The Marriage Story: Ragna FF; Part-23, Part-24(Edited) Pg-131, 31/10

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Shivanie Ramballie

@Shivanie05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Amazing writing my darling just love the way Rags handle the newspaper situation and Pakie I am so addicted to this story now I can't wait for u to update again

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: shonali164
amazing update.
Charu lv u n ha batty m taking back my katty. 🤗
finaly smart rags back, love the way he playing wid kapoor's wid their own trick. And yes he make dumb paki more dumb 😆
love kalpi today. Her words make rags strong as well as he realise wat he is doing is nt gud bt still his kalpi is wid him.
Love vithal kalpi convo n undstnding btwn dem.
Wow ragna dnr momen is so lvly though its small bt touching.
N finaly paper fiasco sorted, gr8.
Superb n such long update. Lv it.

Thanks Shonali for loving the entire update, for the Batty too. 😃 Glad you are loving this Raghav and Kalpi's actions and words too. 😊 🤗

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: dimpleagar
nice update...dellusional queen Poo shud get superbb shock😆 in future...
still wondering how CVs of EMA created a char lyk Poo...wht kind of brain thy have
that last part apology thing is too gud...loved it.😊

Thanks Dimple. 😊 Glad you loved the last part. 😃

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: lolor
nice update...

Thanks. 😊

Originally posted by: yadanu
wonderful updates

Thank you so much. 😃😊

Originally posted by: _TheBlackRose_
Awesome update... Do Update soon...

Thank you dear. 😊 I will try to update soon. 😊

Originally posted by: sunyy
Awesome so glad kalpi is doing what she is doing. Waiting for next update eagerly

Thanks. I am relieved, happy and glad that you loved Kalpi's behaviour and actions. 😃 I'll try to update next part soon. 😊 ❤️

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vyshuu..

@vyshuu..

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Heyyylooo charu..

Update tho as usuall masth aur fantastic hai..

I lykd all d cute n small incidents u used in d ff which I lyk a lot.. Lyk d concern fr each other hurt n feelings n d kiss which means no one can care him lyk her.. even these little things matters a lot! And abt pakhi she s always dumb!

nw even vittal got a hint behind d newspaper scenario.. so I guess he can undrstnd ragna's situatn further.. and kamla I dnt even care her..

and our kalpi s punishing herself n raghav.. bt I lykd d scene wer u mentioned dat she need to correct raghav n shldnt let further generatns to suffer.. bt I hope dey won't be far fr too longgg..

and last the news.. which states indirectly abt kalpi.. I'm glad abt it..

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: sumasridhar
Cahat I dnt understand y kalpi left ragz when thy r souly met WD each other n even after published apology in paper also don't get me wrong as I'm thinking ther vll b less rsgna romance incoming updt

Hello dear. Kalpi is leaving Raghav's house because she wants him to accept his responsibility that he had taken a wrong step by having fake marriage with Pakhi. He not only broke Kalpi's trust to some extent; but he is also playing with someone's emotions. She does not want Raghav to break Pakhi's heart the way he has planned. If Raghav still accepts his mistake and tells Pakhi about it now, she will be hurt and broken yes; but it will be less damaging. He can still makeup with time, for what he was about to damage, his friendly relations with Pakhi, Kalpi and her Aai's relations with Pakhi, and above a ll a chance to build a better, secure future will be safer.

As for romance, I have thought of something, let's hope I am able to do justice to it. 😊

Charu

Edited by chahat4u - 11 years ago

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chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: Shivanie05
Amazing writing my darling just love the way Rags handle the newspaper situation and Pakie I am so addicted to this story now I can't wait for u to update again

I am at peace and relieved now with these words. 😊 So glad you liked that whole scenario. I will try to update it soon enough. 😃😊 Thank you for encouraging words Shivani. 🤗 ❤️

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chahat4u

@chahat4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: vasishna
Heyyylooo charu..
Update tho as usuall masth aur fantastic hai..
I lykd all d cute n small incidents u used in d ff which I lyk a lot.. Lyk d concern fr each other hurt n feelings n d kiss which means no one can care him lyk her.. even these little things matters a lot! And abt pakhi she s always dumb!
nw even vittal got a hint behind d newspaper scenario.. so I guess he can undrstnd ragna's situatn further.. and kamla I dnt even care her..
and our kalpi s punishing herself n raghav.. bt I lykd d scene wer u mentioned dat she need to correct raghav n shldnt let further generatns to suffer.. bt I hope dey won't be far fr too longgg..
and last the news.. which states indirectly abt kalpi.. I'm glad abt it..

Hello Vasishna,

Tumhe nahi pata ki tumhara aur baki readers ka detailed feedback kitna important aur achchha lagta hai mujhe ya kisi bhi writer ko. 😊 Thanks for giving your opinion on each and everything as that tells me which thing was liked and which was not liked so much. 😃😊

Thanks for mentioning about that Kalpi convo and the news also. 😃 ❤️

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Cinderella

@Cinderella81

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#429

Love the understanding and concern between Raghav and Kalpi, apology note was superb but delusion queen will conclude what she thinks only, Raghav also very smartly used the word may be he knows that Pakhi won't come out of delusion. .

Awesome👏 update.

Waiting for next update.

Update soon.