The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10 - Page 67

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi dear nice update but why didn't u pm me pls pm me next time all ur updates pls. 😒
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update charu
rags called pakhi to say sory 4 his nxt plan bt cut cl asap widout hearing her 3 magical words 😆
kalpi's presentation is amazing. He he rags naugtiness start in confrence rum as well. Love ragna scene.
Peeyush sharma start liking kalpi 😲 oh no hope der is mu hpn in future cz of dis guy.
Superb update.

P.s. No worries charu if u nt repying to evry1, we r hpy u r reading our cment. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ragna_luv

Lovely update Charu dear! Pakhi still in dreamland thinking that Rags love her. Dumb girl! Come out of the dreamy world, girl! Raghav just wanted to do damage control so that Pakhi doesn't suspect. The silent conversation happened between ragna was awesome. Raghav is so proud of his wife. Piyush, another admirer of Kalpi. Rags is gonna have a tough time of he don't announce it to the world that she's his wife. The romance in the conference room was lovely. I was in lala...la land for some time and forgot that I had to comment 😉 Poor Sammy, he's the official lookout. Give him a girlfriend yaar. How much will you make him suffer? Raghav has noticed that Piyush is interested in Kalpi. Now that she told him he has offered her friendship, what will be his reaction? He has to be jealous. It's high time he gets a taste of his own medicine. Hope now he understands how Kalpi feels when she sees him with Pakhi.


Thank you Kiara.😊 Yes Raghav only wanted to do damage control. As for Peeyush, he can definitely make things interesting for readers or a headache. LOL. For the time being he may help in giving Raghav a reality check and a taste of his own medicine, like you said. 😃 I am glad you liked the conference room romance, especially since I am hardly feeling anything related to romance these days to give the same vibes to my readers LOL. So, I am skeptical when i write any romantic scene these days! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Rakapaul

hi dear nice update but why didn't u pm me pls pm me next time all ur updates pls. 😒


Hi. Thanks dear. As for PM, I am sorry! 😭Maybe it was a mistake as I'd updated it quite late in night, so I may have missed out your name accidentally.I'll PM you next time pakka se.😊🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shonali164

amazing update charu
rags called pakhi to say sory 4 his nxt plan bt cut cl asap widout hearing her 3 magical words 😆
kalpi's presentation is amazing. He he rags naugtiness start in confrence rum as well. Love ragna scene.
Peeyush sharma start liking kalpi 😲 oh no hope der is mu hpn in future cz of dis guy.
Superb update.

P.s. No worries charu if u nt repying to evry1, we r hpy u r reading our cment. 😳


Thank you so much Shonali for your understanding and for detailed feedback 😃 ❤️🤗 Peeyush's role maybe clearer in next updates, though right now he is quite harmless and not meant to do any serious damage in Ragna relation. 😊😃😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update charu...
raghav and khi talk was🤢 coz i cant imagine them together neither in serial nor in any ff...🤢
presentation was good...sgc got the contract and that too coz of our kalpi...lovely...
confrence room romance...atleast writer like u are fufiling our desire of ragna romance☺️
kabab mein haddi aane wali hai piyush naam ki😆...our raghav is getting possessive...
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey charu this is the first time m giving feedback on this story evn though m an ardent reader of it 😊 i know u hve so many readers to gve u feedback to comment on ur updates still m sorry dear 😕 m too lazy to comment ...😃
anyway the marriage story is one of my fav. ff . u hve grt potential to convert ur thoughts into significant words . i just love rghv nd klpi's life aftr marriage in spite of the fact dat they r not living wid ech other . Naughty ,grumpy , irritated , frustrated raghv caused by a discrepancy between his desired nd achieved lvl of s_ _ _ _ _l activity due to his promise to kalpi . poor samy 😆 raghv has convrtd him into a watchman 😆 .

good job babe 👏 i m loving it 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh gosh this Pakhi is playing hard to get
I like how fast Raghav wrapped up their conversation lol
Kalpi as usual dazzled everyone with her brilliance. Like her hubby I am very proud of her
Without the name Singhania attached to her name Kalpi is making a name for herself. She prove she can do excellent things all by herself ;)
Love the way everyone admire her. Love RagNa eye talk
Poor sammy he has to be RagNa watchman lol
Love their romance, Raghav is too smart
I like how he come up with something different all the time and not break Kalpi promise but still romance with her lol... Look like Raghav have competition ;) jealous Raghav will be fun
Super duper awesome update
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Posted: 10 years ago
heyyllooo charu..
wahhh it was Superbbb n sooo romantic yaar.. and u write romantic updates so well n I lyk it a Lot..
I dunno whether to be sad or should laugh at sammy's position hahahha.. ragna romance tho chaltha hi rahega.. and peeyush s interested in kalpi.. I hope he won't be dat much problem to our ragna.. totally I njyd reading it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Charu, As always lovely update. 👏 This FF is so real with RagNas feeling just as we feel when we r in love. U have the right word for any particular situation such as when RagNa was enjoying their 15 mins, Sammy was asking for a girlfriend too😉. Rags just deletes Pakhis msg coz he has better things to do like thinking about his loving wife Kalpi & reviving the beautiful moments of the day. Your story is just PERFECT, nothing to add or delete. Now Im curious to know about Mr Peeyush part in this FF, how will he approach Kalpi and I cant wait to see Rags getting insane with him that maybe getting him transferred or... well its up to you, coz jealousy knows no bounds.
Plz dont 4get to PM me for new updates.
Edited by singhania - 10 years ago

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