. ...thanks4pm

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Kiaraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#715

Aww Charu dear! What an awesome update yaar! Totally romantic. I'm still blushing! Oh my god! I love you for this. Congrats for the 100 pages of this ff. What an amazing way to complete a century other than a ragnalicious one. 'Tum hi ho ' completes it. Can't think of any other song to describe their romance. Even when I hear the song somewhere I always think of ragna and not the actors of the movie. It's a perfect song for them.

This revenge thing sounds dangerous. Hope ragna doesn't get hurt in the process and Raghav will be able to solve it in a legal way. Loved how Kalpi gave him head massage sensing his tension. Her touch is enough to ease his pain and problems. Kalpi is keeping teej fast for Raghav. Loved how Kalpi waited for Raghav to enter the bus with baited breath. Sammy the trusted confidante has done it again. How sneakily he let Raghav sit next to her. Sonal has noticed ragna, I'm sure she will come to the conclusion that there's something between them. I love jealous Raghav, he's so irresistible. He didn't like it when Piyush sat next to Kalpi and later when he danced with her. Maybe being a man he was able to gauge his thoughts. He's going to keep his sexy wife away from all prying eyes.

The waterfall and rain romance was awesome. They finally got some alone time after long. Passion scorching between them both, he kept showering her with kisses all over her. It was so hot ! He couldn't resist his wet and sexy wife. How sweet of him to observe fast along with her and then fed her after the pooja. Gauri feels bad for them but can't forego her quest for revenge. All in all a fabulous update . Love you 🤗

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chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#716

Guys, did some minor improvements in the language and rectified mistakes; added one sentence which I had missed accidentally. It is when Sonal asks a question to Kalpi about her fast.Sorry for inconvenience. 😭

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sampa79

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Posted: 10 years ago

#717

Wonderful update

Loved ragna rain romance

Update soon next part

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Natasha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#718

I like that Raghav finally have a break through in his father case. It may not be much but its a start. Kalpi sensing her hubby tension and working to eased it was amazing. I love the understanding that RagNa shares. They understood each other feelings without a spoken word. Raghav trying to score with kalpi is always fun😳. Kalpi getting all doll up for her Teej festival is nice.

RagNa staring at each other while their hearts do all the talking while going to their trip was so romantic. Omg!! This Peeyush wouldn't leave Kalpi alone much to Raghav displeasure lol

Love jealous Raghav why should he be the one to have all the liberties and not Kalpi 😛 Making him jealous even without any intention wouldn't hurt.

RagNa romance in the pond under the waterfalls and then in the rain is simply magical

I totally love it. Super duper awesome update

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chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#719

Originally posted by: sugandhii
Res😉 again mee😆
Unres
Ohk... nyc one
Well raghav finds a clue n sahil kapur shares wala part was gud... but for dis update I want to talk about Ragna only..
Her sexy dress... their eye talk... Raghav's jealousy👏 n that peeyush😡 stay away 4m Mrs singhania u pig😡 n thn
Waterfall romance😳 again tum hi ho... 😳😳 he doesn't leaves a single chance to touch her...😆 n then d...😳 ahem ahem gud one...👏
Vry nyc update👏 a complete ragnalicious update...
N yes congrats for completing 100 pgs😊

Yes you again.😆 😛 n I loved it. 😃 Tum Hi Ho, like I said in some other thread. I am obsessed with the combination of Ragna+Tum Hi Ho! I miss it so much that I end up using it in my FFs regularly. I hope you people don't get bored of it.😛 I am glad you liked jealpous Raggav, though I am really very poor in showing jealous emotions! I m trying my best to show it properly as I too want it. 😃 Thank you dear for your beautiful comment and also for your wishes for completing 100 pages. 😃 🤗

Originally posted by: Chin2_n
Jealousy Raghav was very well portrayed and i liked there lil time sneaking away frm there colleagues😆, very well written chahat👏

Btw congrats for completing 100 pages and hope you to cross many more hundreds😛

Thanks dear. I am glad you liked jealous Raghav and their alone time. Thanks for your wishes for completion of 100 pages too. 😃

Originally posted by: Anjinie
amazing, just wondering if sonli is catching on with Kalpi and Raghav, looking forward to the next update to know what sahil is up to

Thanks sweets. I'll try showing something about Sonal in next update. 😊

Originally posted by: foram.
wow update was so romantic...
loved rain romance...

Thank you dear forum 😃

Originally posted by: eishe10
Wonderful update!! Love the RAGNA moments. 😉

Thanks! 😃

Originally posted by: priya_remix
Chaaaruuu!!! suppa long suppa hawttt and suppa romantic update yaaar!!!! Oh my me still blushing!!!!
Love you for this update!!

Prriya thank you so much dear. 😊 This was 100 pages completion special update, that's why longer and hotter. 😆😃 Love you too.

Originally posted by: sunyy
So so awesome. Rags jealousy was so nice. And loved how kalpi gave it to rags for having 2nd wife. Continue soon. And omg how hawt was ragna moment 😳

Thanks sunny. Glad you liked jealous Raghav and Kalpi's reaction part; and Ragna moments. 😃

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chahat4u

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Posted: 10 years ago

#720

Originally posted by: DiVirgo
Congrats babes!!
Aweosme update as usual 😉 clearly that police died becasue he found out some clue that would lead to Sahil's invlovemnet in the murder of rags father!! Its seems as though police is involved with Sahil and murder!!
Loved how you made rags jealous 😉 oh and that scene by the waterfall is just sensuous 😉 love it!! Rags is so caring he also had nothing to eat when he realized that Kalpi was fasting!! And it was to sweet him feeding her for her to break her fast!! Sonal sure did notice something between both!! Can't wait to see how you reveal Ragnas marriage fact to her!! Or will she figure it out 😉 this investigation is dangerous! I hope police catches Sahil before he intends to do any harm to rags or Kalpi!! Awesome update again charu!! Loving it 😉

Thanks Di. 😃🤗 Police is involved, and how this is not much secret. But still I'll try to clear everything in further updates. You loved jealous Raghav? I hope you love him further too, as I am gonna make him more jealous by introducing one more person. 😉 only problem I don't know how to show jealous emotions.😆 Glad you liked sweet Raghav too, without sweetness love is tasteless na. Sonal's doubts track shall be shown soon. 😛Thanks di for your lovely feedback.😊😃😳

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