The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10

First Previous

Page

105

Next Last

Frequent Posters

chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: Shivanie05
Wow another amazing update I was eagerly waiting for this one of my favorite FF I just love the way Kalpi was muttering her concern that Rags can marry Pakhi and she can't even dance with another guy lol I think she's as equally jealous as her husband. I know u r busy but please when u get some time update again.

Thank you Shivani, one of my most loyal readers! Sorry for keeping you waiting. Well next update's outline is ready I just have to write it. let's see when can I do that. I will try to do it sooner. 😊 I am glad you loved Kalpi's muttering part too. 😊

Originally posted by: sweet1308
Lovely update t good ragna moment

Thanks dear. 😊

Originally posted by: sumasridhar
Cahat I loved ragz teej n also the romance under fall wow yaar I want to b in kalpus plce

LOL. I guess each one of us won't mind to be in Kalpi's place anyday. ☺️ I will happily do that. 😆😛 Thank you for your sweet feedback. 😊

Originally posted by: niru04
Awesome update di.ragna moments lovely.looking forward next part.update soon

Thanks dear.😊 I'll try to update next part soon. 😊

Originally posted by: appyK
Congo on completing 100 pages🥳
May we all get a second thread very soon..😃
Fabulous update as always... Poor Raghav first of all peeyush guy is getting on his nerves and the kalpi where's such dress that bechaare ke self control ki band baj jaaye ...😆 Also loved kalpi saying that Rags can have second marriage and she can't even talk to a guy😆
Revenge plan is also great...
Continue soon..

Thank you Arpita darling for your feedback and 100pages special wishes.😃 🤗 LOL, yes Raghav couldn't control himself any longer, glad you liked those parts! 😉 I'll try to continue soon.😃

Originally posted by: rythmicrhea
Awesome upate charu ... Worth all the wait n u r amazibg writer .

Aww...Thank you so much dear. 😃🤗

Quote

chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: aanchal57
Fabulous update dear...Congo once again 4 completion of 100 pages...this update was perfect 4 completing 100 pages...I loved raghav how he didn't eat,when he came 2 knw abt kalpi fast...when vl raghav get evidence against kapoors,eagerly w8ng...I always love jealousy factor...make raghav jealous more so dat he reveal his love 4 kalpi nd deir marriage...u knw I was blushing throughout this update u knw na its my copy ryt...when It was littlebit mature,I was reading it in serious mod bt I liked it...
Ioved ur update continue soon nd plzzz torture poo asap...

Thank you Aanchu. I tried making it special since it was on completion of 100pages. Hope you enjoyed it, and I know you do not like serious passionate moments. Sorry if you didn't like it. I tried showing Raghav's sweet and jealous side, glad you liked it. n yes, blushing is your copyright only.😆😳 I'll try to update soon, 😃😊

Originally posted by: vasishna
Res!!!
Unres
Wowww charu.. it was an awesumm one n u always make us blush lyk a idiots lol..😳😆
And it was too sensous one! it was kind off good to read jealousy raghav 😛 and d song u always put it with it s jus Simply superbbb..

Thank you Vasishna. 😃 I hope you love blushing.😃😛 I'll take that as a compliment. 😃 🤗 Glad you loved jealous Raghav and the addition of song too! 😳 Thank you very much. 😃

Originally posted by: shikha-aggarwal
Awesome update!!!!

Thanks Shikha.😊

Originally posted by: Rupalpanchotiya
superbbb update..plzzz update next part soon..

Thank you dear. I will try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: jiya007
Nice Update

Thanks.😊

Originally posted by: zindgidilse
Awesome update charu..
finally raghav has a lead regarding his dad's murder case..after that in office kalpi doing his head massage nd he asked "what happened to the promise-no romance in the office" loved his this line..
then he told her everthing about his meeting with dgp nd acp..nd kalpi assured him for his win..superb.
wow..ragna romance☺️ ..kalpi kept teej fast nd Raghav is unware of her fast nd getting restless on seen kalpana avoiding food nd liquid as well..
romance under waterfall Was awesome..☺️

Thank you so much Ritu.😊🤗 Thanks for mentioning that line said by Raghav 😳 Your comment is as always very special and you have not left out any details. Loved it. 😃 🤗 ❤️

Originally posted by: Rakapaul
hi charu frist of all happy b'day I know I'm quite late my appologies &the update asusal nice & hot . My my u r getting nauthier day by day but I must say i liked it & congrats on completing 100th pages kudoos to u & I hope u cross many hundred pages.

Hey thank you so much for the birthday wishes and the feedback dear. 😃 Hope you don't mind naughtier updates, as when I write it I don't realise it has ended up becoming so naughty. 😆😳 Thanks for wishes for completion of 100pages too 😃 🤗

Originally posted by: spontaneousmini
heyy Charu,
Lovely update. The beginning is of coz necessary for the story to move fwd. SO yes, that was a nice description of the police enquiry and then Sahil's turntable..

But, I am here to tell you how much I loved the Ragna scenes. Kalpi in that beautiful skirt and spagetti top, waterfall romance, the making out.. Ufff!!
Irresistible and so ragnalicious.
Beautiful update.

Hey Mini dear, thank you so much. I am glad you loved Ragna romance. 😃 🤗

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: -HeyJude-
awesome update charu! do continue soon =))

Thanks so much dear. 😃 I will try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: aryagr
Waiting 4 next update.

I'll try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: sharanya0011
wow charu dear its really amazing🤗.
the way rags finding truth was awesome..
ragna ka romance ☺️☺️☺️
jealous singhania😆😆
continue soon dear😊

Thank you Sharan. 🤗 I am glad you loved jealous Raghav abd Ragna romance. I'll try to update asap. 😊

Originally posted by: ReezaFathi
luv ur story vmuchh...😃

plez update soonn..😃

Thank you very-very much dear. 🤗 I wi;l try to update it soon.

Originally posted by: Asyalover
Awesome and sensuous update. ...thanks4pm

Thanks dear for your sweet feedback. 😊

Originally posted by: sampa79
Wonderful update
Loved ragna rain romance
Update soon next part

Thanks you. I am glad you liked it. 😃 I will try to update it soon, 😊

Quote

chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: ragna_luv
Aww Charu dear! What an awesome update yaar! Totally romantic. I'm still blushing! Oh my god! I love you for this. Congrats for the 100 pages of this ff. What an amazing way to complete a century other than a ragnalicious one. 'Tum hi ho ' completes it. Can't think of any other song to describe their romance. Even when I hear the song somewhere I always think of ragna and not the actors of the movie. It's a perfect song for them.
This revenge thing sounds dangerous. Hope ragna doesn't get hurt in the process and Raghav will be able to solve it in a legal way. Loved how Kalpi gave him head massage sensing his tension. Her touch is enough to ease his pain and problems. Kalpi is keeping teej fast for Raghav. Loved how Kalpi waited for Raghav to enter the bus with baited breath. Sammy the trusted confidante has done it again. How sneakily he let Raghav sit next to her. Sonal has noticed ragna, I'm sure she will come to the conclusion that there's something between them. I love jealous Raghav, he's so irresistible. He didn't like it when Piyush sat next to Kalpi and later when he danced with her. Maybe being a man he was able to gauge his thoughts. He's going to keep his sexy wife away from all prying eyes.
The waterfall and rain romance was awesome. They finally got some alone time after long. Passion scorching between them both, he kept showering her with kisses all over her. It was so hot ! He couldn't resist his wet and sexy wife. How sweet of him to observe fast along with her and then fed her after the pooja. Gauri feels bad for them but can't forego her quest for revenge. All in all a fabulous update . Love you 🤗

Wow...Kiara you made my day with such a long and sweet comment. 😃 🤗 Thanks for your wishes for 100pages completion too. 😃 Yes, I could not think of any other way to mark it, or maybe I am not innovative/creative enough. Tum Hi Ho song as fixed in my and other Ragnaians mind as well I am sure; and we only associate it with Ragna. You are right I too can't imagine/visualise original actors of the movie too in this song. It is only Ragna/Ashna with which I can associate this song with. It is perfect for them, seems to be made for them only. 😃 I hope you people don't get bored by my repeated usage of this song. 😆😳

There were many kinds of moments in this update between Ragna, from care, understanding, to passion, sweetness, etc. I am glad you and others liked it. Yes, Raghav can understand and read in Peeyush and others eyes that they are attracted towards his sexy wife. But in Peeyush eyes he reads something more, and that makes him even more jealous, possessive. I hope you continue to like a jealous Raghav since I don't know how to show it. i will try my best to portray it nicely. Did you really like hot Ragna moments? Hope it was tasteful. Thanks once again for your superb, sweet comment; Love you too. 😃 🤗

Edited by chahat4u - 10 years ago

Quote

Aanchu

@aanchuxoxo

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#725

No dear I liked bt I was little bit uncomfortable little bit okk...bt still I liked it...hahahahaha blushing copy ryt

Quote

chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#726

Originally posted by: ...Natasha...
I like that Raghav finally have a break through in his father case. It may not be much but its a start. Kalpi sensing her hubby tension and working to eased it was amazing. I love the understanding that RagNa shares. They understood each other feelings without a spoken word. Raghav trying to score with kalpi is always fun😳. Kalpi getting all doll up for her Teej festival is nice.
RagNa staring at each other while their hearts do all the talking while going to their trip was so romantic. Omg!! This Peeyush wouldn't leave Kalpi alone much to Raghav displeasure lol

Love jealous Raghav why should he be the one to have all the liberties and not Kalpi 😛 Making him jealous even without any intention wouldn't hurt.

RagNa romance in the pond under the waterfalls and then in the rain is simply magical

I totally love it. Super duper awesome update

Thank you Natasha. A thorough, detailed comment once again n I love it like always. 🤗 I am glad you liked different shades of Ragna relation/love in this update. 😃 Well, you may actually see an even more jealous Raghav in future. If I am successful in portraying it nicely that is! Love you. 😊😃❤️

Quote

chahat4u

@chahat4u

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#727

Originally posted by: aanchal57
No dear I liked bt I was little bit uncomfortable little bit okk...bt still I liked it...hahahahaha blushing copy ryt

Thank you dear. ❤️🤗

Quote

sonali

@S0nalii

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#728

superb update charu😳
love d way u r making rags revenge widout gving pain to kalpi. I knw ragna are lving seperate bt atleast he is nt ignring her n making her hurt.
Ragna ofice scene is superb. Kalpi undstnd rags is in tension n she is trying to easy it. Undstnding kalpi's situation seeing her husbnd in tensioo rags try to tease her for making her relax dat too in tense is touching.
Trip ws amazing. Kalpi's attire is classy. Kalpi put teej fast n aftr knwing it rags also didnt eat anything hw romantic.
Water sequence n teasing section of kalpi is awsm. Superb dear.

Quote

ButterflyChaser

@ButterflyChaser

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#729

OMG.. how I forgot to comment on such super duper update. It was super hot and romantic... Kalpi's dress was awesome... Rachu will look awesome in such dress.

Raghav is jealous of piyush.. Well i m surprised that how can't Kalpi understand the feelings Piyush has for him as I feel girl's 6th sense is super active in such things.. i guess she has never paid attention to him and his talks..

I still feel that Sonali will be the 1st one to know about RagNa relationship.

Gauri is feeling guilty for the mess in RagNa'a life .. still revenge is imp for her. Kalpi is a perfect dil n wife who kept the fast.

N finally a lead to Raghav regarding his father's murder case... Did i ever tell u that i like such detection stories.. i am looking forward it and want Rags to find the truth soon.